Swaron TS: The Unexpected Last part pg 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
how could i miss this 😲😭
its so amazing
lovely concept
leaving alone is a really bad feeling (i don't have any experience though neither i want to have 😛)
the way swayam and sharon met was nice😛
two strangers were talking so comfortably with each other..sometimes aisa hota h 😛
Swayam in a music competition 😛
waiting for the next part 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
This really was wonderfully penned piece of work.

The way you have simply put up his loneliness and frustration of being all alone,, in a city away from his family. *hatts off girl*

And moreover,, his encounter with the two talkitive girls,, no wonder one being Sharon ;)

For the first time I get to see,, Swayam jealous of Sharon :D though for a different reason but still jealousy. 😆

I am looking forward to know what next? Will he be able to tutor Sharon privately?

That would be fun to read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Amazingly written! Waiting for the update! Do PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
I loved it! Chatty Sharon and Depressed Swayam... I so know the feeling when someone comes into your life when you are at your loneliest down, and you feel like you've known them for years and you can talk on and on... It was beautiful, and really struck a chord with me... Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply amazing start..Specially i loved the concept which is about Working bachelors away from their family,their hometown.Personally I can easily understand his pain..Its very difficult to live away with such a new surroundings,new peoples,everything is like NEW...I too feel same as it is also my story..The biggest turning point is Jab ghar chodke bahar ki duniya dekhni padti hai..It makes hell difficult for u..But it also makes u experienced to enjoy such a new challenging ups and Down of life..Its common story now a days..So i just loved the swayam monolouge..His POV was well described..Well penned..Now i like SwaRon first meet..Both were calm and comfortable with each other..Anyways i am just looking forward to read sharon part..Do update soon


Thanx for PM and sorry for being late..I am deadly loaded with pending PM's..I also have to reply ur previous PM's..Hope u dont mind..


Prateek



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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
kriti dii pehle to sorry for late review😳
and then a tight waali jhappi 🤗 for this brilliant concept
I really like the whole mysteriousness of the plot
Swayam's story was very ominous but still interiguing loved how you penned his character.I loved the whole write up because of the way it was penned.It had me hooked from the first line itself.
Looking forward to Sharon's story and how Swaron happens.Nice concept loved it dii.Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Amazing piece of writing<3
Simply wow!! Loved Swayam's part a lot. Poor boy he's so fed up from his usual boring life but Sharon can surely bring loads of happiness in it anyway.
Waiting for the next part and the guitar competition.
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
beautiful start... pls pm me the next part n do continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Awesome TS :)
Loved it :)
Pls update soon :)
PM me when you update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Part 2

*SPEAKERS OFF*

The whole week went in preparation for competition. It was very tough competition but for Swayam it seems that it doesn't matter.

Swayam didn't showcase his guitar even before both of them just told them to watch in the competition. Maybe he was too overconfident.

Sharon was sipping her coffee in the college cafe.

"So all ready to learn guitar from me?"Swayam suddenly appeared.

"First win the competition then we'll see."

She stood up to walk but got slipped n Swayam caught hold of her.

They were staring each other in the same position.

Sharon didn't know why but his touch was creating a tickling sensation within her.

The moment she looked into his eyes she felt as if drowning into his brown eyes.

Tring Tring

They came out of the trance. Awkwardly Swayam left Sharon n made her stand.

Sharon was lost throughout the day. Even Natasha was tired if asking.

Sharon was trying out to concentrate on other things but nothing was helping.

The competition day came they both behave normal with each other not remembering the incident.

Swayam played as a professional guitarist n there was no chance he can't win the competition. Multi-talented guy.

After the competition Swayam invited Sharon n Natasha for the treat of win

"Yummy, the dinner is very tasty" Natasha said while stuffing it in her mouth.

Of course she wasn't so stupid to sense the uneasiness between them n tried to break the silence.

Sharon n Swayam both knew that something is wrong between them for which they were avoiding since past few days.

Suddenly Natasha stood up. "I've to reach urgently somewhere. Sorry Swayam, dinner was amazing." N she left.

The awkwardness prevailed in the room.

They had finished with their dinner.

"Can you show me where is washroom?" Sharon said after sometime.

"Yeah that way." He pointed to the room.

Sharon splashed water on her face. "What is happening to me? Why I'm not able to talk properly with him?"

