#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: .Siham.

Awesomeee updateee and congraaats



Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: jeenia123



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks a lot dear for being such a sweet heart..will defo pm you tomorrow...</font>




Thankyooou fooor this awesomeee stooory 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
first congrates for new thread..
coming to update...
as usual it was awsum
police station scene was superb...
ashlok part in room was unexpected...
i thought something will happen...
but u gave a nice thing which show true love nd respect
really lovd it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

first congrates for new thread..

coming to update...
as usual it was awsum
police station scene was superb...
ashlok part in room was unexpected...
i thought something will happen...
but u gave a nice thing which show true love nd respect
really lovd it



thanks a lot dear...
Ya, ashlok room part was unexpected for me even and i wrote it in last moment before i posted because i changed the story bit form my initial in the morning itself...so twists on the way from next update...as all are longing for confession now and i don't want to starch romance more...and i got a lot to write after confession even...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thanks a lot dear.
he didn't use his hands as she was punching him and he was holding her hands on her back...
Ya naughty to wo ha, chnce to nahi chodta...
Beautiful song s well gazal...didn't i use it? no i think i used some other of jagjit singh...in the update when astha realized her love for shlok in hospital...
ya, thappad wala idea was dil movie wala, then a bit my own mind creation... yaar all ideas are mostly we get from watching movies only...
In my previous FF, child Astha was from Sadma movie...
Every idea is used in another way some where...the thing is how you modify in your own style...


Omg...hospital seen...???? Ohhh no...tum shlok ka accident karvane wali ho and he fight with death...poor Aastha...Bechari ko bohot rulati ho tum jeenia...lots of drama and love waiting for us...great yaar...

Arz kia hai...

Dill to karta hai zindagi ko kisi Qaatil k hawale kar doon,
Judaai me yon Roz - Roz ka marnaa muje Achha nahi lagta...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik


Omg...hospital seen...???? Ohhh no...tum shlok ka accident karvane wali ho and he fight with death...poor Aastha...Bechari ko bohot rulati ho tum jeenia...lots of drama and love waiting for us...great yaar...or tumhe congratulate karna to me bhull hi gayi...congratulations dear...

Arz kia hai...

Dill to karta hai zindagi ko kisi Qaatil k hawale kar doon,
Judaai me yon Roz - Roz ka marnaa muje Achha nahi lagta...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik


Omg...hospital seen...???? Ohhh no...tum shlok ka accident karvane wali ho and he fight with death...poor Aastha...Bechari ko bohot rulati ho tum jeenia...lots of drama and love waiting for us...great yaar...

Arz kia hai...

Dill to karta hai zindagi ko kisi Qaatil k hawale kar doon,
Judaai me yon Roz - Roz ka marnaa muje Achha nahi lagta...



No dear...you misunderstood, i am talking about the scene when Astha's baba was in hospital and shlok went there helping her..i had given a gazal there, i think ten to fifteen updates back...
no hospital track ..abhi to pyar k mausam hai.enjoy love shuv for some time...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
i think he should tell her the swati drama was to make her confess
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: jeenia123



thanks a lot dear...
Ya, ashlok room part was unexpected for me even and i wrote it in last moment before i posted because i changed the story bit form my initial in the morning itself...so twists on the way from next update...as all are longing for confession now and i don't want to starch romance more...and i got a lot to write after confession even...

confession is near or it will take time...
eagerly wsiting for confession

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

i think he should tell her the swati drama was to make her confess



Wait for tomorrow dear... a lot ahead...

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