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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 01



Delhi Hospital,Delhi



Aaah!



A lady moaned in pain.Doctor checked the ECG and said,"Nurse,bring stabilizer injection!"Nurse nodded and ran towards the store room to bring the stabilizer injection.When nurse came then a man immediately tried to catch her up but she moved faster that he stood seeing the nurse's retreating back.He was worried which was shown in body movements.He was shaky hearing the scream which was coming from the OT.He ruffled his hairs making it more messy.He sat back once again and folded his hands to pray for god.What an irony,he was the man who never prayed to god or never bend his head in front of god but today he was bending to save his angels.















The nurse walked faster inside the OT holding a tray of medicines.He saw the nurse running inside the OT and closed his eyes sitting back.After sometime he heard a sharp cry of a baby and his face split with a wide grin.Nurse came immediately outside and said with a smile,"Its a baby girl!"His lips split more wider and he asked,"And Mrs.Khurana?"Nurse said,"She's fine...she's stable now after all that complications!"He was shocked and screamed in horror,"Complications?"Nurse said smiling,"Now she's ok sir,she will be shifted to the ward.U can see her there!"He nodded and saw her transferring to the ward and he too followed her.















When he entered,he saw most serene scene,there sat his love who was holding their baby.He came towards her and saw a pink cotton ball fast asleep wrapped tightly inside a white cloth.He sat beside her and kissed her forehead and saw the baby.He moved his long fingers on her soft cheek and said,"Thank u Mrs.Khurana for this precious gift!"She said smiling showing her dimples,"U r welcome Mr.Khurana!"Then he took her lips kissing her passionately.He left her breathless and she blushed profusely.She asked,"Domineering as well Mr.Khurana?"He said,"That's never gonna change and i aged myself seeing u bearing the pain!But it vanished into thin air when i see my angel!"His eyes welled up and tears poured down.She said wiping his tears,"Maan!"He turned and said nodding no to her,"No Geet,this is of happiness,not of sadness!Thank u for coming in my life and changing me entirely,or else i would be addicted to that system and would be in darkness.Thank u for spreading ur light inside that darkness and making it brighter with this angel!"Geet said kissing his cheek,"Thanks for loving me unconditionally and making me the mother of this angel!She's ur angel and always be ur angel!"
















Maan's eyes become once again moist and he took the baby in his arms.The baby immediately find solace as it was her dada.He looked at it in awe seeing her snuggling to his warmth.He chuckled,"She is ur xerox copy!Look she's snuggling to me,she recognises her dada!"Geet nodded seeing her angel feeling comfortable with her dada.Maan kissed baby's forehead and said,"I will always love u angel!"Geet admired his love,no matter he was a dark and private man.But he always asked love from his surroundings which he got from Geet.He enjoyed his daughter's company who was all the way cutely dozing on her dada's chest.



PAST


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A man was standing naked holding his thick long length and cupping it and stroking it.A girl moaned seeing it and she came towards him.He said,"S**k!"Flexing his length and that girl took his inside her mouth.He groaned and clentched his teeth circling his hips and she more sucked his long length.She was pushed upwards and was threw to the bed forcefully.She giggled seeing his dark eyes and he immediately covered his body.He took her breasts and started sucking giving pleasure to her when his fingers were exploring her feminine parts.He groaned feeling her wetness and in swift moment he entered inside her.She moaned and adjusted to his long length.He thrusted deeper and deeper making her sore.After another round of love making they got hit the climax and they both fell on the ground.














After sometime that girl gained her composure and spoke,"Maan,am tired of this life!I cant take it anymore,especially with u!"Maan looked up and asked,"What do u mean Ahana?"Ahana said with immense love in her eyes and said,"Am in love with u Maan!"Maan's jaw tightened and he got up and said balling up his fist,"Love isnt which am aspired,so leave this love crap Ahana!"Ahana wrapped herself inside the blanket and hugged him from behind and said,"I know Maan that u dont believe in love,me too never believed in love.But love happened...and it happened with u,only u Maan!"Maan immediately freed himself from her embrace and said,"Love is for fools,who want to sacrifice themselves!They think that love is a beautiful poem in which they float listening to his partners heartbeat but dont fool me Ahana!Dont ever fool me!Do u understand?Now as a contract u r my sexual partner so make me busy with ur s**pertise!"Maan pulled Ahana towards him and pulled the blanket from her naked body and collapsed on the bed.After sometime he entered once again inside her making her moan painfully and this time tears rolled down from her eyes.






Precap



Present




Maan was rubbing his daughter's back when she started crying continuously.Maan got panic seeing her big fat tears and screamed towards Geet,"Geet,look at my angel she's crying!"Geet got up and said softly,"Maan calm down,she's hungry!Give her to me!"Maan gave her to Geet and she opened her first two button of her gown and wrapped her legs and made her angel to sleep on her lap and stuffed her nipple inside her soft small mouth.When she was stuffed with nipple then she started sucking hungrily.While Maan saw his angel in awe.He never saw this sight before and he felt pure seeing this sight and tears poured down.



Past




A melodious voice came from the mike for which he looked up to get an angel clad with anarkali suit singing melodiously.He saw her almond eyes which had world's innocence,her lush pink lips which were moving singing the lyrics while her milky white skin which glowed in sunlight made him mesmerised.


PART 02



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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part..maneet blessed with baby
in past maan is a playboy n have no trust on love..
how much he loves his family now ..so much change in him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start dear maan is awed by his angel waiting for their dark love story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo for new story👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm so his past was pretty colourful
he didnt belive in love
but now he does i think
well he must do right
awww he is in love with his baby girl
bless that is always cute right being parents and for the first time
hmmm am glad he got geet and his baby girl in his life
so what happened with ahana
she fell in love with him
and he dont believe in love
so that was it
why didnt he believe in love i wonder
and was it geet he saw
must be right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan is playboy in past but in present he love his familly very much lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan-Geet blessed with angel...Geet had some complications during pregnancy and Maan don't have any clue about these complications but thank God Geet is safe...
Man was so heartless in past but now he is in love with Geet...a man who never believed in love is now crying feeling deep love in his heart for his wife and daughter...

I am sure the girl who will be singing is Geet only...only Geet has the aura to attract and made Maan run behind her...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my god the way you had given maan and his feeling for the baby it made my day simly fab
i am feeling soo soo good for reading this update today morning
day started wih maaaneet and there angel thanks for that present is filled with hapiness and maaneet passion
past oops maan is mystery ahana?? who she is worker to saiticy him shocking that was

looking fwd for the story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new ff...
maaneet n their angel...
in past maan didnt believe in love...he was a playboy...
now he loves his geet n angel...
loved it...

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