Sharon walked into the room. It was nicely arranged. There were many photo frames showcasing his family, friends, achievements.

Swayam was getting impatient as Sharon was taking too much time. He walked inside the room there she was examining his room.

"Sharon" he called her name.

She was startled as she was inspecting someone's room without permission. She was highly embarrassed.

"Uhh sorry" Sharon managed to utter.

"Its okay" Swayam replied with a smile.

"So when r u planning to teach guitar to me? Remember the challenge?" Sharon asked.

"Of course your honor, I'm all ready. We can start from tomorrow itself."

"Fine with me. I should also go family must be waiting. Text me the timings.

" She left for her home.

They both were experiencing an unknown feeling but avoided.

Next day

Sharon woke up yawning. A sweet smile was playing on her lips. She was excited.

Beep Beep

"10 am"

She looked at the wall clock. It was 8 now.

She fastened her daily routine n went to his home.

He opened the door n welcomed her. He had made all the arrangements.

They started the practice. Swayam first explained the basics n ask her to try on guitar. Sharon had good knowledge of music so it wasn't difficult for her to catch the notes.

Meanwhile Swayam sipped his coffee. She stopped in between n tried to get the correct note. Suddenly she felt his touch. He was correcting her way of playing. She couldn't concentrate n was drowned into his chocolate brown eyes. She came out of trance when he waved his hand.

"Sharon what happened? It is not much difficult as much u think."

Swayam held the guitar from behind not leaving her n played it. Sharon was numb he was playing with her senses. She literally forced herself to focus on guitar but unable to do.

She abruptly stood up making Swayam shocked.

"I I h a ve to go." Sharon stammered trying to make an excuse. "I've work in college."

"But you have vacations."

"Work in administration department."

"Okay see you tomorrow."

Sharon ran out of his house catching her breath. Calming down herself she went to a cafe. Sipping the coffee she started thinking of her n Swayam's equation. Which was confusing her.

She made herself fool in front of Swayam.

"Excuse me Mam. Would you like to order something more?" A waitor approached her. She realized that her coffee was finished.

"No thanks." She walked out of the cafe.

"I should call Swayam n fix the timings for tomorrow." Sharon said to herself.

"Naah I should go back to his home. What would be he thinking of me."

Sharon went to his home n his door was opened. She entered n heard him playing guitar.

*SPEAKERS ON AND REFRESH PAGE*

Swayam adjusted the book having the music notes written on the stand and tuned his guitar accordingly and started singing with his eyes closed and letting the music sink in..

Ho..

Ho ho ho...

hmm hmm...

He couldn't help but imagine Sharon while singing each word.. He smiled remembering her expressive face when she is talking.. The way her eyes glitter with each word..

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti

Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti

Andar se kitni tez hai

Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti

Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti

Philosophy ka craze hai

Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai

He remembered their first meet and how they had talked and ended up with the challenge.. The remembered when they met the next time and the way he caught her from falling.. He was lost in her eyes and he was sure his heart had skipped a beat then..

Ye kahaan main aa gaya ?!

Bolo ye kaisa ye teyaar hai

Dil kisi ka ho gaya

Naa isspe ikhtaiyar hai

Karun toh kya karun ?

Kahun toh kya kahun ?

Ye gaana bhi toh usko paas laane ka bahana hai

Woh chhup-chhup mere dil ke raaz kholti

Haan takiye mein mere khwaab bhi tatolati

Possessiveness ka case hai

He was glad she had come to learn guitar from him.. All the time they spent during the lesson.. The way her held her hand.. The electric current that passed through his body.. Here skin felt as soft as cotton and the urge he had to not leave her hand even for a minute..

Jaaan-e-jaan jaan-e-mann

Toh har gaane mein aata hai

Parwana Romio har ladka hi bann jaata hai

Likhu toh kya likhu?

Banu toh kya banu?

Yeh filmon mein ladka hi kyun ladki ko phansata hai?

Naa chahoon bhi toh main sabhi woh kar jaata hoon

Woh aaye saamne toh main sudhar jaata hoon

Ladki ek full-on chase hai

Ho kehti hai yeh ek phase hai

He recollected the way she got nervous and she had to leave.. The way her lips quivered to find the right words.. Her eyes that shut trying to concentrates.. She was all over his mind and he just didn't want to divert his thoughts..

