Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is the first time I am first on any of your FFs. So YAY!!!🥳

Arnav has found a real live soft toy to sleep with.

Loved the description of him slowly graduating from teddy bears to pillows and then a jeeti jaagti wife.

And Khushi too occupies the whole bed while sleeping.

These two need an extra large bed!

Sumer has taken a promise from Khushi to love and care for Arnav.

I do hope you don't plan to kill off Sumer.

Please don't do that.

And now that Khushi has a little idea about Arnav's childhood, hope this will lead to her understanding of how his mind works.

Waiting for some more fun updates about this newly married couple.

And I do hope your wrist is better now.

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

Vats, welcome back!! Hope your wrist is much better!

This chapter was a lovely progression into their newly wedded life & was part adorable, part funny & part serious... Just like real life is, after all the festivities are over, real life hits you hard in the face... Poor Khushi has her work cut out for her, she has just realized what she had gotten herself into...

First things first, it was real cute to see Arnav snuggling onto a real cute teddy bear a.k.a Khushi like that... So much for not sleeping like an elephant seal... LOL Luckily for him, Khushi is a deep sleeper & won't find out about his sleeping habits anytime soon... It did not take Arnav even one night to make Khushi his cuddly pillow... LOL How will he lie on his side of the bed ever?!?!?!? 😉

Underlying all this humor is the very sad fact that Arnav was so lonely as a child, he had to resort to cuddling teddies & pillows in lieu of loving parents patting him down to sleep... Awww, my heart goes out to the lonely & scared Arnav, hope Khushi cuddles him with all her might for the rest of their lives so that he does not ever feel lonely again...

Their contrasting sleep habits only portrays their emotional state. Khushi has led a sheltered & loving life therefore, sleeps with no care in the world while, Arnav is scarred & deep down scared of rejection & craves for attention, someone to hold on to, some one to love, someone to cherish & share his dark & lonely life with... This one night spoke volumes in how lonely he really is... Poor guy! Really sad to see him like that, but I am not worried, because now, he has Khushi by his side :)

It was really great to see Arnav fighting his slow attraction towards Khushi & running away scared, it was way too funny... How will he fight this attraction when that beautiful & attractive package will be invading his space all the time, his room, his bed, his senses?? Where & how will he run & hide from this attraction developing into something more??

The pinch in his heart when Khushi claimed that the "only" reason she had even married Arnav was too telling... As I had mentioned before, Arnav has no clue, what getting married would entail... He thought by just making Khushi his would be the end of the story, that no one could make further claims on his Khushi, that they were now tied to each other for the rest of their lives, would keep him satisfied... But man is such a greedy animal... He wants it all. Not just Khushi in name but also "all" of her. Nothing short of her heart would do now for him to be happy and he doesn't even know it... Boy! does he have a lot of learning to do or what...

Khushi too has a lot to learn in terns of how to be a wife to her Arnavji... Arnav giving her extra special attention while leaving for work was so cute & romantic but this girl is certainly clueless... When will she develop some wifely instincts for Arnav?? She needs to get out of this "friend" mode now... Who will give her these tips or will she develop them on their own, remains to be seen...

Her declaration to Sumer that one of her main attractions for marriage was to wear sarees & be able to wear the suhaag chuda & sindoor & bindi... Gosh! she really is a child... Who unfortunately has a lot of growing up to do... Will she be up for it, hope so...

But I am so glad that Sumer did take it upon himself to educate his laddoo a little bit... She really needed to know about the past to know what made Arnav the way he is... She has to understand his psyche a little bit more, to know what makes him tick... Why he is the way he is. This will go a long way in her understanding of him as a person & be able to help & deal with his ultra quiet & emotionally starved personality... And also got her thinking about the main thing in marriage i.e. love.

Lovely chapter again Vats... Can't wait to see how their relationship develops further within their marriage... Arnav will have to do a lot to make Khushi realize his place in her heart & she in turn will have to heal his broken heart into being whole again... They both have a long way to go, but at least the ball has been set rolling...

