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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I was not believing my eyes Os by Kalyani Di .. Wow .. i simply love This bueatiful piece of work di .. I akways love the way you always portray khushi strong , I really loved the way you make arnav realise his mistake , I simply loved dadi's charachter here .. Fabulous di .. :))

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

That was beautiful... ❤️ There was something that she was keeping away something from him but even he didn't trust her... Devyani did a good thing by bringing out Shyams face in front of everyone... And Arnav being truly sorry for what he did to her.. And lastly it reminded me a lot of "Pursuit of love" coz of RE and some similar situations ...

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Loved it, trust was always an issue for ASR... but the twist with Garima was not expected...adored the fact that Khushi had his name tattooed... you are like Santa, you write and spread the joy!!

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

the last para was beautiful! Amazing story Kalyaani! Feels great to read brilliant stuff from you after a long time!😃

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow! Welcome back... and what a lovely story!! One of the best os I have read in a long while!!!!

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Chandu2000

@Chandu2000

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Beautiful OS !! O pm me for your future works !!

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shr3291

@shr3291

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hi !!

Its nyc to be reading your work after a long tym...

U r a master story teller... I just love dis khushi strong,wilfull & arnav awesome!!!

thank u!

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shr1234

@shr1234

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Lovely OS :) I really missed your writing and it was so good to read you once again. It felt like I was reading Pursuit of Love.. a story I was reading and yet missed when you decided to take it off, because my shyness then. You had created such crystal clear strong characters like now. I hope you write and put it here more, this time, I'm quite savvy of IF and won't be shunning from commenting, once again, thanks for a lovely tale! Best Luck to Rasgulla_sp :)

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Oh my god

I was so shocked when Arnav kept saying mean things to Khushi even thought he loves her
I hoped it was a mistake or a plan for something

Dadi had a good plan and I'm so glad that she asked Arnav to be sure about choosing a life partner

I liked how Arnav stopped Khushi from leaving and apologized

Good luck Rasgulla_sp for the exams

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Beautiful OS

Loved the way the story was woven and presented to us.
All the suspense , drama , romance , love , mystery , separation was a grt gift !

Miss ur FFs ..
Hope I could read them poora ,,,