#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 53

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear ad this one is going to be my biggest work till date as well as much close to my heart...most of my updaes finish in 30 paarts, this onw will go more than 40 parts if i don't cut short the story in my mind...and as i am getting response, i am in no mood to shorten it yet...lets see...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

so sweet of you for liking the update...i have also loved these parts but my favorite one in this FF is when astha says with fainted smiled...shlok to stupid hai...how can he think someone else will ever come to my life...and second one..whne he tells doctor, he says he will feel week in front of me...

Thanks a lot dear...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

waiting eagerly...

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update as usual
loved it
the start was nice
shlok was hiding his pain... And varun knowing it... And talking about chemo session


Better, before Astha come back... Shlok smiled taking his wallet and caressed Astha's picture and kissed it... you must be missing me na? Kyaa karun Astha? As much as I want to go away from you, I feel more and more attached to you...saying he placed his wallet near his heart and slept quietly...



loved the above part
then astha's return... My guess is partly right...
I thought she will leave everything when she got a doubt and come... But she waited for 5days
but I'm glad that she didn't call anyone and went directly to agnihotri mansion to know the truth...
loved astha and the doctor conversation
she used her brains😆 to know the truth
I liked it
loved varun ,,,, gauri ,,,, and astha conversation
the whole part was beautifully written


Astha slowly reached near Shlok and stood near him...she slowly sat on his bed and caressed his face... a tear escaped from her eye falling on his face...then she slowly bent and placed a kiss on his forehead...
Astha... On her touch Shlok whispered...

thought shlok 's part is not much in this update... But for me the above is superb
his love for her is so deep that he in unconscious state also recognised her touch ,,,,👍🏼
then she asking the full truth about how they know and all is superb
and then all are concerned for shlok if he come to know about astha knowing the truth... Is nice
the last is a twist... Which you under from us for now and asking us to guess😉

for me first thing came into my mind while reading it is her pregnancy... Bone marrow transplant from the baby...
bcoz its possible to do so without shlok knowing it
I'm I correct
continue soon

Originally posted by: niki795

unres ed my comment

Originally posted by: svg15

Really great update. Loved it...

May be they can try stem cell therapy... Astha might donate blood or stem cells ...

Or does she wants to have his baby :-)... To remember his memories

Originally posted by: niki795

and you please don't cut short it
I'm loving it
daily I will be waiting when you are going to update ... So that I can read and sleep

Originally posted by: naina..

told you i will have to quote each and every line of this update,loved it so realistic ... it was superb... 😊👍🏼

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Awe...such a beautiful feed back? loved it, actually i love to read longer ones...😆
I think i could portray their pain in a good way as you all are liking it and thats an extra bonus for me...
ya , shlok was not very much i this update as he is on bed now...
astha had to wait for five days, if you read previous one, she was the only one chosen from college and if she was caring for shlok, she could not run away form he responsibility too... and moreover i wanted her to come his chemo's day..(my selfishness 😉).
he recognized her touch...no matter how apart they are these days but still together and they will be, i have told many times no separation...
about your guess...i am not going to give nay hint today...

Thanks a lot dear...