ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE* - Page 18

What a pleasant surprise. I can't tell you how much I love reading completed stories in one go. Thank you so much for this beautiful story and for the PM.

It sure was a very emotional, intense story. At first I could not work out what could have happened between them for the situation to have become as intolerable as it was. then we discover that she is pregnant and the reason for their troubles seems even more unfathomable. But... once we find out the true state of affairs, I am totally heartbroken for both of them but especially Arnav. I could not believe that Khushi would put Arnav through that, watching him breaking completely before her own eyes. I understand a mother's love but knowing Arnav's history with regard to losing loved ones, how could she do this to him? If she did not survive, as she herself expected not to, how could she think that Arnav would have been able to develop any kind of bond or relationship with the baby? Would he not always see the baby as the reason behind him losing Khushi? Would that have been fair to both him or the baby? I'm sorry if I am going against popular opinion, but I think she was completely wrong in her decision, especially as the doctors said the next pregnancy may not have complications. She was completely ignoring Arnav's despair and need, that does not sound like something Khushi could bear to do. I am sooo happy that it all turned out well in the end, showing that Arnav and Khushi are meant to be together always.

Thank you again Tina for this lovely surprise 🤗

definately a surprising and a highly unexpected SS!

I had this horrified and hurt face while i read the first part! Never really i realised that i was angry! Not even when Arnav bitter or even absolutely cold. Haven't we seen a cold Arnav half the IPk and now when he had Khushi in his life, clearly his pain behind all those rude words was very visible. He was hurting!

Reading the SS was quite difficult, i've never really read any of you're writing which has been this angst for straight 3 chps!

By the end, you know, those few final moments when Arhaan was born and Arnav was shouting at Khushi to come back to him.. Thats when i guess i cried.. His Love, his desperation.. Gosh!

I would have gone dehydrated crying if anything would have happpened to Khushi, but you were kind enough to spare us all!


This indeed was a beautiful SS, a part of their life, a difficult part that too, when one choice all it takes to change everything, to question love, to test it.. To try to hate it and to finally fall in love.. All over again :)

Aww the ending was so cute. The baby loves jalebis too. :)

Beautiful story you have expressed their emotions so well I had tears in my eyes while reading the part when after delivery Arnav is crying for Khushi telling her to live for baby and himself.Amazing

OMG!!!!!!!...IT WAS OUTSTANDING...so intense...loved it every bit...had my heart racing...

Loved the story...very well written...😊

When i read d first part i thought, they r divorced and living seperately coz of some reason...bit as d story progressed i came to know d reason...

beautifully written 👏

Oh gosh! One intense story, vveryy beautiful!

Awww...this was so painful to read and I was crying but loved the ending, love prevailed and brought her back.