P.S. I missed mentioning before, but I loved the way Khushi has started correcting her thought processes about "their" room in accordance to Arnav's wishes... His wishes matter to her that much :)

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

Woo hooo.. so I finally made it to the first page 😉

Hope your wrist is better.. give it some rest now that you have updated..

Loved the update...

funny how both of them are not so gentle while sleeping 😉 Actually I am surprised about Arnav because otherwise he is so disciplined.

Hope Khushi doesn't start showering her love on Arnav all of a sudden now.. And hope she still remains little naive and don't become all mature overnight..

God this girl and cluelessness are like best friends forever, he thought with compounded irritation as he left. Can she ever take a hint?? - this totally cracked me upv😆

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Shru9ti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved d update

Again u beautifully potrayed hw lonely ASR ws in childhood n hw he had to tak help of teddy bears to sleep...he didnt hav a parent to be by his side n pat him n make him sleep...clearly deprived of luv n affection as a kid

Oh ASR 's wild brain n d scandolous wrds in his mind😳 i lyk it 😆

N d funniest part...cluesless n khusi r best friends..man dat ws hilarious🤣

oh...n also damn,double damn🤣

I loved d convo betn sumer n khushi...a talk which mil shuld do wid dil...sumer did it very nicely ...i hope u dnt kill sumer😭

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The beginning started off so light and slightly humorous with both Arnav and Khushi's reactions/thoughts about waking up after their first night together. But after just one night, Arnav grinned twice, something he is just not used to doing! How is he going to fare living with her forever? I guess only time will tell but I'm guessing with a lot more smiles and laughs😊 I liked how you expressed Arnav's desire to hold on to his parents while sleeping as a young boy and to adjust to the harsh realities of his life, he had to resort to stuffed animals and then eventually a pillow. I always feel so bad for young Arnav as obviously the past was really horrible for him.

Like Arnav, I definitely do think that Khushi is a bit naive at times, but I think after finding out a little bit more about Arnav's past, she's going to realize why he's so closed off and why he acts the way he does. I hope that she will be able to reassure him that all that must be left in the past if he wants to move forward.

When Khushi said she only married Arnav to stay in her house, I knew that he would be really upset. Even though that is one of her reasons for agreeing to the marriage, she probably shouldn't go around saying it. I liked how you gave words to her thoughts about her marriage with Arnav at the end...will there ever be love in this marriage, from either of them? I think it's pretty safe to say that Arnav is enamored by her, but he just doesn't know it yet, and even if and when he realizes, he will have a hard time verbalizing it. Only time will tell how Khushi's feelings will evolve from friendship to something more.

Hope you are doing better now, I enjoyed reading this update! Looking forward to the next one already😊

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

the very first thg... bindu... cudnt ignore all ur insistence to put atleast 1 comment on the first page... n hence i tuk chance with a res :)

i hv a 3 yr old... n no matter how much i crib.. i cherish every moment of her snuggling into me, mking sure she fits in perfectly before she sleeps :) ... nt to forget my hand being her favourite pillow :)

to me... the first para.. as much it signifies arnav's pain n loneliness, it mks me feel bad fr sumer atleast... sujata.. might hv never cared fr such beautiful n fulfilling little moments of life.. bt sumer sure seems to realise tht he missed these little thgs.. the small stories he cud hv told arnav to ease him into the fairyland dreams... the soft pats to help him feel secure frm those imaginary bad shadows... the simple act of baby arnav holding on to him, if he felt afraid... ..

so yes.. the first thg tht strikes me is how lonely a father sumer is.. n hw repentent too... he treads soo soo cautiously arnd his son... must b painful naa..

to feel tht u dont hv complete rights over ur own son. tht its nt ur place to talk abt ur own mistakes since they also concern him, n to knw.. tht he might never forgive u if u did talk abt it.. even accidentally.

