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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey...just finished reading the story...

It was wonderful. It was much more than just a love story... I applaud how you have handled the grave issue of human trafficking, which is a disgrace to our society. I admire Khushi's strength to deal with it, fight it, and not taking the easy way out.

Arnav...his patience, understanding and his determination is truly admirable. It's quite rare even if not unheard of.

I loved how Arnav and Khushi's relationship evolved slowly and steadily. All the little moments, the philosophies and the silent promises were beautiful... They truly seem destined for each other...

And much of the story takes place in Goa and Ireland...two of my favourite places ever. No offence...I cannot help but ask...was the choice of places inspired from Meera's EIT??

Anyway, it is a great story, which was narrated very well, too. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
This was such a beautiful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Khushi had gone through so much because of her good for nothing, fake husband. When she was thinking of having her own family, all her dreams has been shattered after realizing her husband's real intention. Because of Rohan, Akash and their father, she lost her parents.

She had tried so hard to save herself from that like hell brothel. She had been living in hell remembering her painful days but at the end she managed to survive with the help of Arnav and his family which embraced her like her own family. At the end, she found a second chance to have a family, to complete her education.

However, many women who faced with human trafficking for the purpose of sexual slavery aren't as lucky as Khushi. Unfortunately every day, women are facing this kind of problems consist of violence because of men who think they have right to use and manhandle women.
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Posted: 10 years ago
one hell of an amazing story...i ve read this before and loved it then too...but i just have to read it again now...and love it even more if thats possible :)
love arshi always :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
i ma speechless to even say smething after reading it all in a handful days .. it was like i was walking on a road which was completely filled with mystery romance thrill and what not to mention.. everything u put was just amazing..
i dunno if i have ever read any such great mysterious story .. nope never this was first experience and it was just over the limit i must accept.
girl u are amazing at writing and did anyone ever tell u that ur philosophies are the most loved things in ur update evn it about the sea or the every word she uttred was just magical.. thanku so much for such a grt story and awaking ppl about the serious issue of sex trafficking.


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Posted: 10 years ago
I know I am really really late to read this story
Thanks for such good story
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Posted: 10 years ago
keep up the good work loved each and every bit of it

it was a very emotional and beautiful story well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful prologue.. Looking forward to read next part quickly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a wonderful story...read it in straight two days!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am out of words to define this story i feel like readingagain again & again... this is JUST THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! I dunnow why but m hvng tears in my eyes as this story ended but it was Damn BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! Thankyou thankyou alot! For giving such a brilliamt piece of word... Read all chpter in one go AMAZINGGG

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