An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED)

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rith123

@rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

1. I tried staying awake. I really did. And then I just couldn't. :/ What can I say, like someone else I fell asleep at 10.30 :(
2. Also, RAMANCHI! Dream sequence? So so very disappointed.
3. But, that update. WOW.
4. He doesn't believe her. Why? Also, we don't know her past. Still. And here I was thinking, we'll know her past, Arnav will be like it's the past, doesn't matter and then they will get down to it. Sigh :/
5. Why is he being so stubborn and bull headed? Why can't he use his doctor wala brains and realise that she is telling him the truth. Whatever the truth might be. What is it? I don't know if I have it in me to wait.
6. But, I will.
7. This update was so beautifully written. I honest to God felt like I was a part of what was happening. like I was there. Like a fly on the wall.
8. And these cliff hangers? WHY???
9. I just can't function normally after I read any of these updates. Mostly because I'm constantly thinking about what could happen. And every single time my mind is blown. In a good way of course.
10. So much lowe is coming for this story and for you right now.
11. kscbsdoihcwpoe. kuhodhcoe.hduhjsdm;d
12. For all the feelz this story evokes in me, please check #11.
13. Brilliant update :D
14. Stopping at 14, 'cause it's children's day. :D

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Wonderful update! So i'm gussing that she is not well too...or may be dying😭..she went to doctor for treatment or somthing...😭

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Updated my comments for chapter 4 here 😊

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Res for Chapter 5

~Edit~

My, my, my , this is such a mystery what is it about Khushi or what Khushi wrote in the letter that had Arnav change so drastically and not believe her at all?? Does it have anything to do with Akash?

Now they parted ways

Oh the dream - I first thought it was her past and then thinking who the guy would be (almost thought it was Akash)?? Then she said, 'Arnav' had me all confused untill he woke up from it 😉 And Khushi is having the same dream too 😛 These two are 'unbelievable'..!!

But they are at an impasse, Arnav doesn't believe her because he thinks he will loose her if he does and she won't give in unless he believes her..!! So he starts to Seduce her? 😛

Finally he spilled the beans that he loved her 😊

But she ran away, again!!

What's happening in the Blue room?

Will you give out a prize if any one guesses it correctly 🤪 (This moment is the queen of clifhangers!!)

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Aakhir uss letter me aisa kya hai?? And the whole teaser was just a dream!!!😆 Not too disappointed as I felt it might be one.
I loved how you kept the content of the letter a secret and yet so much happened and after the last encounter between Arnav and Khushi, I am really really intrigued to know what is the horrifying secret about khushi's past that Arnav is choosing to disbelieve? Is she fatally ill or something? Everything is so mysterious...
Loved the updates.