Swaron TS: The Unexpected Last part pg 9

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome start sanskriti. I loved it to the core, even I can relate my loanliness with Swayam of leaving away from home & parents. The characterization of Sharon is very unusual from how she is been protray usualy.
Very eagerly looking for Sharon's pov. Please continue ASAP. Thanks for pm :)

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesum start

very fresh n new concept

swayam's lonliness n pain was very beautifully potrayed

sply his description about his missing home was very apt

n v well penned coming to the convo it was very nyc

seeing how swayam opened himself to sharon

looking forward to tis guitar competiton

update soon

ps i can already imagine swayam wit a guitar in his hand

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

finally res.. 😃

i was waiting for u to post ur OS... 😊

finally coming back to ur OS...

it was amazing dear...simply loved it... 😃

itz simple story...i think any individual staying away from home can relate to..

i really like d way u have return d story...

now waiting for swayam to teach Sharon how to play guitar..becuse his definitely going to win d competition.. 😆

jaldi update karna... 😊

Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

reserve

unreserve

another OS 😃

love you for this yaar

amazing start..

specially the POV part...

superbly written and explained

thanks for the PM

jaldi se update kar wait nahi hota 😳

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Swaron OS! Title only says that its gonna be Fab!!
Update was really...really awesome
U showed swayam n his emotions in a great manner!

N Sharon wahhh!!! Abhi se diva mode n challenge guitar me!!! I knw mere Swayam ko koi Nhi hara sakta!! 😉

Update next asap!
PS - count my LIKE!! Burton not working!

Love,
Sakshi.