#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

very nice story, written very well...with all the emotions some sad moments ,some lovely happy moments...But she is your strength Shlok... When you are with her, you are fine no matter how much in pain you are...Gauri spoke...

I know Gauri, that's why even after saying a lot of break up...I still come here daily and spend time here on your and Varun's name... when she is in front of my eyes...I feel good, I feel happy... He smiled a bit...

how will he manage without her ,he cant even stay away for a day without seeing her...😔

the flashback part was good... loved it ...n loved the song too😊

But Shlok doctor has told na, you may be fine... Chemotherapy will help...

this line gave a ray of hope to me... i don't know whats going to happen next... but wish unlike reality this fiction helps us to keep believing "everything will be fine one day" as is said' hope sustains life'... i wish they both fight this situation together n come out of it with loads of love n happiness again in their life...

its a request dear plz don't let shlok die ... rest we know u always come up with something gr8,its just my view...

will wait for your next update...😊

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: naina..
very nice story, written very well...with all the emotions some sad moments ,some lovely happy moments...But she is your strength Shlok... When you are with her, you are fine no matter how much in pain you are...Gauri spoke...
I know Gauri, that's why even after saying a lot of break up...I still come here daily and spend time here on your and Varun's name... when she is in front of my eyes...I feel good, I feel happy... He smiled a bit...
how will he manage without her ,he cant even stay away for a day without seeing her...😔
the flashback part was good... loved it ...n loved the song too😊
But Shlok doctor has told na, you may be fine... Chemotherapy will help...
this line gave a ray of hope to me... i don't know whats going to happen next... but wish unlike reality this fiction helps us to keep believing "everything will be fine one day" as is said' hope sustains life'... i wish they both fight this situation together n come out of it with loads of love n happiness again in their life...
its a request dear plz don't let shlok die ... rest we know u always come up with something gr8,its just my view...
will wait for your next update...😊

Thanks a lot dear... ya he is suffering...and he is suffering badly but wants her to leave just for her happiness even knowing he is the one who will lose everything, the day she leaves...
About shlok die or not or something else.well that's a suspense... you never know... but i always try to give proper end, lets see how the picture takes the shape...

Thanks a lot once again for liking the update...

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lt dear.don't worry , will not make you wait for long,soon, she will know about it...

😊

bye ... good night

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

thats nice idea to keep both happy and sad parts in same update...

hope she gets to know about all this soon

will be waiting for next update

Thanks a lt dear.don't worry , will not make you wait for long,soon, she will know about it...

😊

bye ... good night

Good night... Take care...😊

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: jeenia123

thats nice idea to keep both happy and sad parts in same update...

hope she gets to know about all this soon

will be waiting for next update

Thanks a lt dear.don't worry , will not make you wait for long,soon, she will know about it...

😊

bye ... good night

Good night... Take care...😊

😊

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

i got a a break and am back to my read my fav ff😛

just finished reading all the chapters!

what to say ...i expected some twist ...but

i never thought seperation track will be so intense

well done again...👏

but believe me reading 24 th chapter first thing that

came to my mind was cancer...i dont know why?😕

but i was sure that such a terrible blow only can create

utmost pain in shlok,gauri and varun...

and that can only make shlok distancing himself from astha...

but...blood cancer 3 stage...was too much for me😭 😭

its curable...😛

i personally felt so much attached to the new track

loved it to the core...

thank you jeenia for a wonderful story again...

and any medical terms help...do ask me

always for you🤗

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: -LECHU-
i got a a break and am back to my read my fav ff😛
just finished reading all the chapters!
what to say ...i expected some twist ...but
i never thought seperation track will be so intense
well done again...👏
but believe me reading 24 th chapter first thing that
came to my mind was cancer...i dont know why?😕
but i was sure that such a terrible blow only can create
utmost pain in shlok,gauri and varun...
and that can only make shlok distancing himself from astha...
but...blood cancer 3 stage...was too much for me😭 😭
its curable...😛
i personally felt so much attached to the new track
loved it to the core...
thank you jeenia for a wonderful story again...

and any medical terms help...do ask me
always for you🤗

Finally you are back? that is most important thing for me...
you get to all my tricks, i know...😉 As great minds think alike...
YA, he is suffering form cancer... but i will ot go deep as i myself don't know much about medical line...i just got idea about it from net about its symptoms, its treatment and what happens if one treatment fails, about other options etc...ya, i too know its curable but survival chnaces ar every less in third stage...Let's see what happens here...
One request, even if i give wrong details being non-medico, forgive me thinking it as fiction... but still will try to justify as much as i could understand...
will try to get clarification at some point but not today..on Monday, as that will kill your suspense...
Y, you will feel attached definitely being form medical line... but how this track is going for an engineer, ask to me, i find it too difficult to write...
but as usual , will write it in anyway.once thought is thought...

Love to read you...really happy to see you back.was missing you a lot...

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

my reaction to the current track in one word is

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: -LECHU-
my reaction to the current track in one word is

Thanks a lot dear...i wanted it.. as a feeling distressed these days, very less response from few updates... If will need your help, will definitely tell you...