ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE*

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fanipkknd0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

👏 Your talent amazes me 👏👏 Once again an engaging story, congratulations

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

This was amazing..
Really enjoyed reading it.

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PRUM

@PRUM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

it is a superbbb story..i loved it

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955548

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

AWESOME.
Dear Tina ,Hats of to you.
Gripping interesting just breath taking.
And it was nice to read from 1st chapter till the last in on read.
Loved Arnav's love for Khushi.
Khushi's love for her LOVE and as a mother.
and WILL wait for update on desert heat.
Am on to your next story.

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Such an emotional story it literally touched my heart

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Heart touching SS. 👏

Beautifully written👏

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Swaran13

@Swaran13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Beautifully written 👏

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

really felt sad.. for khushi .. when she neded him as strenght he was fighting with her...damn it..

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

I liked the way suspense was built even though the story is relatively short. The element of intrigue as to why Arnav was miffed with Khushi made for some fodder for the mind.

Alas it was a case of a child being he reason for discord. At that moment, I wanted the reason to be something else; for the presence of a child and especially in the circumstances involved meant that a reconciliation wasn't possible. Because that only happens when there is any matter that can be sorted out, or dissolved. How then could such a thing be used when the entity in question is the survival of a child.

Khushi played the role of a mother to the fullest. Even though the child wasn't born, her motherly instincts were well portrayed; so were Arnav's in the form of anguish at the prospect of losing his wife, so much so that he preferred the loss of his blood.

The suspense was heightened by the power cuts owing to the storm (nice analogy by the way), and since then it felt that the chances of Khushi's survival are close to nil.

But I'm glad that the story ended on a happy note.