Swaron TS: The Unexpected Last part pg 9

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Nila

@Glowing_Star

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Wow! Superb ending !!👏

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fanista

@fanista

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

really more than beautiful ,

very loving

innocently penned

bohuth achha tha

keep going :)

i could'nt help but blush during various scenarios

thanks for pming me :)

love to read the stuff you write

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Yogini

@yogini64

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

thats a lovely update... 😃

swayam must be very good guitarist ... no wonder.. he won without practising so hard... 👏

never knew their feelings would be ignited so soon... 😉

propose bhi kar diya... soo fast... 😛

location is lovely... swayam is definitely very smart 😊

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cool.surabhi

@cool.surabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Its so nice... I liked the idea of playing guitar as i myself want to learn it...

And song selection was also nice...

Keep writing more n thanks for the pm...

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Amazing work..the complete scenario was so lovely i enjoyed each scene where guitar n swayam took place..at the writer end where u described such beautiful confession n loved the way u wrote..so in all,gud work..

Thanx for pm

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago