UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Maan himself made himself sterile so that he can enjoy s*x without any repercussion...

then from where Geet gave birth to his daughter...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...

U will get to know the past clearly why he sterilized himself in future,there is the darkest past which is gonna start very soon so dont jump to conclusion!😉

Originally posted by: MaanKiNadee

lovely,awesome,fab update sweety...loved it...so happy to see maaneet's present wt there sweet cute angel.wowww maan loving her so much..aur woh vikram,,,,,,,,kamina i wanna killl him fr comin n trying to harm my maaneet;s happiness lekin thnx god shi wqt p maan came over there.he s olways thr for his jaan n their little angel...

maaan s past life was not at all gud...uff...he took such a big decision at the age of 21😕uff bad scenes...awesome precap..plzzz cont.sooon😃hats off

Dont worry u will get to know abt that very soon!😊

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely emotional cute update,... te way tat b*** vikram threatening geet and he holding my maaneet ki angel, how dare he and my maan ki punch was lovely .. te way my maan making his life hell was lovely..te way my maan admiring his angel feding his princess and his fatherhood was lovely emotional..in past, my maan ki life and te way he have made himself sterile due to some loss was very painful, oh god .. te way my maan seeing his geet for first time and fallen for her was lovely cute..i love te update..kutty te way u have picturised past and present in a lovely way..

Aww thank u sooo much!😉

maan did crim in past

RECAP

PAST

He frowned a bit when he was mesmerised with her cute smile.He looked up and saw her hugging his sister who had arrived on that time.He looked back as he was called for speech when he denied that he's not interested but sure wished the best of luck for their future to the children.Annie who sat beside him hugging him tightly said,"Bhai,the girl who sung a song now is my best friend Geet Handa from high school!"Maan nodded to his sister when she started to blabber non stop telling abt everything.Then he was called and was honoured and the function ended with the vote of thanks.

PRESENT

At night Maan was rubbing his daughter's back when she started crying continuously.Maan got panic seeing her big fat tears and screamed towards Geet,"Geet,look at my angel she's crying!"Geet got up and said softly,"Maan calm down,she's hungry!Give her to me!"Maan gave her to Geet and she opened her first two button of her gown and wrapped her legs and made her angel to sleep on her lap and stuffed her nipple inside her soft small mouth.When she was stuffed with nipple then she started sucking hungrily.While Maan saw his angel in awe.He never saw this sight before and he felt pure seeing this sight and tears poured down.

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PART 03

PRESENT

After feeding the baby,Geet got up to use washroom giving her to Maan.Maan stroked his angel and burped her who was sleeping peacefully on his chest.When she came outside then he asked Geet who was lying on the bed admiring the scene,"Jaan,what do we call her?"Geet said with immense love,"Bhoomi!"Maan looked up with shock and was about to speak when she said,"I know that u wont approve but i want her name to be Bhoomi.I know u loved her Maan though u never loved the mother of her.But still it was ur flesh and blood which was breathing inside her.I dont want u to live under guilt.When i got pregnant then i was praying that this will always be a girl and god fulfilled my wish.I want her name to be Bhoomi so that u feel her in my daughter!"Maan's tears poured down and said kissing her knuckles,"Thank u!"

Geet moaned in pain seeing his tears,"Maan!"And wiped it softly.He kissed her knuckles and said hoarsely,"Geetanjali,i love u so much!"She smiled at him and said,"I love u too...so so much!"He took his daughter and made her sleep in her crib and came back.He stuffed more pillows around Geet and settled himself beside her when she asked,"Why do u call me Geetanjali always?"Maan took her left hand and kissed her palm and said,"Its ur name jaan,u only said once to me!"She said softly moaning,"Yeah i said that and i know that my full name is Geetanjali,but i feel a difference when u call me like that!Is there any speciality in the way u call my name?"He asked now sucking her fingers,"What's the difference?"Geet drowned in that soft sucking for a moment and controlled it and asked panting heavily,"I feel like am being worshipped when u call me like that!"He answered now licking her fingers softly,"U r jaan,i want to worship u!"

