The Truth About Taani (rest of the update is done on Pg.9!) - Page 11

the chapters res for now i'll comment later

Originally posted by: rustedsparks

hi,

i am probably a new fan of your stories

this one is really amazing

the characters here are very relate-able

first of all thanks for the pm

ok so my comment won't end such short

i am commenting on each and every chapter in a different post

so waste some of your precious time

and read my long coming comment

a last thing you are an amazing writter

hats off for handling so many characters

Originally posted by: rustedsparks

so starting with your cs

a very long one

you have many characters

and a detailed cs

taani is almost an al rounder

but shooting the gun is my favorite

girls with strong characters are always my favorite

and shooting thing is something that fascinates me

Disha well i like characters who have attitude

those dialogues are interesting to read so i like Disha as well

more than her i like her pet name Dish Fish

so cute😆

next Anya well her character is very relatable so she will be one of my favourite characters to read

tomboys are always relateable

i also like girls who play sports

so do show them playing some sports at time

horseback ridding my favourite.

Avi...well i'll wait for his character to unfold

Arjun i'll love him if that technology thing is shown

i mean i am a technology freak

other than that his mischievous self will also end up being my favorite

somehow i like the name Arjun very much even though its age old

Sagar so does he happens to be Swayam's twin?

also is anya paired up against him?

the CS doubts so

but as much as i love Vrushan i won't mind a fresh pairing as well

anyways Sagar's character is like a extrovert with hidden qualities

i like those hidden once specially poetry painting is anyother thing that fascinates me

i want to see him fliting i mean in any show Shantanu never flirted so Sagar flirting will be imagining Shantanu to flirt

bro exectly opposite Swayam i really want to see their scenes

specially the one when Sagar will get angry on Swayam

show it preety soon

i am waiting

next on the list Sanaya

writer who is shy very relate able i want to see how this character develops

one more thing in some places you wrote Shanaya is it a different character or both are same?

Shivam the cs is not clear so i won't comment now on him

but i love Shivam's character so will wait for the character

Aliya fun character her antics will be something to watch for already my favourite

Raghav responsible owner of a music company interested

will bring some sanity to these insane bunch of people probably😆

who is the ishaan you are talking about i mean he is not mentioned in the CS but you said he is raghav's brother

Aditi her character is contradicting her own i mean ya she is complicated lets see...

the Shergill's lets see who they are

parents and grandparents

loving and protective nice

so there were problems between Rishi and Swayam humm...

next Anamika the lime light stealer of the cs

is she alive or dead?

well it as build suspense already

Armaan Riddhima would be fun supporting characters

possessive brother bhabi

karan i already love him

most favorite among all

kids...

Viren another possessive brother

sweet charming well that's interesting

guess Taani has alot of possessive brothers

Abhi so Taani has an irritating brother as well that's fun

Sid poor guy being fired out always

Kiya well i'll wait for her character to unfold

Nikita so the brothers hate her nice...her character is also good

Maya a girl strongly behind her passion that's nice

interested to see her and Sid's fights

next jeevika a girl to show these crazy people the right path much needed character

KD again i'll wait for the character to unfold

so ya i practically love most of your characters

Originally posted by: rustedsparks

the chapters res for now i'll comment later

preety much bored

but i'll comment for sure

and ofcourse my comments aren't really short

so a big res

Originally posted by: Muskan_TR

when will u update thus?

yayyy
u updared :*

loveddd it...
every scene was like LOL
N Dadaji 😆

protective bhaiyas n bhabhi n bhne 😆
ab gang ka kya hoga...
chodo...Swayam n rey ka kya hoga 😆

ab plz jalsiii update karba

That update was absolutely beautiful!! I swear to god, this and a few other fanfictions and books are keeping me afloat at college right now cause midterms and death tbh. I'm actually worried for the gang when the Bakshi family decides to eventually "drop in" for a "visit". That is bound to be oodles of fun, huh? :"D Drop me a message when you update again!!

Originally posted by: Forever_Fangirl

That update was absolutely beautiful!! I swear to god, this and a few other fanfictions and books are keeping me afloat at college right now cause midterms and death tbh. I'm actually worried for the gang when the Bakshi family decides to eventually "drop in" for a "visit". That is bound to be oodles of fun, huh? :"D Drop me a message when you update again!!

awessome update
funny convo of arjun's funeral b/w taani and raghav
too hilarious
disha and aditi chasing arjun is awesome

awesomely written
extremely hilarious convo
love this taani
what better way to take off your anger
she is a princess
the family is really crazy
loved it to the core

Originally posted by: atulaya_taarey

awessome update
funny convo of arjun's funeral b/w taani and raghav
too hilarious
disha and aditi chasing arjun is awesome