Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

One small step for Khushi, one giant leap for their marriage 😆

Their first encounter with physical proximity.. at least the first when both of them were equally aware of one another.. electric! And I loved how you described Khushi's reaction.. from the initial surprise and trembling to a gradual acceptance.

She was able to get him to sleep.. in her own unique and sweet way, she is helping his get over the demons of the past. One step at a time.. but I am sure Arnav will open up to her someday. And Khushi will realise his feelings for her. This update made me really happy 😃 Have always felt so sorry for Arnav...someone did something for him today, and I am so glad!

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME. TOO GOOD. LIKED THE WHOLE SITUATION.KHUSI'S CONFUSED EMOTIONS & HER REACTIONS. ARNAV SLOWLY STARTED ACCEPTING EACH & EVERY EFFORT OF KHUSHI. SIMPLY AWESOME.

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Your writing is amazing. How you write about routine things like sleeping next to your spouse or giving your spouse a massage and making it sound so thrilling, its purely your talent. Loved it

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#824

thanks for the lovely update. nice to see the effort taken by khushi to penetrate in her husband's heart. hope arnav understands her. waiting to read more what will happen in the morning...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

So finally we have a more closer look into the lives of Mr and Mrs Raizada.

The uphill task of bringing out Arnav from his closed up shell has already started for Khushi.

And this is just the beginning !

The nightmares and its after effects on both Arnav and Khushi very well written , and surprisingly i felt my self sympathizing more with Khushi than Arnav.

Their sleeping arrangements are really something and my god the lengths Arnav goes upto in order to avoid any sort of imbalance in this practiced rapport with Khushi is quite hilarious.

And i loved how she helped him drift off to sleep !

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Fabulous update!!!!!!

So, first progress in their relationship...small one but regarding Arnav it's a BIG BIG time progress...holding someone and seeking comfort from someone else is really a progress..

I loveddd his thought..."he like her...she is so nice..."

Khushi is really trying hard to prove herself a good wife..and no doubt she IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

first part was so sad...speciall

the day of bade papa's operation, when he was quite tensed, even then he refused to let her in... when she had slipped her hand into his, he had looked at it strangely for a few seconds before visibly deciding against his first instinct of pulling back."

Ohhh so is sooo sooo damaged from inside...

loveddd the update...

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Awesome ... Loved this update

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

It was a wonderful update. Finally a glimpse into what Khushi thinks about her married life. Loved the end. His possesive hold on her, her strange feeling that she recognises his touch. Everything was well written. Hope you update soon. Thanks for the PM.

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rajnandini1

@rajnandini1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#829

nice update.

congratulations on new thread.

i like khushi's ways of trying to a wife to arnav, she is not still able to put a finger on the exact problem but has taken a small step towards making their marriage workable.

she is able to give the comfort to arnav and put him to sleep. khushi's reaction at the physical proximity is very aptly described.