INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

emotional end but loved it

i hope this is not your last story

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Loved d chapter
Come back soon will miss u:(
The update was great
Their love for each other even after all the scars is so overwhelming
Thanks a ton
Will miss u

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khizzi

@khizzi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Poor khushi and thanks for the update ;)

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Awesome ending
Wish u didn't have to go
But I guess this is life everything comes to an end eventually.
Loved the update
Thanx for the pm

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

awesome ending loved it beautiful story

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

A beautiful story, well written. Thanks for the pm.

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

amaaaziing update
loved all the emotions yu portrayed,,arnav's desperation and khushi's anger
glad that arnav stopped her in time
now they can be together and heal each other
this has got to be one of my favourite ss
will miss yur works

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

It was the perfect ending Jen.

Loved it.

You have proved to yourself and to your readers that you are the master of the art of writing.

You can write every genre and write it well.

One could feel Khushi's helplessness here.

Her hunger and need for money.

And her love for Arnav and her hurt.

And her hopelessness!

And then Arnav came as her saviour.

But she rejected him.

But then their love for each other won and the two unhappy souls found succour in each other.

Beautifully written Jen.

It has been a great ride through this one year knowing you and reading your work.

Wish you luck and do hope you will keep in touch.

And please do come back amongst us soon.

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

Oh no, you ended the story!

perfect ending, though I wished you would've continued more.

My heart was aching to see Khushi in such a helpless state. I was beseeching plz, don't make her a s**t. When Arnav came at the right time for her rescue I sighed a relief. she was vulnerable, disgruntled, but some strange feelings of love for him still existed in the dark crevice of her heart. so unknowingly she was expecting him.

On the other hand Arnav was in compunction. When he came to his parental home, his granny made him realized more of his feelings for Khushi. After knowing the truth of her innocence, he repented to the core. his contrition killed him. He realized, he tried to rectify his mistakes,he surrendered and vanquished her.

Can we expect a prologue?

thanks for all the PM.

Edited by sohara - 11 years ago

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#500

A perfect ending for a beautiful story. You have portrayed the emotions of both Arnav and khushi in such a beautiful way it felt like I was watching the characters enact it .

Hats off to you girl your story took us to diffrent genres and I really enjoyed reading all of them.

Thank you for sharing your work and sending the pm. I really appreciate it.

Hope to see you soon 😊