ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1) - Page 12

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Srilathalolla thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update loved it
Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome start for my saturday with ur update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really liked it..
It was lovely update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's awesome
u very well portrayed arnav emotions..
wonderfully written..
loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
suuuper.
the way khushi confessed and payals words,arnav thoughs everything was awesome and i just loved it very very much.

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful updates
loved them
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
M so happy d way d story is progressin..arnavs love fr khushi is unimaginable..he is madly in love wid his princess
N khushi is also fallin fr her choclate brown prince..
Arnav is damm adorable..kash meko b aisa prince charming mill jae..
Khushi is a strong woman..n arna
v ill defo realise her dis!!
😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg omg...👏👏
awesome ud dear👏👏

me faintwa😆...what a perfect surprise yaar.😃..u made my weekend 😳...two parts wowweee😳😳

part A

even being tensed soo much mere presence of khusi had a strong effect on arnav..😊.he even forgot that he didnt knew direction of museum😆..hehe good he wasnt caught😉..he felt at peace when he reached museum..he was soo happy to see it..😃.and when he pull door for khusi she felt his gentleman side adding to her long list for arnav...cute she is falling for him...😉

khusi told him about garden and when arnav went to valley view he was at peace and so was khusi.😊.she was happy to see him like this.😊.and was amazed as her heart is being mended just by his presence.😳..she was falling for him..😉.and when she speak his name arnav too felt different for first time...he want to comfort her in every way..😳.but he has to be slow...but he has started his work by just telling her indirectly the way life is dealt...😊.he assured her indirectly that after bad phase there is good one awaiting...😃

khusi was stunned as she didnt imagined that arnav will be able to know about her soo well 😆...she was confused as does he know about her and what she is suffereing from??😕 well she didnt know that arnav has come for her and knows everything about her..😊.but sadest part was that khusi kas been broken sooo much that she didnt have strength to lose anything now.😭..and she want to maintain these moments as it is...as she wont be able to lose him if she went further..😭..gosh i feel soo bad for khusi ...i just wish arnav make her trust him forver😊

arnav knew what khusi was feeling after his conversation.😊..but he has to be slow.😊..all through the way to his rest room he was controling himself ..hehe😆..soo much lover boy..😉.well after his praising of room or to say he particularly used word love hit khusi well..😳.she was in daze...her heart was telling her that arnav is that person😳 ...but mind was confused..😕.arnav was shocked when she asked his identity..if she remembred him.😲..but she passed out.😭..which freaked out arnav...but he was sure of his answer to her one query ..he has come for her now..😊..i just loved the way he took care of her...😳

Part B

arnav called payal to be with her...and she managed somehow to send him to rest and told everything to aman too...that was good .👏..she is soo caring yaar..😊.they way she scolded khusi was her way..😆she cant see her like this😭...she cried so much and it not only hurt payal but arnav too .😭..and he cant take this much now..😭.i just loved how arnav was resless and couldnt sleep and came to see khusi when payal msg her...he wants to be with her.😊..he want to take revenge for making khusi this state..😡.but he has to take small steps at time..😊.he was ryt he has to make khusi love him and most importantly trust him..😊

i liked how payal gave her strength and boost her confidence 😊...she has been a fighter..she can fight this.😊.and she indirectly told her that her life will change soon and her prince charming will come and may be he has come..😉.she was ryt khusi is natural princess and her prince has come.😊..all she has to do is follow her heart...😳

finally payal tlaked to arnav and she told him the reason for her fainting😕 ..omg cant believe that .😲.she wasnt allowed to sleep and hasnt ate anything and been forced to work just because she dined with them?? 😡seriously those three should thrown out of this world.😡..creeps...arnav consoled payal while his heart was bleeding for khusi .😭..he assured her that he will do it fast and in his boss way...but he has to make khusi comfortable with him and bring his khusi out of shell first...😊

john and arnav conversation was very good.😊..he made john so comfortable and he too liked him soo much .😊.well arnav is warm hearted and respect such hardworking persons .😊.. and john instanly made him bhai...hehe that great..😊

khusi met him when he asked about her paintings and she didnt remember her convo with him before passing out..😊.well good for arnv..she felt good when john told her about his convo with arnav😊...she felt more for him😳..he was a prince charming for sure...😳 she remember payal words but she is afraid of dreaming anything now...

i just loved how arnav praised her work and how he told her about he feels about her paintings and the emotions she conveyed thru it😳..khusi was soo dazed and especially when arnav called her princess and told her that he was left baffled about her talents😳...awww soo cutee😳...khusi never seen such admiration from anyone.😊..it was all soo genuine from him...😳

the way she blushed and he pointed out this 😉and the way he was holding her hand made her heart and entire being alive😳...well certainly khusi now know she is princess .😳..and she is thinking him as her prince charming..😃..well arnav knows that she is his princess for sure and soon he will take away his princess to love her and cherish her forever...😳

her dhak dhak goes again...i just hope arnav took her misery away soon😳

waiting for next update😊

Edited by AR_EternalLove - 11 years ago
vidya.sanjay thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
So the prince is ready to sweep his princess off her feet:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope arnav would be successful in his mission...

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