Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#861

Wow really like your writing skills. This chapter just shows how their married life is progressing and love the way you described both their take on past one month between them. It is high time for Arnav to open up. I am thinking Rishab may have to instigate things between the couple :). Will Kushi start going back to NGO?

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#862

I just loved this update!!

such a heartwarming chapter it was!! bravo!👏

khushi doing wifely duties for arnav! taking care of him, relieving him from his nightmares!! only a perfect wife can do!! she just stole my heart!!

she saw the person who arnav really is!! she is seeing him in new light, which is very good thing!

she is instead of shrugging about arnav, is worried for him, and can how he is showing himself to the world, when he is vulnerable and scared!!

and she is just seeing through him!

loved how she was adamant on her part to make him and she did it!!

lol, guttery arnav😆 what was he thinking!! :P :P

loved how, khushi make arnav asleep!! it was so cute, loved that scene!!

khushi is also realizing!! nope, she is now feeling, this new feeling!! and will soon realize what this feelings is!!😳

continue soon😳

thanks for the pm😊

PS: sorry for the delay in comment😳

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Mahika84

@Mahika84

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

As usual amazing update ... we are getting insight of their married life...i know its really hard task for her to bring out Arnav from his past but khushi's never giving up nature will do the trick.

Arnav's nightmare & khushi's effort to make him sleep are written nicely.

Waiting eagerly for next update.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

A very beautiful update ...kushi s such a doll...awesome work...keep it up

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umaraj84

@umaraj84

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

Just amazing update as usual
Loved the slow progress in their love
Wow kushi slowly falling for her man
And loved her thoughts to work on this relation

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jolybudy

@jolybudy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Wonderful romantic scene :) The line " The smile was worth the defeat" beautifully worded..

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Kitsin

@Kitsin

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Hi! Just caught up with your last three updates. Great updates. Love the begining of their relationship, the adjustments both have to make. Its good that Khushi has started observing Arnav's behavior patterns. Its so difficult for Arnav to trust anyone. I am waiting for the time when little by little they will begin to understand each other like the buds of a flower unfolding, slow and steady and beautifully wonderful. 😊

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Badtameez.Dil

@Badtameez.Dil

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#868

OMG ... that was fab !!!! 👏

my heart beats are still racing...😳

i know, i know...

u never read my comment before...

actually, i was a silent reader coz my CA final attempt was close so i chose to read all that i can in the time to comment also n spend less time on net...😆

Lame na , i know 😕

but u know that we all LOVE ur work !! Right????⭐️

Edited by Badtameez.Dil - 11 years ago