ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1)

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Awesome story dear... read all part in 1 go...

U wrote it brilliantly... even i love the concept of ur stories...

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

hope he wins her over soon

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Its a amazing story just read al updates one go realy lov arnav payal bonding aman is tru friemd overall want to say that u r wonderful writer u potray lead character butifuly eargarly waiting hw arnav kushi lov story progres thanx for pm

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anabiya1

@anabiya1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Must say ... aawsom story...
Luvd it ...
Thwnx for da pm dear ...

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Great story!

Read all the parts in one go...loved it!

Khushi's aunty ji and jiji are sooo cute! :D

It's a pleasure to read arnav and payal's scenes they ahve a relationship that i always long for :)

I hope arnav is able to break all khushi's walls

I love how straight forward arnav was to his family about he marrying khushi:D

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Just read the entire story. Very cute. Does Khushi not remember anything about Arnav and his family????

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Hey dear

Love the update

Love arShi sweet moment

waana read more

Plz continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Lovely update..
Thanks for the PM

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

loved the update so cute arnav was missing her loved how he stopped when he saw her and khushi was talking to herself that was so cute love how she she kept talking and fight with her inner thought loved how she started bossing him around and he liked it awesome update thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

I read this story from the beginning today...
I cried to read Khushi's pain..
I want kill Parmila with my bare hands..
Arnav's arrival worked like a magic in Khushi's life...
Hope Arnav's love soon break Khushi's shell and bring the old Khushi...