An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED)

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Ggaaahhh! I'm not known for my patience...but this story us making me mad!! All the clifhangers...and the passion and heat is driving me insane! What is Khushi's secret?? What is Khushi doing in the blue room??? Aaahhh!

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

great updates! I'm so anxious to know what Khushi's secret is, and why can't they be together because of it?! You're one of the few authors who I can continue reading even though you give so many cliff-hangers! Because in the end their always worth it and I know waiting for the next chapter, it will be worth it! Brilliant story!! I can't wait for chapter 6 and see what the big secret is! I hope it's not something like that their half-related or something, or maybe she was Akash's girlfriend?? Ahh can't wait! Great, brilliant story!

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Love the mystery behind Khushi... I did get frustrated as I could not guess the content of her letter...

But Arnav's emotions his struggle... Khushi's struggle and helplessness... OF COURSE...UR STYLE OF WRITING... Just MIND BLOWING...

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

All I can say is that each update is better than the previous one and you are building up the tension and suspense - I see that from all the responses you have from your fans so far :-)
It looks like Arnav does not want to believe what is in the letter because if he does, he'll lose her. It must be something in her past but related to his in some way to affect any future relationship with her? Can't wait to see what the mysterious letter is all about !

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

😲 Have yet to comment for the last chapter ...

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Very well written

The secrecy hasn't unfolded yet

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter

As usual, fantabulous work from you

Thx for the PM

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Unreserved on page 58: Comment

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

I shall begin with the part which was clear and then move on to the obscure ones.

There's a reason why I have always maintained that your story should be read chapter by chapter; reading it together is going to take away the essence of anticiption that builds into the mind of a reader like a crescendo which only subsides once the revelation hits onto him/her like an unexpected explosion.

Aranv's frustrations and his resultant actions made me want to rip out something...so potent and tangible it was. If ever my PC sufferes from damages, you should expect a bill of remuneration😆 The fantasy (ramanchi😡) was better left a fantasy because puting it into reality seems like an impossible task. If Arnav's sexual frustrations didn't drive me up the wall, it was the absence of the letter or a better reference to the contents of the letter that did it for me. What was in it that has made Arnav consider Khushi a liar? And despite it being so, why can he not stay away from her?

Avanti and I discussed on the same and it was her view that there might be a supernatural angle to it. Indeed if it is so, then everything will becpome clear and it will also make me understand Khushi's words better; after all knowing that a person loves her has to induce the best feeling but that it does not for Khushi makes me wonder if there's any truth to that theory. If only we could source the letter and get to read it.

The wait till the next chapter is goign to be the longest one and I hope we get answers (at least a few) on Saturday/Sunday.

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bc1972

@bc1972

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

What a cliff hanger! You have seduced us totally - you give us such long updates and we are left wanting more!

I am ruling out akash gf and illness sine neither of those truths are "strange" as Kay puts it.

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

Oh a cliff hanger again . Agree they make the story quiet interesting n inquisitive to know. But so eager to know the secret about khushis past. So waiting desperately as always .

The update was awesome

N Thnks for pm