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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mmjjppss

Jeenia wru? When ll u update



Updating in a while yaar...
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Thanks guys for liking previous update... just updating in a while...
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Part-25

As Astha went outside with Varun, Shlok came back inside...

Gauri went to her running... Shlok... she held him hugging to make him feel good...

After crying a lot, Shlok was a bit comfortable as well as breathless... Gauri immediately took medicine from his pocket and gave him, he laid on sofa impatiently for some time and was fine after half an hour...

Shlok... Gauri spoke softly caressing his forehead... Why don't you tell her truth?

She can't handle it Gauri... I know, she will break...

But when she will know...even then she will break...

That's why I want her to leave from here as soon as possible...

just I know how I control my pain in front of her after each chemotherapy session... just because I want to look strong in front of her...I can't make myself week...I want to show her, I can live without her...just one impression of pain on my face will tell her complete truth...

But she is your strength Shlok... When you are with her, you are fine no matter how much in pain you are...Gauri spoke...

I know Gauri, that's why even after saying a lot of break up...I still come here daily and spend time here on your and Varun's name... when she is in front of my eyes...I feel good, I feel happy... He smiled a bit...

But Shlok doctor has told na, you may be fine... Chemotherapy will help...

I may be but even doctors are not sure...and for how long Gauri? Why these false hopes? We all know, what doctor had said... he had clearly said, just few months... That too even that time... Shlok paused...And that too I am living just for Astha.. Once she leave from here, all reasons of my life will vanish...

And you think, she will? She has cleared, she will never... Then why are you paining her as well as yourself? You know how hurt she is, she doesn't cry because you had taken promise from her...she doesn't listen bad about you because she has so much trust in you... and you know how adamant she is...even we are trying our best to convince her, but does she listen? Gauri paused... Sometimes, when I see both of you in pain...I really cry to tell her truth... But your promise is holding us... A tear rolled over Gauri's face...

I know Gauri...but why don't you understand? Now just her heart is broken... once she will be back to Pune...soon ayii baba will find suitable match for her and if not so soon but later she will be fine forgetting me, if not forgetting then at least my memories will be faded with time in her mind... but if she knows the truth...she will be just with me till end of my life and after that, she will have nothing except pain and tears for whole life... the how can I tell her...I am suffering from Blood cancer that too at third stage with very few chances of my survival ...He broke down... When Varun came there and hugged him tightly...

After some time... Shlok was a bit fine... She has gone? He asked Varun...

Ya, but still just talking about you, warned me to take care of you and tell me about you daily...Shlok she thinks you are doing it purposely...it's not easy to convince her to leave you...

I know guys, but I trust you, you will have to break her confidence in me...by any means... Shlok spoke...

Ok, should we go now? We have doctor's appointment moreover ayii baba will be waiting there... Varun held Shlok...

Ya, let's go... Saying Shlok left with varun from there...

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There in the plane, Astha was missing Shlok looking at their old picture of his birthday...slowly she touched Shlok's face in picture softly...


Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai, Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai
Mere paas hai ,Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan, Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan, Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Bade zor ki aaj barsaat, Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin, Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin, Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai,Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, Mere saath hai mere saath hai

They had returned from home After Diwali and told everybody about their commitment...

After their semester exams, all were ready to leave... When Shlok came to Astha in her room hugging her... Leaving today? He spoke seriously...

Ya...she smiled...but just for ten days... Why don't you come with me?

Ya, everybody will say, what kind of son-in-law he is? Always at his in-laws...he smiled...

Shut up...ayii baba now love you more than me... Astha spoke...

Ya..i know and why will they not? After all their life time trouble is shifting to me? He spoke naughtily winking at her...Shlok...she shouted and started beating him with taking cushion from bed, while he pulled her into his arms falling on the bed...

Astha, I love you... He spoke looking into her eyes...

I love you too Shlok...saying Astha placed a kiss on his forehead...

Astha, we will never separate...Astha immediately placed her hand on his lips... Never say so Shlok... Never use separate word... We will always be together...saying she placed her lips on his...and hugged him tight...I Love you Shlok... I Love you very much...I will always be with you since last breath of my life...

No, we will be together since last breath of our life...saying Shlok placed his lips on Astha's pulling her closer and both were lost into each other for long holding each other...

When Gauri knocked at the door muttering... kaisa time aa gya hai yaar..aj kal mujhe apne room mein bhi knock kar ke ana padta hai...

All started laughing at her comment...

While Shlok held Astha's hand sitting on the bed... Astha, can't you stay for one more day?

No Shlok, its urgent..ayii baba is waiting for me... If there is anything important, then...

Humm...Shlok looked at her...no, nothing so..vais bhi..i was thinking there will be one day less away from you... he caressed her face...

Sorry jaan... But promise...will try to come one day before... Astha smiled...

K... he smiled... Let's go I will drop you all...

First Shlok dropped Varun and Gauri to railway station and then to Astha at bus stand standing there till her bus started...

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Finally back home... Shlok spoke...alone... no this is not home without Astha...he spoke to himself locking the door again and going out...

It was almost Eleven thirty and Shlok was still driving on the roads of Mumbai killing his time, when he got a call from someone... Sir, your flat has caught fire, come soon...

But who are you? Shlok spoke... but till then call was cut. He immediately ran towards his flat...

As he reached there, he found completely dark, he immediately opened the lock...there was no fire... looks someone played with me...he muttered...

