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sushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

I just came across to this story and I am so glad to read it.you have picked a very sensitive subject and you have done a wonderful job.I read the last not too and yes in reality girls suffer much more than you have written my prayers goes to all of them may god help them come out of it and be able to start a fresh life. Amazing story. I would love to read more of your stories.

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daydream2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

This story is really roller coaster ride of emotional journey of Arshi. I am glad that I decided to read this beautiful story. Thanks for writing this awesome story... I have every intention to re-read this story again in near future... A really awesome story.

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Achu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

An Amazing piece of work... It's all I can gather for now... I feel very lucky to find this outstanding FF... I read it in one go... 👏

'll comment in detail later...😳

Edited by arshy4ever - 11 years ago

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navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

hi
just come across ur stories yesterday
read all chaters in two days
i must say its awesome
just love it
beautifully written
u had describe beautifuly how khushi face her past
arnav is beside her in every stage
than their falling in love
its just awesome
now i am going to read ur new story

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Moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

I came across this story incidentally and didn't rest till I finished.

Wonderful to say the least.

If Arnav and Khushi were a couple entwined by destiny the characters of the story were no less appealing.

Human trafficking, first time I saw someone writing about the issue in a ff and that too so well displayed and also about the loopholes in our judicial system.

And such a perfect ending of such enthralling story.

You rock dear.

*standing ovation*

*Bow*

"A big round of applaud ."👍🏼

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Srilatha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Nice FF. It has really good plot nice twists and turns with lot of emotions

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

I accidently found this story of yours... and gosh! I was hooked.. I read through the chapters taking almost a day..and couldnt stop myself till I finished with the epilogue.. quite captivating your narration was..
I admire you for bringing up such an important subject in this story but also for writing it beautifully. ..
I have nothing but adulatation for your brave khushi and loving arnav...
I hope you write more and give us such wonderful stories again and again...

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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

I bookmarked this story on 20th June ... Planning to read it soon. Read chapter - 1 and thats it. I couldn't stop. I used all the spare time I found between my work, chores, a party and many telephone calls to read this story. And, here I am...two and a half days (45chapters+epilogue) later...

Dedeepya ... take a bow 👏. You my dear took one of the most rotting problems in our society, gave it a twist of suspense thriller, kept us hang there, threw in loads of emotional moments and lovely stolen moments between Arnav and Khushi, brought their love to its logical end while serving justice to the victim. it was one hell and heaven of an Entwined tale you wrote. For that, I applaud you. 👏

I grew up on suspense thrillers coz I used to borrow my father's books on the sly way before I was old enough to read the genre. And got hooked big time. So, you can imagine how excited I was to read this story. The opening was one gripping one. And your writing tight. The chapter where Arnav follows doctors instructions to try the unorthodox method for Khushi's recovery was brilliant to say the least.

Then came the unveiling of the characters. The forever runaway Raizada and the Konquering the fears Khushi. Here I understood something about your writing. You dredge out every emotion and feeling that the character is experiencing and feeling meticulously, making the reader feel one with Khushi and Arnav.

Goa night walks - I must admit, I was a bit on the borderline about Khushi's behaviour coz it wouldn't take much to get assaulted for a lone girl on beach in Goa at midnight and its not that she had a gun to protect herself or a knife or even a pepper spray)

Arnav's need to be with Khushi was portrayed very nicely. His efforts to protect her, his frustrations, his need to show and give her all things she had missed were sweet and heartfelt.

Then came the revelation and the pain that was heart twisting. What can I say? I had long suspected that she was sexually assaulted but sex trade...I really love it when writers can address world issues through their writing and you did it. That to me was the best part of this story.

Sex trade is one of the big issues that United Nations looks into but have not been able to make much inroads. All that awareness, laws and punishments haven't stopped the greedy from human trafficking and sex trade. I would like to applaud you on handling a matter as sensitively - with Khushi bravely going before the world to tell her story. That was perfect.

The courts and the ways of law aren't always straight forward. The judgement obviously proved that but you, the writer took law into your hands ...(in your words...your Bollywood fixation paid off)...😆

One need not be educated to be intelligent but an intelligent woman when literate can really make a big difference to the world around. YEs!!! to NYU and the degree and the you kept up the Woman's emancipation by making Khushi go down on the knees and proposing to Arnav...that was super cute but Arnav's speech was cuter 😆

So, before I bore you to death, let me sign off by thanking you for writing such a wonderful, thought provoking story and sharing it with us :)

Cheers

Sandhya

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago