#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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Anusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

all i can say now is... "told ya...😉"

but after reading today's update... i kinda felt it isn't so bad if shlok does die at the end... every story doesn't need to have a happy ending... mayb sad ones... r also good...???

anyways... u have the ultimate desicion to make... to let him live or die...

honestly am a tad bit sad... but... waiting for ur update...

do continue to write more dear...😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
i knew it...so it is blood cancer...this is the reason of ashlok's separation...verna aastha or shlok they are do dil ek jaan...loved aastha's birthday surprise to shlok...superb song i like this song...how can shlok handel this pain alon and aastha too...she don't know about his condition...ufff !!!!..kya hoga in dono ka...aastha k bagair shlok kaise rahega and aastha use jab pata tab kya hoga...waiting jeenia...

Laazim to nahi hai tumhe aankho se hi dekhu,
Kya Tera Tassaawur Tere Deedar se kum hai...

It was so predictable na?
I know, but this is not actual twist dear...twist will be on Friday itself as usual...just wait for that...
and they are not together doesn't mean they are separated, they are still do dil ek jaan...
Ya, but for sure shlok is saying he can handle alone but he can't... you will see...

tu kahe na kahe, tere dard ko pehchaan lenge hum,
Ankhon se hi tere dil ka haal jaan lenge hum...
Shayad Aaj tu bechain ha aur tanhaa bhi
Par yaad rakhna, kisi roz teri tanhaniyon ko bhi apna maan lenge hum...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: crazygul
jenni. unko judaa matt karna.. plzzz. i just love them.. humesh saath rahe voh.. sdaa sdaa k liye..

Even i love them a lot... don';'t worry dear...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: Anusha16
all i can say now is... "told ya...😉"
but after reading today's update... i kinda felt it isn't so bad if shlok does die at the end... every story doesn't need to have a happy ending... mayb sad ones... r also good...???

anyways... u have the ultimate desicion to make... to let him live or die...

honestly am a tad bit sad... but... waiting for ur update...

do continue to write more dear...😊

Ya, everybody here almost knew yesterday, but i ma saying again and again this is not the major twist... major one will be on Friday or Monday... that you can;t guess...😉

about happy or sad ending.i can't tell... because, i am also not sure...lets wait...\

thanks a lot dear

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

nooo

you cant do it jeenia...

if you will do it then😡

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: roshanii
nooo
you cant do it jeenia...
if you will do it then😡

do you what a story without twist?
I don;t think so...see i last four updates, it was too smooth, did anyone give response?? too less...
Happy stories never work... you need material that attracts you, that make you feel happy, blush at times, sad at time and cry even...
Just wait dear... for next updates...

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: jeenia123

do you what a story without twist?
I don;t think so...see i last four updates, it was too smooth, did anyone give response?? too less...
Happy stories never work... you need material that attracts you, that make you feel happy, blush at times, sad at time and cry even...
Just wait dear... for next updates...

oh jeenia darling i only want to say that dont kill Shlok at last please

give twists as you want

but dont kill the lead

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: roshanii

oh jeenia darling i only want to say that dont kill Shlok at last please
give twists as you want
but dont kill the lead

Awee... see the curiosity , i am getting on my FF after a couple of days...some requesting me to give happy ending and some for sad ending...
Let me decide yet...😉

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Awee... see the curiosity , i am getting on my FF after a couple of days...some requesting me to give happy ending and some for sad ending...
Let me decide yet...😉

please dear happy ending