Swaron TS: The Unexpected Last part pg 9

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

res..

unres..

wow another work frm..

that to different...

its really amazing concept...

swaron love music...

sharon give challenge 2 swayam...

swayam gona win dis compition...

p.s:- when u will update this...like ur other works kya...plzz update soon...

Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome concept. I know I am a taarey fan but I also like swarons so that is why I peeped in and read this wonderful creation. Pls update soon.

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hey i really enjoyed this first part of your os... it looked like you are telling a story which is very comon in india you will find one such boy almost in every corner of a big city...

Then again very nicely expressed how swayam analysis things and reacts to it..i loved the way swayam finally opend up to the two girls...

And again a little nok jok in end reminded me that now its ok i am reading SwaRon...cute arguments define SwaRon right?

Thank you for sharing it with me...impatienly waiting for 2nd part..

Pratik...

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow di !

your the best !

no mentions of their beautiful faces or something

yet rocked the OS in simplicity !

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Res
Unres. .

Wow sans dat one was an amazing os. .
Very nicely written chapter. .
Concept was nice very realistic n relateable. .
Swayam.s pov very beautifully portrayed. .
His loneliness of staying away from his family n his work nicely done. .
D flow was really nice in d os. .
It had a feel Gud factor. .
Suddenly he met sharon firstly he was silent but den he got along with them dat was nice. I told
Lookin forward to swayam winning d competition n teaching sharon guitar. .
Update soon. .

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

that was simple brilliant and great chapter well written... liked it...
do continue soon and pm me

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Very nice one dear..thnx for d PM

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Unique concept sans...
swayam's pov ws well descibed...
looking frward to read...
nd increaded the size plsss yeh bohot chotu sa tha...
update soon n do pm me...😳

Edited by bhavz_vrushan - 12 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Good start to the Os kri I liked a different start and a completely new set up so yes a fresh concept which I would love to read..👍🏼
Plzzz do pm me when you update..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