ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED)

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#901

oh my god i just finished reading! Its truly magical!! this magical story you have woven through your words.. I am in love with it...❤️

And finally i caught up with it... truly a masterpiece!! I still do not know the ending of this story... but I can already tell that this is the one tale I would give up my life to see being inacted by Barun & Sanaya as Arnav & Khushi in a movie...

Its just just magical! I don't have enough words to articulate what a wonderful creation this is! I love it!

And impatiently waiting for the next part of this magical journey to be written,,,

sigh...just wow...thank you for writing such a beautiful story! 🤗

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#902

Such a lovely update

Anjali is the best sister

She had done what Arnav couldn't do

Make Khushi fully Arnav's in all way

Really loved the update

But what was in the end that Khushi was shocked

Waiting for next updater

Plz continue it soon

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#903

So when is the Update due?????
Dying to read more...
Continue soon.

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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#904

I could not wait any longer...even though I like to read your stories after they are completed I simply could not refrain my self from getting seduced. As you had already written many chapters I thought that it was time...

The first couple of chapters were so romantic, more than your previous work. I felt like squeezing something ... having read further realized that you were writing something a little different this time. In general I am not a big fan of supernatural phenomenon, but your plot and writing managed to keep me enthralled...both arnav and khushi are intense, I like how relentless and intense your lead pair are always...I still observed some aspect of their original characteristics of both arnav and khushi and yet are different too. Anjali and Aman eh good for them.

The back drop of a mahal in ruins, gave me a deep sense of melancholia. There is some underlined trace of sadness throughout. The deaths in arnav's family, khushi not having anyone, the derelict garden, the dry pond all have contributed to the depth of sorrow that became palpable as I read along.

How is the smart Dr raizada going to break the spell ...waiting...waiting

Thank you. I wish I could meet you, have a cup of tea and pick your imagination to discover where and how those characters and plots get hatched...you are absolutely my favourite for many reasons but mainly because you write for us. This is what I feel ever time I read your work. You have so much integrity as a writer and you never leave the story or us in a limbo, and of course you are a fantastic story-teller. Thank you for all your stories...and Happy Holidays.