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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
amazing start😊😊 really loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Do continue sis
I wasnt a fan of swaron but i think so
Now i would be
Update sooon
Waiting eagerly to read next part

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for all ur suggestions n appreciations.
@snehaswaron77 i knw swayam's words felt like lil imposed bt after reading his pov in d next parts i hope u will understand my point!
@-shenz- i got ur point n wil try to explain it in d comng part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prachijainn

Do continue sis
I wasnt a fan of swaron but i think so
Now i would be
Update sooon
Waiting eagerly to read next part

😊

Thank u sissy! I really hope u bcome a Swaron fan so dt we dnt hv to fight fr d Tv remote n show timings..Love u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
It was really gud
do continue
n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Do continue...
Plz pm when u update second part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
To write a story its always said the start to have its impact to keep your readers engaged
Yours was a real GOOD start and quite intriguing
Would love to read ahead
Do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

To write a story its always said the start to have its impact to keep your readers engaged
Yours was a real GOOD start and quite intriguing
Would love to read ahead
Do continue soon

It ws quite supportive n modest of u to say dese thngs..Thank u soo much..I keep reading ur work n i like dem vry much! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx everyone fr Appreciations n Suggesstions! In d cumng parts dis SS is going to be lil Intense I hope u all support d story.I m quite happy with d response so thought to update early. Here is d next part...😊!

PART 2

"So it's true, when all is said and done, grief is the price we pay for love." E.A. Bucchianeri, Brushstrokes of a Gadfly.

(Swayam went to canteen towards Gang n Natasha..Everyone ws Happy wit Natasha..Swayam ws sad bcoz of his conversation with Sharon)

Swayam:-Guys,I m going home. I m nt feeling well,I need to rest for sometime😕.

Natasha:-R u fine? Lets go to Doctor if u need.

Bharat:-Abe yaar thik h na tu..

Swayam:-Don't worry guys its jst a headache,rest krne pe thik ho jayega.Bye guys meet u tommo! N he left.

Simmi(self talk):-Mujhe aisa kyu lag rha h jaise Swayam n Sharon k beech koi problem hui h..Sharon is nt der frm last 2 hrs n Swayam bhi aise chale gya..(she thought to call Sharon n talk to her..bt her phone ws unreachable..she evn tried her to call using Rinni's phone bt no one picked up d call,worried she left in d search of Sharon)

Simmi:-Guys,I hv an important work will meet u all later.

(Meanwhile at Swayam's place-He started throwing thngs n got himself hurt,he ws sobbing😭!)

Swayam:-Kya ho gya h mujhe?Me Sharon se itne buri tarike se kaise baat kr skta hu? I m sorry Sharon I knw I have hurt u a lott..pr mere pass koi option nhi tha..mein jaanta hu tum genuine thi..Pr humne saath rehke humesha ek dusre ko hurt hi kia h..we r two different people..I love u..Bt its better to nt be together thn to hurt each ther.Pls forgive me Sharon pls..n he drifted to sleep sobbing!

(Simmi searched Sharon at Rehearsal hall,Fire exit,Projector room,Classroom bt she cudnt find her atlast she thought of going at Terrace,it ws d last place to search fr).

(Simmi entered Terrace n saw Sharon lying near d Water tank.Simmi ws tensed like anything.Slowly she went towards her..Tears started forming in her eyes.She shook Sharon..bt she dint get any response..Sharon ws cold..She ws lying thr since 3 hrs nw.Simmi cudnt carry Sharon alone,she needed help..she thought of calling Rinni bt dt wudnt help..Kriyaansh wer nt an option..Nilesh n her equation ws nt good dese days..So finally thnking a lot she called Vicky fr help as he is Sharon's childhood frnd.)

Vicky:-Simmi,tumne mujhe yha kyu bulaya h?Plan kya h haa?😉

Simmi:-She ws numb,she jst pointed her finger towards Sharon.

Vicky:-Oh my God, Simmi ye Sharon ko kya ho gya? Vo aise kyu soyi h yha?

Simmi:-Its n funny Vicky..She is nt opening her eyes.. I guess she fainted..i called u fr help coz u r Sharon's childhood frnd.Common help me nw u dumbo!

(No matter how much Vicky joked about Sharon bt he always had a caring side towards her as a sister😳..They both took Sharon to Hospital in Simmi's car..College ws closed by now..Evryone went home tired of arranging things for Kria's farewell)

Doctor:-She hs a got a Asthma attack,which is vry severe..She is so cold I doubt we cn make her feel better jaldi se. Accha h aap unhe abhi leke aaye agar isse thoda aur time lagta to bohot mushkil ho jaati n thn he went fr treatment of Sharon.

Vicky:-ASTHMAA😕,Ye kab hua Sharon ko? Aur mujhe ye baat kaise nhi pata? Simmi kya tumhe pata tha?

