ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1) - Page 11

Originally posted by: monasha

I really loved this Story...
the way Khushi suffered I just hope Arnav takes revenge soon..

Originally posted by: AR_EternalLove

i just loved it dear...👏

awesome update👏

arnav is tired not physicaly but emotionally and aman knew it...and it was sure that arnav want khusi with him...he want her to be free soon and forever with him😊

while khusi is at war within herself...arnav is breaking in her space at very fast speed..😊..she is falling for him...😕but her reality her broken heart is enough to stop her to move further...😕.she couldnt handle more pain now..😕..though she know arnav is nice man but she also know that where his status is she cant reach there and dream just to get it broken again...😭

she thinks that he must be having many girls of his caliber around him..but she souldnt be one of them...

arnav meeting khusi was nice scene...he want her to be happy again and want to remove her pain.😳..he is making small move at a time.and he was soo happy and felt warm to know that khusi wanted him at dinner and she care for him😳...she asked for his dinner too and how he can take rest..😳.he want to be with her everytime...he was sooo gentleman ...😳but khusi is afraid of it.😕..she know he is good but she didnt trust herself .😕..as she is falling for him and she didnt want it...😕

thier entire convo was very cute and simple and yet arnav did manage to make her laugh like old times.😳..and now he will make sure that he will bring his khusi back anyhow😳

Originally posted by: sincereme

Awesome update...
Khushi is hesitant to accept her feelings not bcuz she is not sure but she is afraid of heart break and get hurt again... Life is very cruel with her and now she has lost every hope of good...
Loved their time together... Arnav like a TRUE gentle man is giving her her space and on the same time showing her through his action and words that he cares and he is there for her...
Loved when khushi ask him if he ate dinner... The concern and worry was so evident...
Loved the whole chapter...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun

nice update

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish

wonderful story dear. read all in a go. it is refreshing. waiting for the next one eagerly.

Originally posted by: Arshicraze13

Lovely update khushi is slowly coming out from her shell . continue soon

Originally posted by: smartgirl9009

amazinggg writing dear...

loved the way their relation is progressing...

plxxx continue soon...

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thnxxx 4 the pm...

Originally posted by: beenish248

lovly update candy ... Khushi is fighting with her heart han but it's ain't gonna work honey our hero will make you fall in love all over again .. Arnav is missing her aww that so cute part yarr loved it ..she had spent an extra hour to get ready wow , it's arnav's magic offcourse .. marvelous dude .. :))Eagerly waiting ..:))

Originally posted by: ranogill

so slow process to woo khushi started to work...loved it

Originally posted by: arnshi

Awesome update...loved it...

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved it.

Originally posted by: mwep

luved the update

it was rocking

i luved khushi's self talk 😆

arnav's care for khushi 😛😛

khushi's concern about his health n their light talks were awesome n well written😊😊

khushi u have already lost the battle 😆 so no need to fight upon it

continue soon

Originally posted by: daisydee425

amazing

Originally posted by: saigadu

awesome update...

Originally posted by: Apoorvarani

Awesome Part!!!

Originally posted by: nia.arshifan

Chaverah, u r really amazing... I read all ur writings n this is the one which hooked me up...

Comments regarding first two chapters:

From the start i loved khushi's character... She is really strong as a person... For the house which contained her parent's memories, she has been working like a maid in that house... I just hate that permila.. She is her step-mother but she is behaving like her enemy..
And arnav is really cute... He loves khushi n he is going to her now... The way he said about his decision to his family was beautiful... If khushi is in a relationship then he is still going to help her... I was like aww after reading that line... I just love this arnav a lot...Comment on chapters 3,4,5,6:Conversation between payal and arnav was mind blowing... The things they were speaking like about akash wais funny.. Payal is really bold... I always wanted to see payal n arnav's relationship something like this in the show but we didnt get it... And now reading this made me feel great... Payal is khushi's jiji n arnav got to know about khushi from her... It is heart breaking to see how khushi is treated... She isnt given food... But their meet was fantastic... Khushi in arnav's arms... That is the best thing we can ever see...Mrs Gloria is praying for bringing arnav to khushi's life... She is amazing...Comment on chapters 7 and 8:I loved their cabin romance the most... Khushi is really making it difficult for arnav... How can he control himself with her... And the way khushi responded, it is mutual now...Mrs Gloria.. She is indeed very sweet... She even gave permission without knowing the reason... And last part was awesome, khushi's monologue where she missed him for dinner and she is worried for him... She made him eat food n is arranging for him to rest... And well arnav's way of convincing too.. By the way i wonder how u make all the characters so sweet and convincing?? After reading all the updates i dont understand whom i love the most!!! I mean arnav's family whom we got to see for very less time is also very sweet... His jijaji, di, nani n of course the blushing akash...

Originally posted by: gail-ipk

superb update..beautifully written..why kushi was lyk as if she lost something..?..hmm arnav was so lovely n he was so passionate abt her..looking forward for the next..

