ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE* - Page 20

superb story.u made me cry.i hav read many stories on this concept b4.but no one made me cry.this was so emotional.even though she is alive but d pain thru which arnav gone thru for months was so well portrayed that i felt d pain too.d pain of kushi was also so perfectly written.it was all magical.d storm within arnav was fantastically written.d scene of baby shower.how he shouted n how it was revealed to us that it was all coz of her pregnancy was amazing.hats off dear.any concept will b a magical treat with ur hands.

I just found this. Thank you for the PM...
Tina, 1stly congratulations for the one go SS otherwise i'ld have died of the suspense. Haha..

Such beautiful story... The way you portray love in all your stories, the passion, feel and unconditional live the leads have have been amazing. I wish it's the same in real..

Similarly, this SS was rocking!!! The last 2 chapters brought tears to my eyes. I couldn't blame who's right n who's not. Both are selfish in a way or another. Ones possessive over the wife while the other on the unborn. Such emotions and heartfelt story and thankfully a happy wonderful ending.

Great work!!!

this story was just marvelous. The title was so apt. Storm within indeed... loved it... I was wondering so much tht y Arnav is behaving da way he is till chapter 3 but then I was sure its coz of pregnancy n tht her life is in danger coz of it. initially I thought tht may b she is dead then I thought its coz of something related to Anjali. Teen u described everything so beautifully.. specially their feelings n I must say u did fabulous job wid Arnav's coz to write something emotional from a girl's perspective is easy for us being girls but u always describe opposite sex's feelings so beautifully na! Exceptional. Arnav's pain n anger was 100% right in my eyes coz Khushi is his only anchor now to live normally n to love. She was his life support system and he couldn't for da life of him could allow risking her life for anything. And when he had to just back off he couldn't do it silently. he had to show his anger frustration and hatred towards the decision. Just beautiful. ..
then there is Khushi who was adamant on continuing the pregnancy n she just couldn't kill the symbol of their love... his n her child ... how can a mother even think of it obviously for a mother his kid is more precious than her own life. But miracle does happen n so does here. When I read her heart is sinking n they couldn't go to hospital I was so worried but u r just too good. Awesome piece of work Teen just AWESOME

Like your amazing stories. ..another amazing one...at first I hated arnav and think he is bad with khushi but when I continue reading I find the truth. ..Thanks my dear for it

Loved it dear
I cried too 😳
And also fell in love with your story all over again...
Write more like this awesome SS 😉

a very beautiful story...keep it up

I cried so much reading this.. 😭🥺Almost thought Khushi wont make it.. And Arnavs pain and his helplessness... Khushi's goodbyes were so heartbreaking.. But alls well that ends well.. She made it and their baby too... So so glad...

Statutory warning!
Do not read this ss at night! Later do not blame us if your pillow is wet!!

Doc! I couldn't stop crying man!

Wonderful story and amazingly structured!

You showed the separation and sufferings without revealing the cause of it! You left it to us to imagine!

Lovely man! Seriously! Emotionally such a strong story! I couldn't stop myself at the second last chapter my dam broke!

It was sheer torture to read these two going through so much! The love moments in between just added on to the pain!

Wonderful kudos lady!!

Excellent work! Outstanding! Last chapter was fab! Together lovely!


Cheers

BEAUTIFUL STORY!!