The Truth About Taani (rest of the update is done on Pg.9!) - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: _Saavi_

Thank you for the update!! 🤗 fully enjoyed the update. 😊 😊


Dude, I am so happy to have finished this update! Now I can put this on the back-burner for a month to focus on other stories.
I'm so glad you liked it! What would you say your favorite part was? Or your favorite new character?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
PMs have been sent! So please, read, like and comment! And if you didn't like it, I'm sorry, there is not dislike button, and I wish there was, but feel free to leave me a comment, CONSTRUCTIVE NOT DESTRUCTIVE! There is no place for destruction here, only construction. This is a construction site, not a demolition plant, thank you and good night!
Jokes, I'm not done yet! Also, sorry to anyone who actually put themselves through the torture of reading my entire PM, I love you, and I feel for you. But honey, all you got was PM! Can you imagine what my loved ones must deal with every day, cuz' let me real with you... it ain't pretty!

So moral of the story is, like of dislike, only building my writing skills please, not tearing my self-esteem as a writer. If you don't like my writing, don't just tell me what's wrong, tell me what I can do differently! I'm not pure evil, just semi evil. And I don't bite, I nibble. Also, in case some of you haven't realized yet, I'm a total weirdo!

Love you all, and good night!

Yes, I am finally done, I've got nothing left to say, I swear. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Loved it..
What happened in the ball
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it..
What happened in the ball


Yay, thank you! What was your favorite part? Favorite new character?
Let me be real with you... I was lazy, and didn't want to write it, and the chapter felt long either way so... I guess we'll find out when I update it! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: foreverlazy



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Dude, I am so happy to have finished this update! Now I can put this on the back-burner for a month to focus on other stories.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">I'm so glad you liked it! What would you say your favorite part was? Or your favorite new character?</font>



God! It so hard to pick any. This whole update was so good. You really showed the essence of friendship and family. With the normal bickering and fighting to the person that always stops the fighting and bickering. I just love the way you fully show the feelings behind each person. I cant wait for the next update whn it comes. 😊 😊 will wait till your ready. Thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: _Saavi_



God! It so hard to pick any. This whole update was so good. You really showed the essence of friendship and family. With the normal bickering and fighting to the person that always stops the fighting and bickering. I just love the way you fully show the feelings behind each person. I cant wait for the next update whn it comes. 😊 😊 will wait till your ready. Thank you for the pm.


Thank you!!! I wish you could see my smile right now, because it is so big that it's hurting my face! 😆 I was going to add in something Sharon as well, but I decided against it. Too much for one update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Thanks!!! What do you like best about it?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

Thank you! What did you like best about it?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
hi,
i am probably a new fan of your stories
this one is really amazing
the characters here are very relate-able
first of all thanks for the pm
ok so my comment won't end such short
i am commenting on each and every chapter in a different post
so waste some of your precious time
and read my long coming comment
a last thing you are an amazing writter
hats off for handling so many characters
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Posted: 8 years ago
so starting with your cs
a very long one
you have many characters
and a detailed cs
taani is almost an al rounder
but shooting the gun is my favorite
girls with strong characters are always my favorite
and shooting thing is something that fascinates me
Disha well i like characters who have attitude
those dialogues are interesting to read so i like Disha as well
more than her i like her pet name Dish Fish
so cute😆
next Anya well her character is very relatable so she will be one of my favourite characters to read
tomboys are always relateable
i also like girls who play sports
so do show them playing some sports at time
horseback ridding my favourite.
Avi...well i'll wait for his character to unfold
Arjun i'll love him if that technology thing is shown
i mean i am a technology freak
other than that his mischievous self will also end up being my favorite
somehow i like the name Arjun very much even though its age old
Sagar so does he happens to be Swayam's twin?
also is anya paired up against him?
the CS doubts so
but as much as i love Vrushan i won't mind a fresh pairing as well
anyways Sagar's character is like a extrovert with hidden qualities
i like those hidden once specially poetry painting is anyother thing that fascinates me
i want to see him fliting i mean in any show Shantanu never flirted so Sagar flirting will be imagining Shantanu to flirt
bro exectly opposite Swayam i really want to see their scenes
specially the one when Sagar will get angry on Swayam
show it preety soon
i am waiting
next on the list Sanaya
writer who is shy very relate able i want to see how this character develops
one more thing in some places you wrote Shanaya is it a different character or both are same?
Shivam the cs is not clear so i won't comment now on him
but i love Shivam's character so will wait for the character
Aliya fun character her antics will be something to watch for already my favourite
Raghav responsible owner of a music company interested
will bring some sanity to these insane bunch of people probably😆
who is the ishaan you are talking about i mean he is not mentioned in the CS but you said he is raghav's brother
Aditi her character is contradicting her own i mean ya she is complicated lets see...
the Shergill's lets see who they are
parents and grandparents
loving and protective nice
so there were problems between Rishi and Swayam humm...
next Anamika the lime light stealer of the cs
is she alive or dead?
well it as build suspense already
Armaan Riddhima would be fun supporting characters
possessive brother bhabi
karan i already love him
most favorite among all
kids...
Viren another possessive brother
sweet charming well that's interesting
guess Taani has alot of possessive brothers
Abhi so Taani has an irritating brother as well that's fun
Sid poor guy being fired out always
Kiya well i'll wait for her character to unfold
Nikita so the brothers hate her nice...her character is also good
Maya a girl strongly behind her passion that's nice
interested to see her and Sid's fights
next jeevika a girl to show these crazy people the right path much needed character
KD again i'll wait for the character to unfold
so ya i practically love most of your characters


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