as of arnav n khushi... as pixie said... i agree.. their sleeping needs, or patterns.. do show a bit abt the kid in them, their emotional states..

khushi hving received proper love n care... sleeps peacefully, undisturbed n with no need to hold a pillow :) while arnav, with his insecurities... needs it..

i feel more than the unknwn ghosts.. a child fears the insecurites tht he has to face in his waking hrs.. his parents fighting, knwing tht they being in seperate rooms is nt gd... a small little kid... how much pressure he must hv been.. dreading each moment.. wht wud happen..

no child wants his parents to seperate.. arnav too might hv been afraid to face such a situation.. hoping tht by some miracle his parents wud reconcile..

i feel more than the nightmares... these thgs wud hv prompted his need fr a teddy bear.. eventually leading to pillow.. n finally.. thankfully culminating into his solace.. khushi :) her shoulder n neck :) :)

n this gender specific pillow... i must say is very very cute n romantic :)

also the fact tht he wudnt b able to go bak to sleep again... this too shows tht he has too much going on .. mayb subconciously .. which wudnt let him have a peaceful sleep..

though the thg tht i loved was... he didnt seem to b bothered abt his nightmares... n they didnt seem to haunt him with khushi arnd :) keep her close arnav.. she is the universal med fr all ur pain :)

n they both predicted soo well abt each other.. :) mr-elephant-seal n ms-not-so-lady-like :) :)

haye.. khushi.. a dressed up arnav mks u red... i wud wait to see ur reaction to a just-showered arnav 😉... i totally agree with u btw... 4.30am is definitely not a time fr wake up competitions :) ... if tht is wht arnav choses.. u shud prefer losing 😆

aaww... mehndi doesnt come between getting ready :) .. god someone tell him he has his name hidden in tht.. not permanent tatto ... he needs to see it before it fades away..

n yes she is naive... n arnav is using it to his adv beautifully... everytime he doesnt want to answer sthg. .. he simply uses her talking capability to distract her :) ...

accept it arnav... u love her.. deeply.. irreversibly... more than anythg else :) .. u cant accept a simple joke... which is true too.. to some extent.. i mean khushi did marry u fr a lot of reasons.. n she staying with her bade papa n buaji being one of them.. :) .. yes technically.. she can sleep all she wants.. sthg i m sure u wudnt want changed either :) ... bt htt joke did hurt naa..

so think... n accept.. n get tht camera out arnav.. she was sleeping absolutely un-lady-like... n u didnt click a memory of it !! what a waste :(

do it.. tease her... it wud mk u happy :) thts the fun u hv been missing dear :)

nope khushi cant tk a hint... n thts y she is such a genuine person... n thts y u like/love/need her as much :) .. so b prepared .. u hv to b the one planning n executing everythg :)

u explained khushi's attire change :) .. thank u :) .. i can imagine khushi.. u must hv felt hw clueless can arnav b... i mean asking u to remove ur chuda :) ... wish he knew the significance.. he wud hv realised tht this marriage means soo soo soo much to khushi..

whn khushi lists the thgs she loves abt being married... which include sarees, chuda, mangalsutra, bindi, sindoor... i feel her happiness.. :) at finally getting the marriage which she wudnt hv thot possible :) as always... i absolutely love a happy khushi... n here too i get to see a content n happy khushi :) .. totally loved it.. :)

n sumer.. i hope nthg happens to u... arnav wud b shattered.. as much as u deserve a 2nd chance with a kid.. in the form of a grandchild... i think arnav too deserves a chance with his father... they both need to b together a bit longer..

though yes.. the fear did prompt u to do sthg tht only u cud do.. fr nw atleast... though i m sure khushi wud hv supported him, even if she knew nthg... helped him.. still knwing is better :)

best thg u did sumer... u got khushi thinking on the lines of love :) ... arnav though loves her sure.. bt is too far away frm naming it, accepting it.. n confessing it... khushi is the emotionally stronger one... n hence i feel she wud b more comfy with the feelings than him...

