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ruhiluvzaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

loved it

please make some gap between passage😊😊

Edited by 11sinal - 12 years ago

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aish-au

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

zoya in hospital, can't wait for caring asad

update soon

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ...Asya...
mine

Unres

Loved It!!!!
Update Soon!!
When Will You Update?/
Its Cliffy
Intresting
Want To Know If Something Happened To My Love zoya😉
I Cried😃
But i Love Crying By Reading FF😃
Ty For Pm😉
Loved It

thnks so much afrin dear. U cn ask anythng, i lovd ur appreciation..
. I'l update it in next 2 or 3 days i'l pm u.

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: aish-au
zoya in hospital, can't wait for caring asad
update soon

hope for best,

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119251asya

@119251asya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

woqwww loving it awsomee write sooon

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
Its pakistani serial story na?

no way dear its totaly my idea..

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: 119251asya
woqwww loving it awsomee write sooon

thnx a lot dear

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treasure11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

hey i liked it update soon

ma pet name is ashu too😆

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linta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

That was really sad

Poor zoya😕

Enjoyed ur update

Please update soon

Keep writing

Thanks 4 the pm

Love

Linnet

😃😃😃

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

i just lovd ur comments, thnx, plz help me to increase likes and cments... Here i come vth next part..

PART 2

Asad reaches hospital in hurry,.. He inquires abt zoya and cmes to knw that she hd atempted suicide by jumping in front of car, bt is stable now...

Asad gets tensed, he think thats it is hs bd destiny that makes every1 related to hm be in pain..
He waits on chair outside ward, for doctor to cme..
Doctor comes

asad:" hws she now" he asks imediately.
Doc: "well, she is stable nw, bt..." this bt was enough to take hs breathe.
Asad: "wat doctor" he asks holding hs arm.
Doc: "mr. Khan, ur wife got hit badly on her brain portion and is nw suffer of memory loss.. The name she remember is only asad ahmad khan.."
asad was dumbstruck, he dint knw wat to do, bt he just could do was to help her as he was nly responsible for her condition...
Doc: "and ya please take care she might nt try to remember of her past" he left.

Asad went in the ward.. She was siting suporting her bck.. As she saw him..

Zoya: "asad ahmad khan, who r u mine? I just remember u, ur name, ur face bt nt our relation"
asad: comes and sits side of her legs, " u.. U.. U r my wi.. Wife " he stammered as he never hd told her as hs wife.
It was enough for zoya, she cme close to hm and hugged hm tightly, she started crying louldly..
Asad dint knew wat to do, it was 1st time she touched hm, it brought spark in hm.. Asad holded her unwiling bt felt her hairs wet, he was shocked to wat he saw.. Her clothes were red frm bck, and she was bleeding frm her head profusely, 1st he was stuck, then he realised she was shut, he was shockd to see her, he breakd the hug and found her fainted, he got scared..

She was in hs lap, bleeding made hs blue shirt look blck.

Asad: "doctor. Doctor" he shouted, with hs eyes briming vth tears, he couldnt believe he was crying for zoya..
Doctor: as he entered.." oh shit, sister.. Bring equipments, she hd undergne breakdown" doctor pointd 2 sister.
They freed asad from her..

Doctor askd hm: "did she cried" asad noded in yes..
Doc: "she hd undergne nervous breakdown, plz take cre of her, look wat hpnd" he showd asad, outway he was about to start procedure..
Asad stood out crying.. Then he felt hs fne vibrating, it was ayan, he cutd the cal, and found 32 mis calls, frm humaira, 21 frm dilshad too. Bt he was nt nw upto talk to them..
Doctor cme informing hm of her stablity and sugestd hm to tke zoya hme, as this environment could effect her..
He agreed.. Zoya was bandaged on head..
.. He took her to her as she stil couldnt walk ..

In car.
They remained silent as zoya was stil discovery their relation..

KHAN VILLA.

Dilshad was about to cl asad, when humaira shoutd: "zoya bhabhi, wat hpnd" she rushed to her and took hold of her hand, zoya huged asad in scareness.. Asad slowly took her to room..

He made her sleep in hs lap.. He dint knw why he is caring for her was it hs guilt.. Or smthng else..

He cme to hal after zoya was asleep and narated whole incident to all..
Dilshad tightly slapd asad: she was crying, "i expectd this frm u, u knw this grl maried u, just cz of our sake, otherwise, u would hv been badly insultd that day, nw wat u did," she left hm .
Humaira, ayan, najma, nikhat all made disapointed faces to hm and left..
He fel.. And started crying .. "I knw i was wrng bt i cnt gve any1 shama's place, i dint do it intentionaly"... He said.
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.. He remember the day, hw zoya cme in hs lif,..

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i m dne for the day,
hope u'l like it, do cment and like, next part after 3 days...!! Do pm me and send buddy request

thanks