He turned on the lights and someone hugged him from back... As he turned...

Astha sang in his ear... Happy Birthday to you... ?Happy birthday to you... Happy birthday dear Shlok... Happy birthday to you...

He was surprised to see...his flat was decorated and a cake was placed on the table...

He looked at Astha with smile...

How could you imagine, I will go without celebrating your birthday? Saying Astha kissed on his cheek...he was overwhelmed and hugged her tight...you remembered...

Of course I remembered, just planned this surprise for you...

But...he was about to speak.

Ya, as you left, I stopped bus and came here, I know, you are not going to enter in the flat being alone...so it was easier for me...she spoke hanging around his neck...he picked her into his arms bringing near table and both cut the cake and fed each other...and Astha clicked their pics in her mobile together...

Astha handed over a box to Shlok...

What's this? He raised his eye brows...

Your birthday gift...just open it...Astha smiled...

Shlok opened it...it was a wallet with their photo in it...

Beautiful ...just like you...

You will always keep it with you and tis will make you remember me always... Astha spoke...

I don't need to remember you jaan...you are always with me, in front of my eyes...cause, this is the last break you are going alone. After this...you will be just with me, for every moment... Saying Shlok hugged her.

Why Shlok... We promised...we will always be together...then why did you turn your face from me?

You had promised na, that was my last trip without you, then how could you allow me come alone even now? Please come back to me...I am nothing without you...saying she kissed the picture placing it near her heart...

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At hospital...

Doctor, how is Shlok? Niranjan asked...

His condition is same not very good not very bad...but I have already told you, what we need...

On medicines and chemotherapy, we may keep him alive till he respond to ... But once his body became usual of this, may be it will leave responding... ... Soon chemotherapy's side effect will be visible like loss of hair, weight loss, loss of appetite and many more... I fear, we will lose him..

No, Anjali shouted. We can't lose Shlok. He is my only son... she was crying badly...Doctor Please do anything, we may pay anything... In lakhs, in crores...anything,. But my son should be safe...while Varun wrapped his arm around them... Auntie, uncle please hold yourself. If you will lose control, how will we handle Shlok in this situation when Astha is also not here...

Astha is not here? Anjali was shocked...

Ya, she has left for one week for a conference... Till now he was controlling his pain, his worries seeing Astha... but I fear, these seven days are going to be toughest for all of us...


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So how did you all like it? but i m getting very less response these days... even guesses are welcomed...

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey i m first today... but im really upset... r u goin to make shlok die... poor asHlok... really a heart wrenching update...:(
Edited by mmjjppss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thnaks for being first one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ASUSUAL AWESOME UPDATE
LOVED IT
SHLOK AND GAURI CONVO WAS NICE
SHLOK DONT WANT ASTHA TO BREAKDOWN

After crying a lot, Shlok was a bit comfortable as well as breathless... Gauri immediately took medicine from his pocket and gave him, he laid on sofa impatiently for some time and was fine after half an hour...


AFTER READING I THOUGHT HE IS HAVING ASTHMA... THEN I WAS THINKING Y IS HE HIDING THIS FROM ASTHA...

just I know how I control my pain in front of her after each chemotherapy session...

THEN I READ THIS... I WAS LIKE PLZ DONT TELL HE IS HAVING CANCER...

I am suffering from Blood cancer that too at third stage with very few chances of my survival ...He broke down...

THEN I READ THIS.. IF ASTHA COMES TO KNOW SHE WILL DEFINITELY BREAKDOWN AND FIRST SHE WILL BE ANGRY ON EVERYONE FOR NOT TELLING HER😭

Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai, Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai
Mere paas hai ,Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan, Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan, Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Bade zor ki aaj barsaat, Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin, Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin, Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai,Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, Mere saath hai mere saath hai



SUPERB SONG SELECTION... I LOVE THIS SONG



THE FLASHBACK ASTHA AND SHLOK PART IS SUPERB...

ASTHA SURPRISE FOR SHLOK IS NICE.. LIKED IT


When Gauri knocked at the door muttering... kaisa time aa gya hai yaar..aj kal mujhe apne room mein bhi knock kar ke ana padta hai...

😆


THE LAST PART MADE ME SAD

EVERYONE KNOW ABOUT HIS CONDITION EXCEPT ASTHA..

HOW WILL SHLOK SURVIVE FOR SEVEN DAYS WITHOUT SEEING HER

HOPE EVERYTHING GETS WELL SOON

CONTINUE SOON

TOTALLY SUPERB UPDATE



Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Awee... so sad...but i really thought you are busy somewhere else.as i am her for half an hour but didn't get any conversation from you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no, that very sad. Pls et them be together. It is sad that Shlok is suffering illness. I would not have mind a separation track instead.😭
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Originally posted by: Ladygirl

oh no, that very sad. Pls et them be together. It is sad that Shlok is suffering illness. I would not have mind a separation track instead.😭



First of all tell me why do you want to read just normal and common things?

atleast i am not used to give that,,,,, for separation track... I had made it very clear in advance, its not going to be common one...

They are together and they will be...

There is one saying.. aag mein sona aur bhi nikharta hi...
Same is with love... sufferings make love strong...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mmjjppss

Hey i m first today... but im really upset... r u goin to make shlok die... poor asHlok... really a heart wrenching update...:(



Please yaar...don't over think... i am not make shlok die so soon... there is a lot to go yet...
An illness doesn't mean he will die...

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