the last para... u did bring out beautifully... tht khushi didnt hv much on her mind while marrying arnav.. nt beyond sumer n his health.. n to b fair.. neither did arnav :) .. he too had just one thg.. to ensure khushi doesnt go away...

well the complications of the relationship wud start nw :) .. bt i m sure htey wud fair well.. very very well :) :) ..

n i swear this one was smaller... i started reading it... hoping i wudnt b scolded fr reading it tht late in the night ( 3.15am) n i wasnt !!!.. before anyone realised it was over... so i m very sure.. this was smaller :) :)

PS: .. wondering... wud we get to see arnav's frnds playing some role here...

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kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice chapter as usual...

first morning of arnav and kushi loved it... arnav thinks scince his childhood how the way he sleeps hugging teddy bear to avoid loneliness and later pillows, after waking up can not stop laughing how he confused that he thought he hugged pillow actually its kushi and his sleeping form exactly kushi mentioned...😃😃😃😃😃raizada 😆... and kushi she got some place and she did the same, iloved it the way arnav watching his wife's sleeping form and smiling...

and kushi after waking up how confused nd cute she is and her nervousness after seeing her husband first thing in the morning, thinking her state oh go so adorable😃😃😃loved it the way u written...arnav thinks why chatter box is so calm and she started her questions starting from the time to to wake up and the way she is asking question,why?how???😆😆😆😆😆😆😆..and later at breakfast table how cute kushi answered to buaji...

kushi and summer raizada conversation are very touchy i loved it the way u written..(.it reminds me of me and my father talks before my marrige how we have to accept the other person).. i love the way summer is watching kushi foundly how she dressed and looks beautiful, and talked about what arnav views about marriage and his childhood, how he grow up, why he is so closed and all...kushi has to understand arnav first, now she got little bit of glimpse about arnav...way to go kushi ...
marrigae is over but kushi and arnav has to build their relationship...

thank u for the lovely chapter and pm...

cheers...

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Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Totally loved the chapter!

Specially the begining! Somehow i could never picture arnav sleeping with pillows! Given how he is seen as so controlled and least dependent on anyone, his holding onto pillows refelcts his need to hold on to something ,in his most unguarded moments! But m definitely glad his pillow has been changed from a nonliving cotton bag to a beautiful warm and ever moving khushi!!

N given their sleeping habits and positions i defintely expect a war over dominance in bed! Lets see who will push the other out of the bed first!!

Loved the dining table scene! Though when khushi said that she has married arnav so that she could remain this house, i was like ouch! N can definitely understand pinch that arnav felt! No matter the circumstances behind the marriage a part of him wanted to believe that he was also the reason why she married him along the other ones!

N god what happened when he was bading them goodbye was so funny! One could imagine khushi's baffled expression and his annoyed one!!

At this stage, honestly speaking both of them have not thought much beyond getting married to each other , for their own reasons. Now that the initail euphoria is over m waiting to see what they make out of this realtionship! Its gonna be a long journey where they would have to understand each other, put up with other's eccentricities, be with each other at every step, n become used to sharing their lives with the other! Given how dim witted they both are when it comes to it, their journey is surely going to be a hell of a ride!

Oh m so so so glad that sumer had the talk with khushi. This will definitely help her understand her husband and deal with him better. Plus she is so full of happiness, positivity, chirpiness and warmth, so overflowing with them that she would fill arnav's life with the same! Wasnt it the reason that arnav wanted her in permanently in his life , in the first place!

Yes khushi you care for him, you have patience, you like him and you never want to leave. These are all the preconditions for love , which form the base! Now the base has been set, take off will not take long! Just wait for that final trigger khushi and both of you will be thrust in to the world of love , happiness and togetherness!!

Waiting to read what happens next in their lives!

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