#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: meerab147
agree dear...but u really deserve appreciation...love u dear.❤️...👏

Love you too dear..😊
Its too easy to say Love you na? then why can't Astha?
Lets see...😉

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Drashti.surbhi

Thanks😊

you are welcome...

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Congratulations for the new thread!!

Nice update! 👏 Like how they care about each other

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naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

loved this update "Jyda ashiqui chadi hai na? Tu bhi chal hamare sath...

Chalo... Astha jumped with joy holding shlok's hand...Shlok scratched his forehead. Ye Ladki mujhse bhi badi pagal hai..."

"Inspector looked at his face angrily and slaaped on his face...saale kisi ki biwi ke bare mein ulta seedha bolega to yahi hoga... He fought with entire bus for her, then who are you to say anything? Let them go..."

these scene made me laugh...bechara sub inspector aj uska din he kharab tha ha ha...

gr8 update a complete package of love, care, n laughter... n

congratulations for the new thread dear...

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

nice update, so the police helped them:) they seem so comfortable with each other, and shlock is so sweet. Looking forward to more updates:)

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Serviana
Congratulations for the new thread!!
Nice update! 👏 Like how they care about each other

Thanks a lot dear.abhi to care dekhi hi khan hai?
Wait for future updates...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: naina..
loved this update "Jyda ashiqui chadi hai na? Tu bhi chal hamare sath...
Chalo... Astha jumped with joy holding shlok's hand...Shlok scratched his forehead. Ye Ladki mujhse bhi badi pagal hai..."
"Inspector looked at his face angrily and slaaped on his face...saale kisi ki biwi ke bare mein ulta seedha bolega to yahi hoga... He fought with entire bus for her, then who are you to say anything? Let them go..."
these scene made me laugh...bechara sub inspector aj uska din he kharab tha ha ha...
gr8 update a complete package of love, care, n laughter... n
congratulations for the new thread dear...

I was also laughing while writing and you know what? i was imagining Ashok shraaf for this scene... father of Hum Panch serial...

Thanks a lot dear,.. this is just because f love of you people... i write too much...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: latha_555
nice update, so the police helped them:) they seem so comfortable with each other, and shlock is so sweet. Looking forward to more updates:)

Thanks a lot dear...finally you found the thread?
Will update tomorrow...

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Awe...vaise looks strange na...cheesy romance and me????? two different poles...not my style... lets see if i will be able to write what i want...

even personally i also laugh on that type of cheesy and teenage romance but when we write any story then we have to match with our readers requirements

so sometimes we should forget what we are and be mischeif😉😆😃

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: roshanii

even personally i also laugh on that type of cheesy and teenage romance but when we write any story then we have to match with our readers requirements
so sometimes we should forget what we are and be mischeif😉😆😃

Ya, i am trying to write..and just hope will write it in a good healthy mischievous way with all dignity...