#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jeenia123

Lucky to have a friend like you who is always there to appreciate my work...

thanks dear...
actually my day daily will end with reading your update...
you are a good writer ... So you should be appreciated😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: niki795

thanks dear...
actually my day daily will end with reading your update...
you are a good writer ... So you should be appreciated😊

Thanks a lot dear ad this one is going to be my biggest work till date as well as much close to my heart...most of my updaes finish in 30 paarts, this onw will go more than 40 parts if i don't cut short the story in my mind...and as i am getting response, i am in no mood to shorten it yet...lets see...

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Keep guessing dear...maybe i will get some new idea...😉

ha...ha now onwards my brain will start whispering weird ideas!should i share it or not

my brain whispers...i cant share!🤣🤣

bcoz u will think am mad!😆

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maivelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: jeenia123

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thnaks a lot for such beautiful comment...
a quote is in hindi... Khali Dimag Sahitaan ka Ghar...
and i use my khali dimag to think new ideas, as usual i am free in office...😆
I am not planning to write anything for sale a si write just for my satisfaction...anyways, if in future, ever i think so, i will miss you...
Thanks a lot for such complement...</font></font>

u mst give it a thought...
n do mention my name in acknowledgement list ...
waise try ur hand in love story may be u can create smthing like
love story
love can happen twice
a walk to remember

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naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Awe...sorry for making you sad...but it was required...
will say really weird guess...
Lets see... what next...

ya its weird but can't help medical minds have no boundaries...😆 any ways coming to the update

i really loved it ,so many emotions if i start quoting i il hav to copy the complete update😊

Shlok smiled taking his wallet and caressed Astha's picture and kissed it... you must be missing me na? Kyaa karun Astha? As much as I want to go away from you, I feel more and more attached to you...saying he placed his wallet near his heart and slept quietly...

this touched my heart...😔

n when astha came to know n slapped gauri n varun showed how heartbroken she was...

I too loved the part when astha came to shlok n kissed his forehead, n he felt her presence... for me it was the best part in todays update...😭 will be waiting for monday ... oh no how il we wait till monday...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

ha...ha now onwards my brain will start whispering weird ideas!should i share it or not
my brain whispers...i cant share!🤣🤣
bcoz u will think am mad!😆

no i will not think as i am enjoying the conversation with many people today...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: pt311288

u mst give it a thought...
n do mention my name in acknowledgement list ...
waise try ur hand in love story may be u can create smthing like
love story
love can happen twice
a walk to remember

Yaar my hubby counts me as most unromantic woman , he has met till date...i am too ba din writing romance...
even in any of my nine FFs, i have written till date, you will not get a single oe with a lot romantic scene or purely romance, i can't write about love, i can just portray emotions and specially when it comes to erotica...i am like...😕

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naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thnaks a lot dear for fr liking the update... thanks for liking her reaction, it took me atleast three hours to write previous chapter as normally it take same just one hour...

n we do appreciate your effort,it came out really well...👏

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: naina..

ya its weird but can't help medical minds have no boundaries...😆 any ways coming to the update
i really loved it ,so many emotions if i start quoting i il hav to copy the complete update😊

Shlok smiled taking his wallet and caressed Astha's picture and kissed it... you must be missing me na? Kyaa karun Astha? As much as I want to go away from you, I feel more and more attached to you...saying he placed his wallet near his heart and slept quietly...
this touched my heart...😔
n when astha came to know n slapped gauri n varun showed how heartbroken she was...
I too loved the part when astha came to shlok n kissed his forehead, n he felt her presence... for me it was the best part in todays update...😭 will be waiting for monday ... oh no how il we wait till monday...

so sweet of you for liking the update...i have also loved these parts but my favorite one in this FF is when astha says with fainted smiled...shlok to stupid hai...how can he think someone else will ever come to my life...and second one..whne he tells doctor, he says he will feel week in front of me...

Thanks a lot dear...