Originally posted by: sruthick

Awesome update...
Khushi s falling 4 Arnav..
Nd she knw it...
Bt she s trying 2 keep a distance b/w them...
Coz she s scared 2 gt hurt...
Poor Gal...
Waitng 4 d nxt part..
Cntinue soon

Originally posted by: khareshelley

superb update..!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: nooli

such a nice update...

loved it...

hope arnav will be able to win over khushi...

and khushi will believe him...

Originally posted by: sweetlife

nice story.. continue soon

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

hope he wins her over soon

Originally posted by: indhuza

awesome...man

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Its a amazing story just read al updates one go realy lov arnav payal bonding aman is tru friemd overall want to say that u r wonderful writer u potray lead character butifuly eargarly waiting hw arnav kushi lov story progres thanx for pm

Originally posted by: rockingsoni

Good one...

Originally posted by: anabiya1

Must say ... aawsom story...
Luvd it ...
Thwnx for da pm dear ...

Originally posted by: __blossom__

Great story!

Read all the parts in one go...loved it!

Khushi's aunty ji and jiji are sooo cute! :D

It's a pleasure to read arnav and payal's scenes they ahve a relationship that i always long for :)

I hope arnav is able to break all khushi's walls

I love how straight forward arnav was to his family about he marrying khushi:D

Originally posted by: canapoem

Just read the entire story. Very cute. Does Khushi not remember anything about Arnav and his family????

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love the update

Love arShi sweet moment

waana read more

Plz continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: suji5

nice update

Originally posted by: katj

Lovely update..
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update so cute arnav was missing her loved how he stopped when he saw her and khushi was talking to herself that was so cute love how she she kept talking and fight with her inner thought loved how she started bossing him around and he liked it awesome update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: DIYA_21

I read this story from the beginning today...
I cried to read Khushi's pain..
I want kill Parmila with my bare hands..
Arnav's arrival worked like a magic in Khushi's life...
Hope Arnav's love soon break Khushi's shell and bring the old Khushi...

Originally posted by: gangsu

nyc update

Originally posted by: october2

Thanks for the pm dear, it was a good update.loved kushis monolouge. Arnav is quiet good at convincing people.hmmm good to see a caring kushi.would love to read more...its a wonderful story👏

Originally posted by: namita11

Nice..
Loved khushis self convo

Originally posted by: sudhareddy

Chaverah The Ray Of The Dawn is wonderful ff⭐️.

I am glad at least I came to know of this beautiful ff after 8 updates.

I read all updates in one go.

Prologue - Arnav received a call from nani and she said that his strength, guide and mentor, Sashi was no more and that too 5 years back. Nani told she too found out about this when she met Sashi's wife's behaviour towards her is not good so she enquired about his family . Arnav said he is coming back next day. Arnav remembered Khushi.

Part 1 - Loved how Khushi remembered her bauji's words. So Parimala is Khushi's step mother and Reah and siya are her step sisters. Khushi prepared breakfast for them and they will sleep till 8. Love how Khushi gave parata to paper boy, how she prepared breakfast for her neighbour Mrs Gloria. Her step sisters wear very short dresses and said to Khushi that she is wearing stupid dress. Loved how Khushi thought about her sisters dresses. Her step mother😡 and step sisters😡 ill treated her...I felt sad for Khushi ( I remembered Cinderella when read about step-mom and step-sisters). Her step mother ordered to change her wardrobe and prepare dinner and make table and go out from there and she don't want Khushi around her guests. Loved the bonding of Khushi and Gloria, CEo of private art gallery and loved how she understands Khushi...loved her so much👏. Loved how Khushi and Johnny bonded as brother and sister👏. Loved the way Gloria enquired and concerned about what is going in Khushi's house and how Khushi wanted to safeguard her Bauji's house and all the memories in every nook of the house. Arnav got investigate about Khushi🤗.

Part 2 - wow Khushi did masters in art and painting. Arnav came back after 12 years and loved all his family members Nani, Anjali, Mami, Aakash and Shyam (Hoping he is positive character)👏. Arnav wanted to go to Khushi as stranger and if everything turns right he will get her as bahu of the house👍🏼. Loved how family members supported Arnav🤗. Loved how you wrote about both Khushi and Arnav staring sky and twinkling stars one needs help before breaking down and other is going to come for her. You are making me to fall over your story Arnav again👏.

Part 3 - Loved the bonding of Arnav and Payal, who is direct employee to him, like sister and Aakash girlfriend and to be wife😊. Arnav wanted expand his business all over India and he is searching for suitable place. Payal came with 2 options and one of that is Manali and they finalised Manali. Loved how Arnav teased Payal and their conversation😆. Loved how you connected Payal with Gloria her aunt and Khushi her best friend and sister. Loved how Arnav said about Khushi and how Payal felt happy for her friend🤗. Arnav said Payal that he needed her in all this. Loved the way Khushi and Payal talked on phone and Arnav's desperation hearing Khushi's voice. Loved how Arnav determined to win the heart of his love and to give everything she deserves and loved the way Arnav promised himself👏.

