Arshi FF:Entwined--Thrd 3 *completed* double update Page 28 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was such an amazing story that I guess words might just fall short to express what I actually felt abt it all.. I can say magical 45+ parts.. It evoked so many emotions in me while reading those of excitement, anger & humor.. As a ArHi fan I always wanted all to be well between them and by the end it is.. Their journey from college to being strangers to Arnav offering her his support to heal herself.. Arnav.. What do I say abt him? This man here has raised the bar so high that sometimes its crazy.. He is just so perfect... Infact perfect is not even the word for it.. He is just out of this world.. When he told her that he wudnt have allowed anyone else to do it to her.. Maybe he was always in love with her, that chatterbox Khushi full of antiques and that's why his subconscious mind always made a point to seek her even in the crowd.. Destiny making them come closer and fight the demons of her past and emerge victorious.. Even as I read what happened with her in her past making her the way she is now and going thru that trauma over and over again with no one to share it , there were tears rolling down my eyes for the pain she had to go through and for the times she was left alone in this nig bad world to seek out herself.. For such trauma that any woman wud have gone through.. 🥺 It does me an unsettling feeling, but unfortunately that's the truth of life.. Even as we think of the lil world we live in as perfect, it is far from being perfect.. Khushi being the strong one even as she wants to overcome her fears and telling Arnav oh so comfortably of her feelings for him.. One of the best confessions Ive read was T.H.I.S.. ❤️ She telling him that he doesn't have to say it but she wants to coz its her reality.. So much of applauds & respect for your Khushi ... Coming to this story there have been some stories on ArHi that have been "Chapp gaya hai" kind of stories for me.. I have 2 more and now this one.. Im never gonna forget this FF ever.. One of the best reads Ive ever come across.. All I can say is Thanks for such a wonderful piece.. Thanks once again.. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
u are an awesome writer three cheers ...
i mean such a sensitive topic and u have done a great job in this story .this is the harsh reality of the very society we live in . but must say people like u give us hope that some day everything ll change and we all ll have to work for it.
coming to this story the trust between arshi was magical and wow they atlast found there happily everafter ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

I finally had the chance to catch up with this FF!

A beautiful ending to an amazing FF; and it literally contained everything that makes for a good read! I loved the character development of Khushi; she changed so much throughout the FF and it was great to see her become so strong at the end with the help of Arnav but also her personal perseverance. The relationship between Khushi and Arnav was great too; the way they became each other's support and the engagement at the end was amazing!

I really enjoyed reading your FF and I look forward to reading more of your work!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story !!! took two days to complete it... thoroughly brilliant work.. the backdrop of sex trafficking issue is a salute to you for writing such a story.. plight of thousands of girls very nicely brought to light with characterization of khushi.. hope such khushi's get arnav's in their life who can help them to regain faith and beauty of life.. simply superb work.. loved it.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it an amazing story...very inspiring ...and im glad I read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just came across your story,read it in one go and absolutely loved it... It was such an awesome story and the alway u have write it is just amazing, such a sensitive topic and u did complete justice to it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hats off to u 👏
This is a brilliant piece of writing...
Words cannot suffice for d feelings of appreciation n respect u hv garnered for
urself after i hv read this ff.
I just cant express hoew beautifully u hv written this sensitive ff n how exceptionally it had come out...
This ff has given me a new vision n a new aim...
I hope i wud b able to make a difference in some other life as reading this ff had made to mine...
A whole new motive is what i hv got n more than that a hope to fight until d end n hope to achieve the final happy ending which everyone deserves...
Thanks for writing this wonderful ff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your story is just perfect! Dealing with harsh realities of life, I Love it! I would recommend it again and again, I am so glad I read it!
Another again, I would thank you from the bottom of my heart for creating awareness regarding 'Sex Trafficking.' and writing this wonderful story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
A wonderful and amazing piece of wirk plotted out beautifully...👏
Happy to come across this ff yesturday ...ya I couldnt resist myself from completing it in a stretch.
Thanks for sharing .
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a wonderfully written story. The journey of khushi is amazing. And yeh she was lucky that she wasnt raped, unfortunately this isn't always the case in similar situations.

Arnav and khushis journey together was beautiful. Lovely story.

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