ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1)

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Khushi's suffering is very sad. though Arnav wants to take things slowly, I hope its not too slow.

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Finally Khushi's feeling is developing for Arnav and it is shown by her face..
Arnav's patient is showing fruit...
Waiting for next soon..
Hope Khushi now don't go in her shell..

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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Chaverah read all d chapters till 9A&B and dats d reason couldn't comment earlier wen received pms 4 previous chapter It's About Time

. Sorrry Sorrry Lakhoon Sorrry, Extremely Sorrry I'm Sorry 2

. Now coming to d updates 😊 .

Chaverah it was so heart felt chapter's till 8th chapter. Really felt sad and even made us cry seeing d pain and deep hurt were its even impossible to get healed . No human would survive dis harsh life which is equal to a death .

Errr made poor girl to do all house chore to d death of her to make Khushi herself to leave d house so dat witch can demolish it into a resort and even used her lust to gain d power to get d property in her name and did very best dat khushi wouldn't dare to claim her rights in court .

ASR has indeed very wrong of not contacting Guptas for 5 long yrs wen ASR himself had all d power to break his enemies , but didnot even once consider to see wat has gone wrong in these yrs.

Loved how ASR was trying his best to bring back d old Khushi from her shell and Payal knows how to trigger d right string to make khushi feel dat its about Arnav she was talking without mentioning his name You Go Girl

wen Arnav himself was protraiting a Prince Charmings role fantasticly to get into her heart oblivious to her You Go Boy

Update soon Chaverah, can't wait to see how Arnav is going to be successful in his mission to bringing back his old khushi and destroying d witch's in Gupta Mansions. Thanks a lot 4d pm buddy Thank You

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Beautifully written...

Khushi went through a lot..

Its high time she gets love from her prince charming...

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Beautiful story!!!!!!!
Sad for Kushi..hope Arnva gets her out of that hell very soon...

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Awesome update...
Just loved it...
Continue soon...

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Lovely story of yours..
Thanks for the PM

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Another beautiful update well done a lot has been hidden from her hope she won't feel betrayed when she find s out the truth love how she keeps reacting to his words amazing update thanks for the pm