UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Update
Past - Maan does not believe in love yet now in the present he is inlove with his family
part 1 is very interesting we are actually seeing two different man called Maan
the precap is also intriguing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc start
waiting for next
how maan changes from rude to loving
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1
awesome...
nice one...
so Maan and Geet are married and now they are having a baby...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely concept n awesome update
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lovly startd .. Continue soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations on the new story 😊
waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm...awesum start! well written! Past n present well incorporated!
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RECAP



PAST



Maan immediately freed himself from her embrace and said,"Love is for fools,who want to sacrifice themselves!They think that love is a beautiful poem in which they float listening to his partners heartbeat but dont fool me Ahana!Dont ever fool me!Do u understand?Now as a contract u r my sexual partner so make me busy with ur s**pertise!"Maan pulled Ahana towards him and pulled the blanket from her naked body and collapsed on the bed.After sometime he entered once again inside her making her moan painfully and this time tears rolled down from her eyes.



PRESENT



Maan's eyes become once again moist and he took the baby in his arms.The baby immediately find solace as it was her dada.He looked at it in awe seeing her snuggling to his warmth.He chuckled,"She is ur xerox copy!Look she's snuggling to me,she recognises her dada!"Geet nodded seeing her angel feeling comfortable with her dada.Maan kissed baby's forehead and said,"I will always love u angel!"Geet admired his love,no matter he was a dark and private man.But he always asked love from his surroundings which he got from Geet.He enjoyed his daughter's company who was all the way cutely dozing on her dada's chest.



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PART 02



PRESENT



After bearing the labor pain,Geet was tired so she was dozing off when she felt some restlessness as if someone sat beside her who's not friendly to her.She opened her eyes and looked around and turned to her right side to get a man sitting beside her holding her baby.She blinked and her face turned into horror to see a man of abt 28 yrs smirking at her holding her baby.She immediately got up and said,"Vikram!"
















Vikram smirked and saw her daughter who was all the way sleeping peacefully in his arms.Vikram stroked her cheeks softly and said harshly,"Not bad,Mrs.Khurana!I thought u to be a lousy lay and frigid,but u proved me wrong!"Geet try to take her daughter from him for which he held her far away from her reach when he asked his next question,"Am surprised that after Maan's condition,i dint thought,he's gonna become father,or u r one s**t who is cheating MSK too!Seriously,u never gave ur virtue to me since i was ur boyfriend but u gave a baby to Maan though u knew that he was sterile?"Geet barked,"Dont u dare talk to me like that!U never was a boyfriend to me,u wanted to become a f**k buddy to me and make me as ur s** slave so that i always salvate ur hunger with s**!Get off the high horse Vikram and leave me to myself!"















Vikram laughed mirthlessly which made Geet's daughter to wake up and she sniffed softly.Geet's heart lurched hearing her whimper and tried to take her when Vikram mocked her daughter and said,"Poor peanut is crying!Sob! Sob! U know ur mom's boyfriend peanut?"On that time Geet glared at his disgusting behaviour and snarled,"Get out before my husband comes,or else he will sue u to the coffin!"Vikram spoke menacingly,"Damn for u husband!He has enough messed with my life!Am not gonna leave him now!Ur daughter is so beautiful,just like u!Am gonna make her like me!"Vikram was abt to beat her on her head when he heard the footsteps.Maan entered inside addressing Geet,"Geet,doc has said all clear to go home!U r gonna be discharged in few...!"Maan froze to death seeing Vikram holding his daughter.
















Vikram smirked when he spoke,"What r u doing with my daughter u a**hole?"Vikram smirked,"Language Khurana,or else ur daughter learns too!"Maan snarled,"U give back my daughter to her mother and get the hell out of here!"Vikram said,"Is she ur daughter Khurana,or others which u r proudly boasting in front of this world?"Maan warned,"Get out!"Vikram smirked and was abt to speak when he was hardly punched on his nose which bled profusely and in swift moment the baby was snatched by Maan and was held protectively inside his chest.Vikram saw his empty hand and launched on Maan when Maan held his throat glaring back at him and pushing him against the wall.Geet was shocked to see his anger and said painfully,"Maan!"
















Maan said angrily still squeezing his throat,"Jaan,i know that u want to leave him but i cant tolerate that he kept his hands on my angel!"Geet said,"Maan,phone the police,let him be humiliated in front of the people and his father.He's all the way covering up his son's ass for the bigger dream but let him see the fact that his son Vikram Malhotra is so gentleman to come to the hospital and threaten the daughter-in-law of Khuranas by holding their heir on his hands!"Maan asked with horror,"He threatened u?No one has the guts to bad eye Khuranas and he threaten u?Damn!"Maan immediately put his angel inside Geet's lap gently and dragged him from his neck and immediately dialled to press.
















Vikram was all the way dragged in front of the hospital staff and made an announcement that the Vikram was trying to kill MSK's daughter.Vikram swore so many words in front of the media who captured the video and it was broadcasted in the TV's with more spices.Maan had took care of everything and he was guarded by his bodyguard who was all the way guarding him and his family from press.After this fiasco,Geet and angel came home when they got their family phones asking abt the incident.Maan answered them that Geet and the angel is well and no harm was done.

















At night Maan was rubbing his daughter's back when she started crying continuously.Maan got panic seeing her big fat tears and screamed towards Geet,"Geet,look at my angel she's crying!"Geet got up and said softly,"Maan calm down,she's hungry!Give her to me!"Maan gave her to Geet and she opened her first two button of her gown and wrapped her legs and made her angel to sleep on her lap and stuffed her nipple inside her soft small mouth.When she was stuffed with nipple then she started sucking hungrily.While Maan saw his angel in awe.He never saw this sight before and he felt pure seeing this sight and tears poured down.





