ArHi FF: The Same Coin#7

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

That was perfect in so many ways life is anyway not full of sunshine and rainbows...the ending you gave mass with a continuity...beautiful as a l ways...hope to see you pen another beauty soon...cheers maya

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

A brilliant ending!! I went back to re-read the whole thing and all I can is that it's going to be one of those stories I go to when I need a laugh and entertainment.

So many wonderful relationships!! I loved Khushi and her interactions with everyone: with Preeto because Preeto and Khushi together in the same conversation is definitely sarcasm and wit on overdrive; Khushi and Arnav...they're both just big emotional softies with each other at the end of it all aren't they?? There were some surprises: Akash and Shahira after so many years still into each other, Payal and Akash being such good friends... Some were not surprising: NK and Lavanya..I'm amazed they hung on for so long.

I loved the glimpse you gave us with the epilogues: just another 'today', but so many what-ifs were bound to surface. What if Akash had pursued Payal, no matter what??

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#303

What an awesome ending! And hilarious too!

I loved how Arnav and Khushi are good friends and still tease each other. Preeto was fabulous as usual...The way she was talking about her forgetful husband was very endearing.

Some people do have commitment issues. So Lavanya-NK is not really an exception. Also, there are a lot of people, who unfortunately can't express their love for each other and end up losing them just like Akash and Sahira.

My favorite thing about this SS were the bonus/excerpts from KKG's diary. And the excerpts from the diary at the end of the epilogue was THE BEST!!

And who said college students are immature?! Ask them to read your FFs if they think so. But then again, not every college student has your maturity.😊 Now that is supposed to be a complement. 😃

Please do start another Arhi FF/SS.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Semanti...flawless...fabulous...👏

It was an awesome...story...that was just an amazing work of Art...

Thx..for your note...and thx for writing...you Rock!

Hopefully more Surprises from your side...whenever time permits and possible!

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

It was such a treat to read! Thanks for the email!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Loved the epilogue was real beautiful

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Beautiful end...I read the entire TSC twice till now...it is a beautiful story...Thanks for a beautiful story...Looking forward for a new story...thanks for the PM

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#308

the final end:( although obviouslly its a masrerpiece( sigh i will miss raizada vs gupta so much...their dynamics are still the same as college and the sparks will never end!

akash shahira...they could have made more of an effort, both were determined to be casual and never considered it

payal aman...i was sure they would fizzle out because of the age gap and payals timidity but they surprised me

nk lavanya- impasse, he wants more, she is fine with status quo

amazing story!

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#309

That was brilliant! I absolutely loved reading this story. Took me back to my college and Uni days. Really liked all the characters. This story certainly me laugh!

Edited by sakhter90 - 11 years ago