#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 35

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Awee... so sad...but i really thought you are busy somewhere else.as i am her for half an hour but didn't get any conversation from you...

Originally posted by: niki795

sorry yaar ... I was putting my daughter to bed...
I saw you online before going... But then net problem ..
but 2nd is not bad😊

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Hey please don't feel sorry. children are always first priority...They need us more than our friends...

Originally posted by: niki795

ASUSUAL AWESOME UPDATE

LOVED IT

SHLOK AND GAURI CONVO WAS NICE

SHLOK DONT WANT ASTHA TO BREAKDOWN

After crying a lot, Shlok was a bit comfortable as well as breathless... Gauri immediately took medicine from his pocket and gave him, he laid on sofa impatiently for some time and was fine after half an hour...

AFTER READING I THOUGHT HE IS HAVING ASTHMA... THEN I WAS THINKING Y IS HE HIDING THIS FROM ASTHA...

just I know how I control my pain in front of her after each chemotherapy session...

THEN I READ THIS... I WAS LIKE PLZ DONT TELL HE IS HAVING CANCER...

I am suffering from Blood cancer that too at third stage with very few chances of my survival ...He broke down...

THEN I READ THIS.. IF ASTHA COMES TO KNOW SHE WILL DEFINITELY BREAKDOWN AND FIRST SHE WILL BE ANGRY ON EVERYONE FOR NOT TELLING HER😭

Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai, Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai
Mere paas hai ,Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan, Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan, Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Bade zor ki aaj barsaat, Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin, Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin, Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai,Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, Mere saath hai mere saath hai

SUPERB SONG SELECTION... I LOVE THIS SONG

THE FLASHBACK ASTHA AND SHLOK PART IS SUPERB...

ASTHA SURPRISE FOR SHLOK IS NICE.. LIKED IT

When Gauri knocked at the door muttering... kaisa time aa gya hai yaar..aj kal mujhe apne room mein bhi knock kar ke ana padta hai...

😆

THE LAST PART MADE ME SAD

EVERYONE KNOW ABOUT HIS CONDITION EXCEPT ASTHA..

HOW WILL SHLOK SURVIVE FOR SEVEN DAYS WITHOUT SEEING HER

HOPE EVERYTHING GETS WELL SOON

CONTINUE SOON

TOTALLY SUPERB UPDATE

Originally posted by: niki795

UNRES ED MY COMMENT

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear for liking the update...
Now i will try to make it happy as well as sad one. happy with past moments and sad wit present...
But he thinks about just her happiness, he feels if she leaves form his life before knowing the truth, it will be fine...
Yes, i too think, how will he survive for seven day without her... and he thinks about to send her back forever from his life...

Will try to update tomorrow...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

unres ed my views too...

Originally posted by: niki795

thats nice idea to keep both happy and sad parts in same update...

hope she gets to know about all this soon

will be waiting for next update

Originally posted by: latha_555

a nice but very sad update. interested to know how aastha will react when she sees him after one week. i am confident that he will recover completely and we will get the happy ending we want.