Swaron TS: The Unexpected Last part pg 9

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

this was suchhh a cuteee endingg😳

and d song part was too good👏

lovedd ittt⭐️

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Nice one dear...thnx for d PM

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

I loved this guitar idea right from the beginning and even more the idea of Swayam teaching Sharon it was wow Kri loved it very very much and this update was damn nice..👍🏼.
I liked a few moments of this update they are the moment Sharon is lost in Swayam's eyes when he comes to correct her notes on the guitar, her nervousness around him, her happiness on receiving a text from him all of it too good and the first love type feelings..❤️.
I loved how Swayam proposed her and Marine Drive is indeed a very romantic place..😃.
All in all your update was lovely Kri like always mujhe bahut pasand aaya so keep writing babe..😃.
Love,
Kash..🤗.

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

great part!!
loved it!!
it was awesome!!

thanks for the pm.

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

loved the song you chose.
finally they are official.
feelings were really well penned down.
thanks 4 d pm

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

it was amazing update diii
just loved it..

entire update was beautifully penned down...

sharon's awkwardness was nicely portrayed..

loved d song selection...

and den beautiful ending...

I to loved it bery much diii
sorry for being late😳

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

I lyked it!!! Very beautifully written!!! Esp loved the song, suited the situation well!!!

Thnx for the pm!!! 😊

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

That was sweet :)

I liked how they were developing feelings for each other

And I'm happy they ended up together as well

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Beautiful ts.
Swayam as a guitarist ws a nice idea. Luvd it.

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Nice ending to a beautiful story. Swayam's and Sharon's pov were nicely given. They way you described their feelings was apt. The guitar lessons were really good.