#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Ya, i am trying to write..and just hope will write it in a good healthy mischievous way with all dignity...

i believe in u baby good luck👍🏼

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Ang laga de re
Mohey rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Tere seene ki lau
Mere andar bhi hai

Tu hawa de isey
Toh mera tann jale
Jala de re sang jala de re
Mohey ang laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re...

beautiful update again jeenia...lovelyy...bilkul dil movie ki tarah aastha ne shlok k saath jane k liye policewale ko slap kar dia...😆 ufff !!! kaisa ye ishq hai ajab sa risk hai...ashlok is lucky ki wo police man jaan pehchaan wala nikala...verna...😲 cottage romance was too good...both are control their emotions...that was superb...yaar aastha ka muh band karne k liye shlok apna haath bhi to use kar sakta tha...but usne ye nahi kia...naughty or nice shlok...☺️😉
Thanks jeenia for your lovely comments and replys...and my fav gazal only for you my dear frd...i hope you also like it...

Bataana bhi nahi aasaan, chhupaana bhi kathin hai, Khud aaya kis kadar mushkil , mohabbat ka safar hai
Badi naajuk hai ye manjil, mohabbat ka safar hai, Dhadak aahista se yeh dil, yeh dil, mohabbat ka safar hai
Badi naajuk hai ye manjil, mohabbat ka safar hai...

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

hearty congrats my dearest dear for your new thread

you dont know how much i love your works

iam addicted to the jeenia magic😉

going to attend exams after an hour

will read update tonight and comment...

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awesomeee updateee and congraaats

Edited by .Siham. - 11 years ago

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: roshanii

i believe in u baby good luck👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Why didnt i geeet a pm :(

Sorry as you are not in my pm list...😭

will send you friend request just now...

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Accepted it thnx
Cant misss a updateee thaats why i check you other thread and founded this oneee

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Ang laga de re
Mohey rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Tere seene ki lau
Mere andar bhi hai

Tu hawa de isey
Toh mera tann jale
Jala de re sang jala de re
Mohey ang laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re...

beautiful update again jeenia...lovelyy...bilkul dil movie ki tarah aastha ne shlok k saath jane k liye policewale ko slap kar dia...😆 ufff !!! kaisa ye ishq hai ajab sa risk hai...ashlok is lucky ki wo police man jaan pehchaan wala nikala...verna...😲 cottage romance was too good...both are control their emotions...that was superb...yaar aastha ka muh band karne k liye shlok apna haath bhi to use kar sakta tha...but usne ye nahi kia...naughty or nice shlok...☺️😉
Thanks jeenia for your lovely comments and replys...and my fav gazal only for you my dear frd...i hope you also like it...

Bataana bhi nahi aasaan, chhupaana bhi kathin hai, Khud aaya kis kadar mushkil , mohabbat ka safar hai
Badi naajuk hai ye manjil, mohabbat ka safar hai, Dhadak aahista se yeh dil, yeh dil, mohabbat ka safar hai
Badi naajuk hai ye manjil, mohabbat ka safar hai...

Thanks a lot dear.
he didn't use his hands as she was punching him and he was holding her hands on her back...
Ya naughty to wo ha, chnce to nahi chodta...
Beautiful song s well gazal...didn't i use it? no i think i used some other of jagjit singh...in the update when astha realized her love for shlok in hospital...
ya, thappad wala idea was dil movie wala, then a bit my own mind creation... yaar all ideas are mostly we get from watching movies only...
In my previous FF, child Astha was from Sadma movie...
Every idea is used in another way some where...the thing is how you modify in your own style...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Accepted it thnx
Cant misss a updateee thaats why i check you other thread and founded this oneee

Thanks a lot dear for being such a sweet heart..will defo pm you tomorrow...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: -LECHU-
hearty congrats my dearest dear for your new thread
you dont know how much i love your works
iam addicted to the jeenia magic😉

going to attend exams after an hour
will read update tonight and comment...

Thanks lot dear and All the best for exam... do your best... forget your ms. nosy kirloskar and mr. handy agnihotri... just remember your medicines for some time...