ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE*

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T <3 T <3 T <3 OMG girl ... when I read the opening part , it was dj vu , I remember reading Twilight Breaking Dawn in my hostel room years back and I literally had my heart in my mouth as I read Renesmee's birth, throughout the pregnancy, if there was one thing that stood painfully clear was the pain both Bella & Edward underwent, she took the decision to keep the baby, he didnt want the baby at the cost of her life, her decision threatened to ruin the dreams of their forever !!

And now while reading yours , it was like re-living the entire moment once again , the difference here ? the intensity was a millionfold more !!

It was Arnav & Khushi after all <3 how can you not feel it hit u point blank in your gut ??

Arnav was in so much pain , his anger at her decision , his fury that he could do nothing to make her budge !!

His angst which is preventing him from being his wife's side !!

He is barely living , as each day of her pregnancy passes, for him its not the nearing of his baby's arrival but its taking him closer to Khushi's death !! :'(

My heart literally went out to him, I guess I cried through almost the entire story !!

And Khushi ... where do I even begin with her ??

She has always wanted a life with him , a life thats forever but her one choice and its her dreams crumbling to dust !!

Even if she gives birth to the baby, she wouldn't be alive to see him/her, and she would have to leave Arnav all alone !!

Seeing him suffer in hell right before her eyes coz of a decision she made ... dammit can anything be more harsh on her at a time when she needs Arnav more than ever !!

Their family supports Khushi but nobody can ever make for Arnav in her life !!

Her remembering the last time they made love ... amidst so much pain , the doctor's revelation and Arnav begging her to choose herself and their life together above the baby and Khushi's refusal !!

Good lord Tina ... don't u ever make me cry like this again !!

And the end was a rollercoaster !!

They are all alone in RM , and the baby is about to arrive ... gosh the tension !!

And the moment when he realises that his Khushi survived it , her silent prayer begging the Gods to give them a chance !! <3

This short story , thank god you gave out the entire story all at once coz if it came in parts , am sure I would have bled to death !!

I will say it was one of the most beautiful stories ever written on Arshi <3 thanku T ... love u ! <3 hugs