Part 4 - The whole part of Khushi's dream you wrote very beautifully it shows how Khushi saw someone who has chocolate brown eyes who helped her and said listen to her heart🤗. I felt sad for Khushi the way she was praying her Maa to make the dream and guide her😭. Loved how Arnav's whole family was there in the morning at 3.30 to say good bye to him😆. Loved Arnav and Shyam conversation regarding Anjali😆. How whole family wanted him to take care of himself and Khushi. Loved the way arnav called his nani as his girlfriend😉 and the way she gave Arnav's Maa jewellery to him and told to give it to Khushi👍🏼. Loved how Arnav and Payal talked about Khushi and Arnav winning her heart. Arnav and Payal reached Manali at Gloria's house. Khushi collied with Arnav and when she is about to fall he held her...obviously Arnav is to be there where Khushi falls.

Part 5 - Arnav stunned beyond belief because, for whom he came she is in his arms, felt same warmth in his heart even after so many years, they didn't meet from the time they become adults even though she knows he has chocolate brown eyes😲. Khushi fainted and Arnav scared and took her to room and Payal found out Khushi fainted because she didn't ate from 2 days. Loved the concern of Arnav for Khushi and how he shouted at Payal. Loved how Gloria asked Payal and known reason for a rich person staying at their place and felt respect and proud for Arnav and thanked god for sending Arnav for Khushi👍🏼. Loved how Gloria saw gentleness, concern , love and promise for Khushi in Arnav gestures❤️. Arnav fell in love with the KHushi, who herself living in hell and she is excited to make others feel heaven, smiles always in any situation, twinkle in her eyes and love in her words. Khushi cried in Payals arms saying she was tired of acting happy and hoping better days😭. Loved how Arnav cries for Khushi's state and promised himself that he loves her completely and madly and he will make her as his and he won't allow any one to come close to her and to give her joy, safety, warmth, contentment, laughter, colours and Love🥳.

Part 6 - Loved how Payal asked Arnav to do something or anything to bring back Khushi to normal and he promised her and said he loves Khushi. Loved convo of Gloria and Arnav at break fast and he secretly wished for Khushi to look at him and how Khushi asked did he ask for something making him shock😲. Loved Arnav's mantra ONE STEP A TIME. Loved the way Khushi spoken freely with Arnav who never shared anything about her with any one😳. Loved how in the morning seeing Khushi in garden Arnav whispered her name and how she turned and saw him and loved how both saw rising sun together.

Part 7 - Loved whole part and convo of Arnav and Payal where he saw her in Tweety night suit😆. Arnav and Aman talked about Khushi's past of how Sashi married to Parimala and how she and her daughter's made Khushi life as hell and she suffered and didn't made her bauji know about this and how after her bauji death she is still living in that house to safeguard the house😭 and how Arnav blamed himself for Khushi's condition😭 and how Aman comforted him and encouraged him and said Khushi will surely fall in love with Arnav but she needed more time for her wounded heart to heal👏. Arnav wanted to fix cameras because he wanted to see every angel of Gupta Mansion and he wanted to know everything happened around there👍🏼. Khushi didn't tell anything about her to Payal but she wanted to meet Payal and make herself sure that nothing actually triggered in Payal clever brain regarding true about her reality in mansion👍🏼. Loved the part where Khushi said to Arnav about the lunch she brought for her jiji and him. How he held her and how he desperately wanted to hug her and kiss her😉😳. Loved how he said her that they missed her at breakfast and they shall meet at dinner and Khushi heart beat is Dhak Dhak.

Part 8 - Arnav had to work whole night for an deal and Aman know Arnav tired not only Physically but emotionally too and he needs Khushi🤗.

Loved how Khushi talked with herself and scolded herself for falling for Arnav😳 and thinking she is not suitable for him.

Loved how Khushi hearing her name from Arnav slipped her step and how he held her. Loved how Arnav felt happy thinking Khushi waited for him at night at dinner.

Loved how Khushi concerned for Arnav Knowing he worked whole night without eating anything and there is no one at home and loved how she took him to dhaba for breakfast and how she told him to take rest at Gloria art gallery rest room loved Arnav felt happy seeing Khushi concern for him.

Khushi was hesitated to come with Arnav in his car but loved how Arnav made her sit in car with him making a deal👍🏼 and how Khushi praised Arnav😳.

Waiting for next update to see how their love story will progress.

Originally posted by: niya55

Awsm updat

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

good...

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay

Loved the way they r warming up o each other.

Eager for the next update.

Originally posted by: ragvir.fan

lovely story ...

khushi

s step mom and sisters are so bad ...

gloriya is so loving ...

payal a true sister and friend...

arnav a perfect partner...

loved the story.

looking forward...

Originally posted by: bhagyathara

read in a go .its such a nice work .love the arnav here and feeling very bad for khushi.

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI

awesome updt

sorry for late reply,due to some technical problm i was not able to connect my net

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Amazin update chavi..m fallin fr arnav more n more lyk khushi..control hii ni honda hai kya kare!!
😊 😃