Simmi:-Relax Vicky..Ha mujhe pata tha..Sharon jb Dance Camp k waqt faint hui thi tbse use ye problem hui..Sharon nhi chahti ki koi use Sympathy de isliye usne kisiko nhi bataya..voh toh mujhe bas pata chal gya..Ab we should look aftr her,we cn discuss it later!

Vicky:-Ya ohk.

(D diagnosis went fr abt 2 hrs,Sharon ws stable nw n breathing properly..Sicky went inside to see her..dey both were cryng.😭.it wsnt a pleasant sight to see Sharon vulnerable n dt too in dis state..Simmi kept her hand on Sharon's forehead lovingly..she ws worried fr her bestfrnd)

(Sharon opened her eyes n saw Sicky infrnt of her..she saw d surroundings n she realised dt she is in Hospital)

Sharon:-Wat d hell? Me yha kaise aayi?😡 N her head startd aching by shouting.

Vicky:-Sharon pls relax..we both got u here u were lying on College's terrace.

(Sharon remembered d past incidents dt took place,Natasha n Swayam laughing,Swayam n her fight n thn her attack)

Simmi:-How r u feeling Sharon?

Sharon:-I m fine guys thanxx fr taking me here. Her eyes went towards d door bt der ws no one.She frowned😔.

Vicky:-Sharon sorry hume itna time hi nhi mila ki hum kisko bata ske tumhare bare me..pr dnt worry I will inform dem nw!

Sharon:-Kisiko kuch batane ki zarurat nhi h guys..i m fine..i dnt want to bother them..vese bhi Kria jaane wali h..kyu sabka mood kharab kru..Dnt tell anyone abt dis pls!

Simmi:-As u say Sharon..Bt pls take rest..n relax everything will be fine 😳 !

(Doctor allowed 'Sicky' to take Sharon home.)

At Sharon's home-

Vicky:-Shariiin aaj me tumhe tumhare iss Gore rang ka raaz batata hu..

Karina, Katrina & Sharinn Do you know, ki Inn Teeno ki skin Itni Gori kyun hai? (He asked to Simmi)

Socho...Kyuki Teeno k Naam mein RIN Aata hai... (KaRINa, KatRINa, ShaRIN)

Aur Rin deta hai Chauka Dene Wali Safedi..!!! 😆

Sharon jst glared at him n Simmi chuckled 😃

Vicky:-My pleasure Sharon bohot accha thana PJ i knw dt..hehehe..

Sharon:-Its late, Vicky n Simmi u shud leave.. I m fine nw..

Simmi:-I wont leave u alone Sharon,aaj raat me tumhare saath hi rhugi..No ifs no buts🥱..

Vicky:-Ya Sharon she is right..m leaving..if u need any help I m jst a call away! Sharon smiled n said him a sweet Thanxx.

(Vicky left,Simmi made coffee fr her n Sharon)

Simmi:-Sharon common speak up I knw something is up between u n Swayam..tell me d whole thng nw!

Sharon:-There is nthng wrong Simmi...I jst gt a Asthma attack n I dint hv d pump so I fainted coughing.Thats it!

Simmi:-Sharon,wen did I say der is something WRONG??

Sharon:-Woh Simmi Woh..o_O

Simmi:-U cnt hide anything frm me..Spill d beans!

Sharon:-Its over between me n Swayam..He doesn't want to see my face..He thnks my frndship with Kria is all fake..my love fr him is fake..i m shallow n selfish person..i dnt hv traditional values..n she starts sobbing..

Simmi:-Pls dnt cry Sharon! I dnt believe out of all d people Swayam,SWAYAM cn say dis..Its Disgusting!

Sharon:-No,Simmi its nt his fault..Its all my fault..I failed loving him..My mom left me..I don't hv cultural values , I dnt hv a family..I failed as a Friend also,I deserve all dis!

Simmi:-Stop speaking rubbish Sharon..U r such a great frnd..Swayam doesn't knw d whole truth abt Kria..We frnds r ur family..Its nt ur fault,u dnt deserve it I will go n speak to Swayam nw..She stomped her foot😡😡😡 n started going towards d Door...

Sharon:-Stop Simmi jst STOP..she screamed on top of her lungs..

Simmi:-Ok I wont go..stop screaming relax! Drink water..n she passed d glass near her to Sharon!

(Sharon took a deep breath n ws stable.)

Only 2 months were remaining for there Graduation!

End of PART 2

Precap-Kria is nt going to New York bcz of ...Keep Guessing!

Pls do comment n hit d like tab.Ur Appreciation n Criticsms n Suggestions r most welcome😃!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update yr. when swayam will knew about sharon's health, he will definately come back to her. thanks 4 d pm

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