Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18) - Page 85

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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply beautiful...glad that khushi is Atleast trying to make this marriage work an help him out...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Total Arnav Khushi chapter.
Loved the way you narrated the slow progress in Arnav Khushi relationship. It is interesting to read how Khushi is handling Arnav's insecurities.
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Posted: 11 years ago
And my anon is back to form! 😊
hope ur arm is fully recovered now.
i fell in love with "wife" khushi in this chapter and hope arnav does so soon too. is he afraid he will jinx their marriage by sharing with her? dont worry, dude, this one is for keeps😊
i also somehow got reminded of MKM1 in this chapter. dont know why but its a good thing, not a bad thing. i think it was ur trademark style of writing making the smallest or seemingly insignificant gestures take on a new meaning or significance. like arnav spooning khushi while sleeping and yet being afraid she will discover it. and khushi the virgin starting to feel the physical effects of this😳😃
and u know what, this chapter made me go back and read chapter 31 again too. to understand arnav's mind...i think (and my thoughts r random and insignificant most times mind you😊)chapter 31 was incomplete in itself and needed this one like a part B to complete the flow or something.
and sorry,dear, if i was rude or harsh in my comment in the previous chapter. i love u and ur writing too much and so, took u for granted i guess. am sorry. 😭but i was totally exhilarated to get the response from u. anon, u r great! hats off!👏🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsmm update loved it
Waiting fr next :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav p.o.v.

Damn this cliff hanger.annoy please update fast yaar.I want to know khushi reaction after giving her sweet torture.
my p.o.v
Awesome update. please update fast.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update😉. Arnav is disliking the fact that now khushi is aware of his nightmares.khushi is puzzled that arnav never shares his fears and thoughts with anyone.I just loved the following interaction between arnav and khushi :

'You know...' Khushi propped the other elbow on her knee and cradled her face in the palm, breaking his beloved silence.


He knew it. It was too good to last.


'.... when I have nightmares...' she proceeded unaffected.


'I don't have nightmares' he glared at her and lied through his teeth.


Dream or whatever it was, was bad enough. 'Ofcourse' she back tracked immediately not wanting to upset him. 'When I am stressed out...' she picked up a different tangent.


'I am not stressed out'.


This time she rolled her eyes. 'When I' she looked at him sharply 'flap my whole body like a fish out of water and sweat like a pig in the middle of the night without any apparent reason' she paused and looked at Arnav, who swallowed a grin that was threatening to bubble out 'that time buaji makes me sleep like this. And the massage works every single time. It'll work for you too'.


I might need silence as well.


Just 🤣after reading khushi's colorful description of a nightmare.Kudos to you for such an awesome update.Eagerly awaiting your next update.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nony how do u manage to hook us crazily with this story.
Dammit this is fabulous
i am totallyin love with this story.

Beautifully written, loved khushix pov he attempt to help him out,, to stay beside him to support him,
i loved it how she turned stubborn wife for him.
I love this childishness of her yet so mature act of her. Forcing him back to bed to make give him light message to put him to sleep. Itx beautiful.

Aww she recognise his stranglely family weigh nd touch this was beautiful part of whole update.
Ahh i know i m late for comment
but i read it twice till now.

God continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤗 awsome...lovd it...:)
Wen will they knw their actual feelgs.:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for this phenomenal update. Within a month time, Khushi has finally fitted herself into the shoes of a wife yet Arnav has not fully acknowledged her as his wife. She is determined to make their relationship work as she made their friendship but she needs the support of her husband to do so. It was nice to see Khushi behave maturely as she tried to comfort her sleepless husband. Poor Arnav was waiting for his wife to sleep so that he could cuddle her like his teddy. It is about time that Khushi fully accepts her husband and falls for him. She is attracted to him but one day she will love him with her whole heart. I wonder what Arnav's reaction will be to wake up with his wife in his arms and her knowledge of being there. Khushi has given Arnav the right over her as she as allowed him into her personal space. When will Arnav allow Khushi into his space and mind?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was so waiting for it..the update and the content of the update too.
So laddoo finally is cognizent abt certain complications in sharing a room or rather life with arnavji.lol,i was grinning like a mad person reading it.the whole thing was written so lovely that i'm stil smiling.plz update soon.
Loved laddoo's concern for arnavji...

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