She admired him hearing the word worship from his mouth and remembered her past with Vikram.How he treated her like slave and tried to use her for s**How she had been underestimated and when she dint live with his expectations then she was being cursed such as her life will be wasted and she will be incomplete and she need to give her virtue to him then only he can trust her and all.On that time she yelped in pleasure when she was coaxed by Maan in her feminine parts.She came out of her thoughts and screamed,"Maan am still bleeding!"Maan said pecking her petal lips,"I know jaan,that's why am controlling or else u would not wear ur clothes at this time!"She pouted,"Then why r u touching me there?"He glared at her and said,"That's becoz u were wandering off in ur thoughts and i cant tolerate that!When ur handsome husband is loving u then what is the need to those thoughts sweetheart?Dont u ever think like that abt urself!He manipulated u to stole ur virtue which u dint give after that also.U proved that u r only mine and ur skin dint consider his touch!"He licked her thighs possessively.She moaned softly when he gently lied her on the bed and hovered on her and said keeping his hand on her stomach where their baby was cocooned,"God also dint give him oppurtunity to plant a child here,it was only my right!U were made for me only Geetanjali and it got proven!"

Geet was agitated when she recalled his accuse and said,"Maan,let the world know that u r the father of Bhoomi!Let them know that MSK reversed his sterilization and became fertile just to give baby to his angel!"Maan slept beside her taking her on his chest and said,"Jaan,this world always questions abt our conscience but do u know the truth that this world dont hv any conscience or else it would never ever questioned ur loyalty towards ur husband.Jaan u know and i know and god knows that who's the father of Bhoomi,so dont worry!As for that Vikram is concerned,he can got to hell!After committing numerous sins,after destroying so many girls lives,he will sure gonna be introduced to the new kind of hell!"Geet nodded and said,"When u can suffer with the pain without any mistakes then how can he be spared?"Maan said,"Exactly,now sleep on,u r so tired!"Geet snuggled to his chest when he looked towards the crib where their baby was sleeping peacefully.He kissed Geet's forehead and tightened his hold around her waist drifting to sleep.

Next morning KM was buzzing with sounds as Khurana family has arrived to see Geet and baby.A woman hugged Geet tightly and said,"How r u beta?"Geet said leaning to the bed rest,"Am fine mom!"A man came inside holding Bhoomi and speaking in babyish tone along with Maan who was glancing his angel with jealousy as she was jelling with her grandpa Siddharth.Geet asked,"Mom where is Mariah?"On that time a tiny hands closed Geet's eyes.Geet raised her eyebrows and said,"Gotcha!It is Mariah!"Mariah was the 3 yr old girl who was adopted by Maaneet who was staying for sometime till Geet's pregnancy in grandpa Siddharth's house and came back to see her new sister.

Siddharth Khurana

Soumya Khurana

Mariah stood in front of her mother smiling and kissed her cheeks.Geet hugged her tightly as she missed her so much and kissed her all over face.Geet said softly,"I missed u so much beta!"She made Mariah sit on her lap while grandpa Siddharth brought Bhoomi near her and said,"Look Mariah,she's ur baby sister!"Mariah who was chewing her chubby finger pecked Bhoomi's forehead.Bhoomi cutely smiled at her and threw her legs and limbs towards her.Mariah snuggled towards her mother smiling to Bhoomi when Geet asked,"Maa,dint she trouble u?"Soumya said,"No beta,she is a very good child!"On that time Siddharth yelped feeling the wetness on his stomach and pouted like a child.Soumya asked,"What happened?"Siddharth pouted,"Bhoomi wetting my shirt!"Soumya looked his shirt dripping and she burst into laughter.Both Maaneet too laughed loudly.Siddharth glared at them when Soumya said,"U need to be practised to these situations Siddharth as u r gonna get the grand children in future!Give her to me i will clean her and Maan give him any of ur dress to wear so that i clean his dress!"Siddharth gently gave Bhoomi and patted her backside in appreciation for wetting his shirt to Soumya and Maan walked towards his closet carrying Mariah as Bhoomi needs her mother and grandmother.

Maan gave his shirt and jeans to his father and they both walked outside the room seeing Bhoomi getting all the attention.On that time they heard the nearby Mosque preaching the Quran principles when Maan said to Mariah,"Beta its time of ur prayer!"Mariah nodded and sweetly went to her room to bring the carpet which was scripted in Urdu.She sat on her knees on it and started praying.Siddharth saw her doing that and sighed and asked Maan who offered a cup of coffee,"When will she speak,Maan?Am waiting to hear her voice!"Maan too sighed sipping his black coffee seeing Mariah doing Namaz(prayer),"I dont know dad!"Mariah was traumatized at her young age as she was harassed sexually.She was abused sexually at small age.She dont even know the meaning of sexual harassment but had experience.Maan had brought her from orphanage when he was once again called for the honour.He was so sad hearing her story and even he saw his shadow in her except the part the sexual harassment which had angered Maan on them who did that to her.Now she had a very good loving family where Maaneet r present and loving uncles like Dev and Arjun and loving aunts like Meera and Anwesha(Annie) and loving grandparents.