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti

Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti

Andar se kitni tez hai

Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti

Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti

Philosophy ka craze hai

Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai

Haan Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai

Auooo... auooo...

His eyes were closed n he wasn't aware of his surroundings. All he could do to imagine Sharon's face while playing. Her scared face when she was about to fall, her laugh when he cracked a joke.

He smiled remembering their cute moments.

Sharon was looking his face wondering why is he smiling at.

Swayam finished the song n opened his eyes to see Sharon with a confused face.

"Woah my w-o-r-k com-pleted. So I came back." Sharon said trying to make an excuse.

"Hmmm okay"

"U played beautifully. Can you explain me how to play this song?"

Swayam gave the guitar n the notes. Sharon tried but she was not getting it correct. She looked up at Swayam expecting him to help her.

He kneeled down before her n held the chip which was in her hand played it with the right string.

Her hand stopped working. She was feeling that he had not only held her hand but caressing it also.

"Sharon u understood?" Swayam said bringing her out of trance.

Her voice suddenly disappeared. Sharon somehow managed to blurt.

"Yeah I got it."

They practiced till lunch n talked about various incidents related to his guitar. Sharon felt her lightening after so many days with Swayam.

She bid him bye.

"Sharon"

She heard her name n turned while getting out of his door.

"It was my best time with you." Swayam said in his sweet voice. Automatically the color of her face showed a tinge of red.

"Me too" Sharon replied n got out of his house fast without seeing him.

Her heart was beating

rapidly as if it'll come out.

Beep Beep

Sharon checked her phone.

Swayam had sent a smiley. She smiled to herself.

Her phone rang. It was Natasha on other side. "So how was your guitar classes?"

Sharon got lost remembering the moments n unknowingly blushed. She had literally forget about Natasha's call.

"Cough cough Sharon u dere?" Natasha intervened.

"Huh h-a woh network lost. Guitar classes are going well. Swayam is a good guitarist. Okay I'm traveling now will talk to you later." Sharon replied n disconnected. Natasha sensed something wrong with her but didn't point out.

Sharon entered her house hiding the smile which didn't left her face after receiving his message. Full day she was lost in his thoughts n confused throughout not understanding what is happening to her.

Next morning she was very excited to go to his home. She reached his home & rang the bell.

No response came, Sharon again rang but the same thing. She got worried. She turned the knob n to her surprise it was open. She slowly entered n called out his name. But he didn't replied. She walked to his room he wasn't there also. She was tensed. She was about to turn but saw a teddy bear n some paper in its hand. Out of curiosity she opened.

"Dear Sharon"

Sharon was surprised to see her name. She continued reading.

"I know you would be confused that where am I n why this letter. I'll answer to your all confusions n queries. I'm waiting for you at Marine Drive. If you ever trust me please come."

Swayam

Sharon reread the letter n tried to call him but he cut the call. She was in dilemma whether go or not. Deciding the former she went there.

Sharon saw Swayam standing. His looks were somewhat different. His back was facing her.

"Swayam"

He heard her faint voice n turned.

Sharon raised a brow at him. He chuckled n said "Wanted to have a routine change so called you here. This beauty of nature inspires me to get lost in music. Every song n note gets correct. My heart gets peace n I slowly forget my all worries of life."

Sharon didn't knew he was so much philosophical. She took the guitar n played it. The words he said she was experiencing them.

"Dance?" Swayam asked her. She gladly gave her hand.

He played songs on his phone n they danced. He twirled her. "Beautiful, u are very pure n innocent. God must have taken his exclusive time for creating you"

Sharon blushed. He kneeled down suddenly. "Sharon I don't know whether it is perfect time or not. I never experienced so much emotions together n it is very different. In all these days I feel you are the one for me. Will you be my girlfriend?"

Sharon was confused may be she has got all her answers for the unknown feeling when he was around.

"Yes I will. The feelings are mutual Swayam but was I was so confused to understand it."

Swayam got up n hugged her. They broke after a long time. She was blushing n he had a wide grin on his face.

"Close your eyes Sharon." She closed n felt his hands on her neck she opened to see a guitar pendent in her neck. Her eyes were brimmed with happy tears.

"My first gift for my girlfriend."

They stayed there celebrating their togetherness n silently praying to be with each other.



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