INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Omg! That was such a beautiful ending...

Loved it dear !

It was an amazing story !

I really don't know what more to say...

*sigh*

All good things come to an end...and now i feel really bad that it ended.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Wow, this story was quite something. But what I took from it was redemption for a good man who made a terrible mistake.. and salvation for a woman who has suffered at the hands of her own people in the worst possible manner.

Arnav needed to forgive himself and come out of the dark abyss that was his life.. and Khushi has to find love.. something worth living for. Their chemistry was natural and effortless.. yet they had to work their way past several hardships in order to be together. Take the leap of faith.. and I am so glad they did.

They are two people who deserved a happy ending.. and now they have it. 😊 Really enjoyed the story Jenny :) I also really appreciate the fact that you took time to finish the story despite your AD being so very busy. Thanks so much! 🤗

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-UnknownSoul-

@-UnknownSoul-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Really loved the as :)
Very different though!
I forever hate SMJ 😡
But lovely end 😃
I'm so sad that you're going 😔
Take care :) love you

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#514

one word beautiful...loved it ...i really don't want this to end...jenny i want one ff from u... g8 hug for u...

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Great ending! I'm so glad that it ended on a happy note. They both have got a bit of peace of mind now with eachother and can carry on living which they both seem to have stopped.

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anuprika

@anuprika

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#516

When she tenderly touchd his face and told i really like you..
I was sooo touchd
always love your writing
i lovd this union of two equally scard souls

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

awsumm loved it

thanks for pm

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#518

Fantastic !!

Beautiful ending..

I am going to miss you in IF..

Even the wait for your updates were exciting...

Hope you will come back with another fantastic Arshi FF after the break

Edited by sreemeera - 12 years ago

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

A happy ending. Good that he returned.

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Kiran

@sana27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#520

Awsomee update!!
Firstly i m feeling so sad that dis is last part...
Coming to update..
I was feeling bad for khushi..she was suffering so much..she doesnt getting job...she was hungry..tired..
N Arnav get a hard slap from khushi..well he deserved that..
Arnav was hard trying to persuade khushi..asking for forgiveness..he didnt give up easily..n i love that.!!!!
Finally they both r together...
I think now epilouge will come after ur break..will be waiting for it..
Abt ur break..will comment on bye bye note thread..