PAST





Next morning,Maan moved from Ahana who was sleeping holding him peacefully.Maan got up and walked towards the washroom not even glancing towards her.After sometime Ahana stirred and opened her eyes to get the bed empty and cold.She moved and wrapped herself inside the sheet when she saw the washroom door opening and Maan walking wrapped in only towel and wet.Ahana feasted her eyes by moving it on his greek god body which he moved freely in front of the mirror drying his hair with his another towel.Before Ahana speak Maan spoke rather harshly,"Ahana,u r free my contract!"Ahana was shocked and asked,"Why?"Maan said rather harshly,"U r thinking of marrying me becoz u love me but i cant.I cant love u and even if i love u i cant give u any family!So u r free to go!"Ahana was shocked with the new revelation and asked,"We can take doctors help if u think so like that but Maan i love u so much!"Maan snarled,"Am not going to doctor and i would rather not be reproduced.Am a magnet to sins and i have sterlized myself at my 21st year!I dint have wish to extend my family so i sterlized myself and u expect me to give family which am rather not interested.If u r interested in the arrangements like now then i wont have any problem.But if u think me as like that then am sorry,u r free to go!"















Ahana was shocked to hear this that he took this biggest step at his younger age and as he saw the greek god beautiful body then she realised that how many sins were hiding inside that beautiful body.Ahana had had enough and at once decided to let go as she wanted to be as the mother of the two children not of any adoption or stay like this and said,"Am going Maan!"Maan nodded and said,"U will get good amount from me from my secretary!"Ahana glared at him but dint speak abt it anything as she walked towards the washroom holding her discarded clothes.


















Maan walked back to his car and sat and drove to an abandoned place where he stopped his car and got off and took a cigarette and lit it and inhaled the smoke calming his nerves. He remembered a girl sleeping in the blood pool and he getting the news that he has lost the baby and she no longer can become mother.His sins had made him decide to sterlize himself and today he was not worried about anything.

















On that time he got a phone reminding that he's an guest of honour in some orphanage where he had contributed a large amount for the welfare of the children.Maan got into the the car and drove towards the KM when he got the phone from his secretary that he has been sent an dissertation proposal in Bhaasa poet of Sanskrit.He was expert in Bhaasa & Kaalidasa's works and he got 10 doctoral students though he was working in construction field as a main profession.He was assisting it as his father Siddharth was running the university.

















His father dint know abt his daily life as he was the adopted son.Maan had always been far away from the family due to his past and sins which he committed in his young age.Mistakes which he phrases as sins.Maan Singh Khurana was a fragile boy who had lost his mother at the young age and was disowned by a father who dint accept him as his son.


















As Maan walked towards the function where he was called as guest of honour he felt ashamed of his past sins.When he saw those fragile children who were ranting the praisings abt him innocently and welcoming him sweetly made him disturbed.May be he was given the sufferance as gift by god whole life.The secretary welcomed him and said to take the seat.Maan took the seat and said to the secretary,"I dint wanted this Mr.Mishra!"Mishra dint let him speak further and quieted him with the look.Mr.Mishra was the friend of his adopted father Siddharth so Maan shut his mouth or else his anger's dragon would lift its head to fire at the man.

















When these thoughts were going on in his mind then he heard a melodious voice came from the mike for which he looked up to get an angel clad with anarkali suit singing melodiously.He saw her almond eyes which had world's innocence,her lush pink lips which were moving singing the lyrics while her milky white skin which glowed in sunlight made him mesmerised.He was agitated to feel some kind of desires and the magnetic pull towards her from him.He glared at the girl and when she finished the song then she smiled at the audience and walked past him.

















He frowned a bit when he was mesmerised with her cute smile.He looked up and saw her hugging his sister who had arrived on that time.He looked back as he was called for speech when he denied that he's not interested but sure wished the best of luck for their future to the children.Annie who sat beside him hugging him tightly said,"Bhai,the girl who sung a song now is my best friend Geet Handa from high school!"Maan nodded to his sister when she started to blabber non stop telling abt everything.Then he was called and was honoured and the function ended with the vote of thanks.







Precap-Past-"Miss Handa!"a voice came from the angry chocolate brown eyed Sanskrit professor who was glaring back at her.Geet who saw the anger in Maan lowered her head when he was agitated and said,"Am asking u a question Miss Handa!"




Present-Maan stroked his angel and burped her who was sleeping peacefully on his chest and asked Geet who was lying on the bed admiring the scene,"Jaan,what do we call her?"Geet said with immense love,"Bhoomi!"Maan looked up with shock and was about to speak when she said,"I know that u wont approve but i want her name to be Bhoomi.I know u loved her Maan though u never loved the mother of her.But still it was ur flesh and blood which was breathing inside her.I dont want u to live under guilt.When i got pregnant then i was praying that this will always be a girl and god fulfilled my wish.I want her name to be Bhoomi so that u feel her in my daughter!"Maan's tears poured down and said kissing her knuckles,"Thank u!"



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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely,awesome,fab update sweety...loved it...so happy to see maaneet's present wt there sweet cute angel.wowww maan loving her so much..aur woh vikram,,,,,,,,kamina i wanna killl him fr comin n trying to harm my maaneet;s happiness lekin thnx god shi wqt p maan came over there.he s olways thr for his jaan n their little angel...

maaan s past life was not at all gud...uff...he took such a big decision at the age of 21😕uff bad scenes...awesome precap..plzzz cont.sooon😃hats off
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovly update dr...
update soon...
need to knw abt maan's past...
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