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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi all, hws u buddies.. I appreciated ur likes and cments on my os- teenage love.. Thanks .. I'l cntinue it..

But here i bring a story.. About, love, hatered, trust and more u'l definately like it..

Characters
Asad ahmad khan: a widower who deeply lovd his wife, Shama ahmad khan.
Ayan and humaira ahmad khan: asad's bro and ayan's wife respec.
Dilshad: asad's mother, divorced.
Zoya ahmad khan: ... Asad's second wife... Most ignored creature by him...
Nikhat and najma: asad's sisters.

Prolouge..

Asad stood still in deep shock, , he shouted, ' najma, nikhat, ayan, ammi.. '
all cme out in tension
ayan: 'wat hpnd bhaijaan, he askd woried..
Asad was moaned and fell on sofa realising biggest mistake of his life..
Dilshad: plz say what hpnd beta,
.. Asad stoop up, and said: its all cz of me.. Nd i'l pay for it.. I'l make it sure...!!!

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If u liked plz like and cment, nly then i'l update, pm me and send buddy requests..

index
part1- page 2
part 2- page 3
part 3- page 7
part 4- page 11
part 5- page 14
IMPORTANT NOTE- page 16
part 6- page 18
part 7- page 22
part 8 section A and B - page 25
part 9 section A and B - page 29
Part 10 section A and B- page 35
Part 11 section A and B- page 42
part 12 section A and B- page 48
part 13 section A and B - page 54
part 14 section A- page 59
part 14 section B- page 60
Part 15 section A and B - page 66
page 16 section A and B - page 72
part 17- page 83
part 18 section A and B- page 88
part 19 section A and B - page 94
part 20 section A and B- page 104
part 21 section A and B- page 111
part 22 section A and B- page 119
THREAD 2

Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago

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pinkugarg

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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting ...

pls continue soon😊

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting
plz pm me for parts
continue soon

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Looks insteresting cont. please</font>

.. Mmm i'll cntinue it soon thnx

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Interesting
plz pm me for parts
continue soon

i'l definately pm u as soon as i'll update

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aish-au

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Posted: 11 years ago

sounds interesting

looking foward to reading it

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Afrin

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Posted: 11 years ago

uPDATE SOON!!

DO PM ME!!

I LOVE DARK STORIES!1

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part- 1.. Its a lil emotional, i warn u,u cn bash me.. But its a start., read it.. Bt hold ur cry Asad left without telling any1, why he shouted.. All were in shocked.. But no1 could ask him why he shouted as he flee from there in no time.. In asad's car.. He was tensely siting, and driving his eyes were brimming vth tears.. As soon as switched on radio to refresh, a song played stuck his heart.. Ae- dil-e- nadaan, 2. Aarzoo kya he, justjoo kya he... He remembered it was her fvrte song.. He stopped the car and past stuck to hm .1 year ago . A soft voice made hm woke up daily,. .. " get up ashu, get up its 7 am " she said... Asad softy tug her hand and made her fall on his top, . " no prblm its 7 today is ur b'day, and for my jaan today i'l nt go office shama " asad said shama made her free from hm.. " janab today is a week after ur nikaah and u were already on leave of 2 weeks please go nw ". He left for office as he never regrets shama's words, she was life to her.. It was the same day when shama died, she was cooking in kitchen, dilshad was out, najma and nikhat were at colege, ayan was gne vth asad, he was bachelor.. Shama was about to light the gas, and asad entered the house.. A large blast sound shatered hm he ran to kitchen and found shama was burning fately' she was shouting, asad was about to go when ayan stoped hm, ayan knew nw its very dificult to save her bt atleast asad shouldnt be put to danger.. Shama shouted and shouted and finaly took her last breathe, ayan tried to stop fire bt being alone he was helples he hd to stop asad too.. Asad cried like hell, she was her life and when she left. he was all alone... His life was empty nw in fraction of seconds.. Ayan in middle nly took asad out as he knew nthng cn be dne nw.. The house was left to ashes.. They left mumbai and shifted to bhopal to forget that hatered incident.. .. Now .. This incident always left hm moaned.. Bt nw he knew hs wrk.. He left where he was suposed to go.. 2 hours before frm nw.. Asad:" hw dare you to change settings of my room " he said to zoya Zoya: "i m ur wife, and i hv full rights in ur life and room", asad holded her tight: "u cn never take shama's place" he let her free Zoya: "why, mr. Khan, u married me i dint force u , i m orphan bt is nt born to always face insult, its better i'l die, then nly alah miah wil spare" she sobbed. Asad: "my luck, go and die atleast spare me" he angrily replied, to which he dint mean. Zoya fell on ground with tears, she was heartbroken and she nly knew hw much she loved hm, frm the day 1 she lovd hm like hell but what he gve her just pain and insult.. She left home unnoticed by all.. After half an hour asad got a cal frm hospital that zoya, they cme to knw frm her pares... They informed that she hd met with an acident.. He knew it was all cz of hm.. From day 1 he always insulted her made her cry at the end of the day.. .. Now .. Asad: "its all, for my sake, i marry her, nt her, so why m i being so rude." but nt anymore.. . . ,, asad reached hospital @@@.@@@.@@@.@ hope u like it, please pm and send buddy requests