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It was really a pleasant surprise seeing your name in my inbox...superb OS...it had all the elements love, hatred, betrayal in one place...loved khushi's self esteem in not accepting anything which is not meant has put her on high pedestal in my eyes...being independent after her father's death...working as soon as she completed 10th standard and paying her fees from her savings and not taking advantage of Arnav's friendship shows Khushi's character...I was surprised when Arnav thought her of a gold digger...owing to his own experience about her he shouldn't have done that...but he did not trust her...it was all about Shyam finally...the truth is out...Garima had to face the repercussions of being truthful to the company...for a change dadi is good and approved Arnav and Khushi...the couple are together finally...very appropriate song...thanks for the PM

indeed a very pleasant surprise. Welcome back. you were surely missed. Loved the OS.

Beautiful OS. Missing your stories POL and Raizada & sons. Thanks.

Wow kalyani that was really good.you are really good at describing the depth of characters.have been missing your pursuit of love and raizada and sons.this reminds me of what i am
missing.

Beautiful OS !

This is a beautiful piece. I loved this strong, calm and composed Khushi. It was such a joy to see her. Great piece!

A lovely story...very polished writing! I know it's an OS so it had to be short but I wish Arnav had been made to wait a bit longer for her forgiveness ... she is so right...if there isn't faith and trust, how can it be love?!

beautiful and emotional short - love the way u write and ur characterisations r wonderful. arnav made me feel self righteously angry for failing to trust the khushi he knew and i wish he had to wait a little bit longer to be forgiven, but khushi is ever loving and ever forgiving in every avatar 😛

Absolutely brilliant... have always loved your strong characters, bold storyline, mature sensibilities and perfect narration. This OS once again proves you are a storyteller par excellence!

Truly miss Pursuit of Love and Raizada and Sons...

Wow...
Superb... 👏
I really loved it...You described every emotion very well...
I hope you will continue to write more os... 😊