Siddharth asked glancing Mariah,"Any news abt her family beta?"Maan said,"Dad,i dont want to know abt that family.I had heard from my sources that Mariah was harassed by her members of family.I would rather stay away from the family or else i may go to prison becoz of murdering them!"Siddharth spoke gently,"Son,anger isnt the first weapon to tackle the situation!"Maan said angrily,"Believe me dad,anger is the first weapon which am gonna take if her family comes near her.She was abandoned by them and i have adopted her and no one have any right to snatch her from me!"Siddharth nodded dismissively seeing his anger and but his eyes showed admiration towards his elder son.He was happy that Maan dint grew up like his biological father.

On that time cars rushed inside the porch of KM which both Siddharth and Maan heard it.Doors opened and footsteps sounded and both Siddharth and Maan was hugged tightly by the pack.Everyone screamed in unison,"Congrats bro!"Maan laughed hearing their scream when everyone saw both mother and grandmother climbing downstairs together holding the baby.Mariah who had finished her prayers had settled herself on her father's lap jumped on the sofa in excitement.Everyone kissed her too and ran to see the new member.Dev who was the first biological son of Siddharth widened his eyes seeing his niece beautifully jelling towards him.Meera Dev's wife squealed seeing Bhoomi snuggling towards her husband.Next turn was of Siddharth's biological daughter Anwesha(Annie) and her husband Arjun's turn who sighed loving her chubby cheeks.They were trying but was not fruitful to get children for themselves.

Dev Khurana

Meera Khurana

Arjun Awasthi

Anwesha Arjun Awasthi

PAST

"Miss Handa!"a voice came from the angry chocolate brown eyed Sanskrit professor who was glaring back at her.Geet who saw the anger in Maan lowered her head when he was agitated and said,"Am asking u a question Miss Handa!"Geet looked up once again and he frowned a bit as if he has seen her somewhere.He spoke bossily,"I have asked u a question Miss Handa!Or r u hard of hearing or u dont understand the language?"Geet lowered her eyes and blinked back her tears but controlled it.Maan turned and wrote the word Kalidasa in Sanskrit.On that time another girl student lifted her hand to answer his question.Maan turned and was abt to pick her hand when a melodious voice came from the back of the room.

Saahityaloke asankhya: kavaya: vartante iti jaaneema: I Kintu teshu atyalpaanameva kavitaaha aham patithavaan I Tathaapi manasi pratishthaanaam kaveenaam madhye Kalidasa mahaa kavi: mahaan vartante...(In literature world,many poets were born!But we have read about the poets very less!In these Kalidasa is the one poet who born...)

When Geet ended on that time everyone were scratching their head becoz she had all the way spoke abt him in Sanskrit.Sanskrit is a very beautiful language as this language has been always highlighted in Vedas and Puranas.This language has made the Vedas and Puranas beautiful.Maan was impressed but still he was agitated as he felt the very same magnetic pull towards her.Geet looked up at him proudly but she dint see any pride or admiration in those chocolate eyes instead she saw agitation and anger.Geet lowered her almond eyes and blinked back the tears.Maan cleared his throat and said,"Sit down!"Geet sat silently when she got a glare from the very same girl who was excited the answer his question.

Geet looked her doe eyes which showed the jealousy but she dint know that why she's feeling jealous of.On that time someone cleared his throat and draw his attention to get an handsome guy who smiled and whispered in her ear,"Dont bother,he's like this!Before he gets friendly with students,it is his way of addressing the students showing the ego.He's such an egoist man!He's such an ***!"On that time Geet's eyes popped up hearing the last word and a smile crept on her perfect lush pink lips.That boy too smiled broadly as he felt that her smile is the prettiest.

On that time Maan spoke still writing on the board,"Smayte tatparam Ms Handa!"(Smile afterwards Ms Handa)When he spoke in Sanskrit then she was amazed.She looked up but he was still writing something on the board.She lowered her almond eyes and a smile crept on her petal lips.

Precap-Present-Maan-I want to destroy his existence,so search any way but i want him to be broken.He broke my Geetanjali and he will be broken too!

Past-Maan-Ms Handa,mama sangama kaaryalayaha.

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Veer Shekhawat

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Yipee me first. hayee Maaneet'c cutipie is gelling well with her family and she has got a big sister too .. loved the way Maan was angry on Mariah's so called family. love the way you present the past and current story..