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SIMI

@dieforasr

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow...just a wow...I am a big fan of ur writing👏...And u never leave a chance to prove that...Loved it...😊

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Intrigue, suspense, romance...everything in one OS...quite a challenging task...but all in a day's work for our master story teller...Kalyani, a big fan of your work and this one lives up to the amazing collection you have already to your credit. Great stuff!

Anupama

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

First thing first, I love your choice of song..its my fav too; all songs from that beautiful movie especially "Adayein bhi hai"..

I loved the way you combined IPK dialogues with your mind blowing ones..I can actaully imagine Sarun acting them..Your Kushi is always strong and a pleasure to read her characteristics.. I loved the entire theme of the story and guess this is your best OS till date but my fav will always be PoL ;-) Please K, write more..missing your stories a lot..

Saiyyu - All the best..hope you pass with flying colors..

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dilectus

@dilectus

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

"Kalyani ji!"...Rubbing my eyes.."Ui maa!!! YE KAHAN CHUPPI HUI THI!!"😆😆😆

Missed your writing sooo very much!!! And after first few lines, I thought this is a chapter from POL, which you thought could stand alone as an OS. But fir aage padha to samajh aaya ki ye to naya hai..😃

Why is Arnav always so spontaneous in judging Khushi?? Tab uska ASR dimag kahan jata hai, pansari ki dukaan par??😡 No private investigation, no saboot, Seedha judge jury and execution...huh😡😡😡

I wish Khushi had made him grovel more for forgiveness😒..but fir hamari khushi bitiya bhi to forgiveness ki moorat hain..😆

Ant bhala to sab bhala!!!😊

Me likey..👏👏👏

P.S.- Still waiting for the day when you will be comfortable enough to share ALL of your work on IF, hopefully!!!😊

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

its awesome os...beautifully written...loved it..:)...good to see u after long here kalyani :)

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Welcome back Kalyaani ! 🤗

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

ahaan... very well written...
enjoyed reading it...
the whole plot of the story was just amazinggg..
its good to see u back dear...

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

*rubs my eyes*
its frm u K?:o
like Meera said...i saw glimpse of PoL in it...and for a moment thought it as a random shot of pol...
I loveee ur Khushii...its areare to read khushi's strong char...
In just one shot u told us a full story...of arhi wid alll d char...shyam..devyani.. La , nk, anji...
Wud love to read more oS's frm u:)

and plz do inform me when u solve ur blog problem:)

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Loved the way you create the Arshi charectors especially Kushi.

She is a gem and she support Arnav's family though he accusing her...

Love, Passion they have for each other is beautiful... Wonderful OS.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Wow just wow, absolutely mind blowing and outstanding.

The one shot was written exceptionally well and a fantastic read from start to finish,

Awww loved the part where Khushi had got a tattoo in Arnav's name and took the initiative first to confess her love for him,

I had a feeling Khushi would not be at fault and Arnav was being harsh because of a misunderstanding,

So Khushi had taken the money to catch the pathetic man Shyam out,

I'm glad Arnav realised his mistake and repented and apologised to Khushi,

I loved the song you used, it complimented the one shot perfectly and a personal favourite of mine.

Thanks for the PM,

P.S. Good luck with your exams Rasgulla_SP

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