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coolie001

@coolie001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

tremendous..that was a remarkable one👏

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Wow that was Amazing... Such a heart warming OS

Very beautiful written.. Can feel the emotions while reading.. Great job.

Loved it

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

very nice and beautiful Os and what u said is true..

trust is vry important for evry relationship...

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

if possible.. do share ur other stories also... i wud like to read them...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

res

Well well

Dis was d first ever work i read of urs

Nd tbh i m soo glad i chckd d link kavita dii prvded oderwise i would have missed a awesm OS

Its was everythng perfect beautiful adorable sweet cute loving .. A perfect Arhi OS

I m hardly hvng word bt

No worries everytym words is nt everythng to describe how u badly lovd somone works

Simple words matters

Nd saying in simple words

Den i cn say

The Perfect OS Lovely cncpt nd yess Superb name

P.S Cn u pm me ur index nd new works wenever u write cn i send u a buddy request to dis ID or some oder ID is dere for pm 😳

Lovd it ❤️

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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soophie

@soophie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Beautiful story dear
Complete package...love...pain...betrayel...overwhelming emotions
Just in one shot u give us a beautiful story with awesome chatacterization
Thanq for such a lovely story

PS: missing ur POL n RNS very much...hope u will atleast give us a little summary...its jst a request dear...no complains

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Kalyaani, as much as I'm miffed with you & sad for not getting access to the blog, I cannot help but admire your writing ⭐️ for a minute I thought this was a continuation of POL but it wasn't!!

Beautiful OS 👏

All the Best Saiyuu. May you write lot of exams so we get more OS's 😉😆

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

beautiful story.

well written . I know u r an amazing writer.

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

BM!!! I m yet to read... Will be back :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

ahh what could be a more appropriate song than this
he believed it so easily that she swindled the money
guess his trust on her was weak
but good he got to know the truth in time
man that was so sad seeing them without one another
but thanx to dadi all that was over