ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED)

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tachyon

@tachyon

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#291

nice one! this is so different from other stories that i have read here...

i feel so sad for arnav and khushi... hope they get justified answer for this problem...

they both deserve happiness!

thanks for the PM

continue soon...

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Okay now I have read chapter 7 too and it hurts to think that the story will be ending soon 😭

Beautifully written dear 👏 Arnav - what can I say about him? He is too perfect...the despair he feels fo Khushi's situation and the realisation that she was not lying - No man can stand in front of such a truth 💔

But he is fighting for her - no situation is impossible for Arnav - he is fighting to bring her back and I LOVE IT ❤️ 🤗

But Khushi - can't fault her either as she has accepted this as her lot even though none of it is her fault. Payal had to make herself and others miserable too - the IDIOT

I like that Khushi is giving this a chance albeit for Arnav. But as I said, the last line is still making me think along the lines that Arnav is the savior here.

You still managed to throw in funny moments - the fact that Arnav realises Khushi ad been using a secret pathway to get in and out of the painting 😆

What is Aman going to do though? Hope he doesn't do something to jeopardize Arnav's plans 😳

Waiting for Saturday now

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Edited post on pg. 27

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

All your research and beautiful writing make this paranormal story even more believable.

I have seen a few shows on paranormal beings like "Ghost Whisperer' but they were always related to dead people and ghosts. This is about a living Khushi. She almost seems to go into deep sleep when she enters the painting and can't remember her time there when she comes out. Maybe that is what keeps her so young :-) Reminds me of Rip Van Winkle who slept away for many years.

Khushi thinks that science would not give any answers to her situation. So maybe it is something as simple as love vs hate. If Payal, who was just a normal person without any magical powers could throw such an effective curse, then can Arnav break the curse with his love?

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

nice update

ppr arnav & khushi

can't the painting be destroyed at all?

waiting for them to fine a cure

khushi suffered so much while she wasn't at fault

did payal hate her so much??

reading this, i asked whether this curse thing really exists???

waiting for aman or anjali to reach there

hope they understand him & help him

thnxx for the pm😊

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Hey woman are you for real??? Oh my god we should give it to you for the way you take us into this beyond real world and make it as happening as it could ever be... Lovely Juhi and can't thank you enough for the entertainment you provide us with...

Seduction and that's what your work does to us in every possible way... A supernatural story said in a natural way with characters that don't seem fictional at all... His desperate search to find a means to end her misery and her longing for one chance at love that will quench her desires before her lonely journey continues for eternity...

You made me feel n think what the girl would have gone through... I felt for real without thinking it is just another fictional story... Such is your word power woman and yes I am bound by the spell of the same power... Juhi you are one talent house and we are so lucky to have you write for us... What will this ARSHI world would have been without you my girl!!!! And now waiting for Saturday to dawn!!!!!