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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

ahh!!

i read this in one goo..this is simply fab!!

i cannot believe i didnt come across your ff..when i hv read lmst all of the arhi stories 😛

i love how you showed Khushi..strong yet fragile..and Arnav..what a perfecct man he is! stoood by her side throughout..very beauutifully you showed their lived entwined with one other...Anjali shyam NK sheetal..lovely characterisation and Rohan and Akash such assholes! its a shame that in reality there are many people like them..wish every Khushi found an Arnav for herself to withstand all this..

the romance..fights..thoughts..comfort..the need to be with eachother..care for eachother..loved it all..

congrats once again to have written so wonderfullly!

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

such a beautiful story, read it in one go!
thank you x

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hira

@hiraarif

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

very beautifully written. It took me around 2 days but couldn't help it and kept on reading. Very interesting and beautifully conceptualized. Really one of the best I've ever read

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Gosh!! I'm speechless.
I just loved reading this story.
The chemistry between the leads, the mystery, attention to every minute detail is handled to perfection.
And I'm just blown away by your top notch writng. You have just earned yourself another fan in me for your writng.
I see you have another ongoing ff and I can't wait to read it.

PS: remember that scene by the door after the Diwali party in goa? You said it's inspired from a south film. I'm a telugu girl myself and that scene seems vaguely familiar but I can't seem to remember exactly. I am someone who can't rest in peace when I can't figure out something which is nagging me, especially if it is something related to movies 😃. So, would you kindly free my mind of this torture, please? Thanks 😊

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Hello Dedee,

What an amazing story...thank you so much for telling it and giving us another dimension of our TV favourites - I adore your Arnav and Khushi...what can I say, I am so able to picture Sanaya Irani doing perfect justice to this script...as for our Arnav Singh Raizada, he is a changed soul from the beginning to the end is he not? Also lovely to see bits of the quirky IPKKND family transformed in their own quaint ways in this story. Sex trafficking is a serious issue and not one that is often handled in any of the literature of our time, thanks for blending it into the main plot here. And truly loved the way you interspersed the amazing and topical musical scores at each place...such an awesome story from start to finish. Take a bow...and please keep writing!

Anupama

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Found this story by accident and have totally loved reading it...so intense and an emotional rollercoaster...but wonderfully written with such strong characters. Many thanks

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Perfect
awesome
mibd blowing story
read all parts and must say that with every part i feel myself more hooked with this suspence thrilker story
u wrote this story fabulously and beautifully
once a reader start reading it can't get out of this mystery until finish it
loved all the characters
its first time i read Akash in negative role
instead of shayam 😉
loved this change
khushi chirpiness and brave and strong character was awesome
and
arnav character was soo soo amazing and powerfull
with sheetal as friend of khushi
u make the story different

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Seriously this was a Gem of a FF,

I think this one of the few so moving FFs,

this was just outright fabulous,

I mean the way, you depicted Khushi and Arnav's emotion, it was just superb,

especially those Philosophy Quotes, they were just AMAZING,

So deep, so touching,

just amazing!!

Also touching such a difficult topic,

Loved the way your FF changed genres and loved even more the way you excelled in them,

in the starting you really had a Thriller, then Emotional and finally Romantic.

This was Lovely!!

So glad to have found it!!

God,You are so talented,

Keep Writing!!

TC!!😊

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Manishi1

@Manishi1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Dear..must say one of the best story i have ever read. From start to end it kept me glued. This was like watching a movie. Hats of to you for such a wonderful story. Loved each an every part of it. Thanks,

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Hi.. I have been following tune into me and came to know of Entwined from there. I read all the chapters in a go.. It was that captivating. I love the story, theway u write, the philosophies, everything. Its magnificent. Im really glad i came across it..