An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED) - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
that was so unfair...
and that was a dream...i expected it..
but again a cliffhanger..
update soon...pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful chapter!
You relly know how to keep us on the edge.such long chapters and not even a hint to decode the mystery and yet the story is so gripping.
Fantastic job:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
ZOMG I also realised,
When M read da title,
M tink of this:


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=5XjpV9n25Yk[/YOUTUBE]


N dan Entertainment Entertainment Entertainment dun 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
What the hell happend in khush's past? Realy cant wait 4 saturday..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Awesome chapter! What a gifted writer you are...I was holding my breath while reading both the parts.. I am unable to guess what khushi's past could be... Can't wait or the next chapter!
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^That's me J, I will have to call you the queen of cliff hangers from now on as well!
What a chapter woman, as cliche as it sounds you never cease to amaze me! I have never been this curious or impatient to unravel this mystery that you have build! *sighs

RES, I will be back! :-)


Ah J I am still not over the chapter! As I sit here to update my comment I recall and feel the whole intensity of Arshi's situation all over again. You mademoiselle did wonders with Arnav and Khushi's passionate encounters in this chapter. First I was a tad scared with Arnav's reaction to the letter and KHushi's hurt but somewhere within the chapter you gave me hope again that all might be well in the world of arshi after all. Let us not even talk about that dream sequence, shall we?... because you already killed us with that in the teaser that you provided us. Though we were hoping it won't be a dream sequence, it fit perfectly well within the chapter as just that. Besides you gave us a super passionate moment with Arnav catching Khushi off guard and having his way with her with that that beautifully described kiss! 😳J at this point all I can say to you is that you put all those Mills & Boons writers to shame when it comes to describing Arshi's magical moments with just the perfect amount of intensity & sensuality doubling/ tripling the effects of their connection/chemistry.

As much as I was enjoying reading about this pull that both particularly arnav can't seem to let go of, I couldn't help but feel for Khushi because all she did was pour her heart and soul into the letter and her Arnav ji only made a mockery of it by not believing it. What is worse is he accuses her of having an ulterior motive behind her lies. And when he realizes that he can't get over her, he expresses his want for her; he tells her he wants to share some kind of physical intimacy with her despite the fact that he doesn't believe her. He almost made an entry in my bad books till you redeemed him J! After seeing Khushi in the party and in her maroon Sari instead of putting his plan of seduction into action, he actually spoke to her sincerely and it is only here that we got a glimpse of just why he reacted to letter the way he did. The letter scared him, scared him about the fact that it meant him & Khushi couldn't be together! ( I Want to know what is in that letter dammit! *sniff *sniff) So he reacted the only way he could, deny it and call it lies rather than believe everything that is in the letter. My heart broke for them both here, I didn't want to be too sad though because I know it is you writing this and our happy walla ending is guaranteed so I will not jump the gun and draw my tragic conclusions & will try to not let go off the cliff till the weekend!

Ps. Did I mention that I loved the chapter! I probably don't need to say it, yeah? Because you already know this!

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow what an update ! Anxious to know what is Khushi's past and if it is related to Arnav since he is not ready to believe her inspite of reading the letter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
ExP,

When you said you love cliffhangers, I didn't expect this much..😆 You are holding the suspense, isn't it?...After reading 5 part 1, I was expecting the secret of the letter to be revealed in 5 part 2.. Girl, I can hear your evil laughter... sigh!

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Posted: 11 years ago
the update was good, although i was expecting revelation of khushi's truth...
Now you will keep us in suspense for 3/4 days...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Had been away for a while and I get back to read a new story from u :) awesome writing skills.. As I read the lines, I start to picturize.. Its too gud..
What is it in the letter????❓
I aint too gud at commenting, but ya this is all i have to say - AWESOME... pls cont :)

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